Date: 09/30/2007 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
That last bit? With the bus driver? For some bloody reason it made me cry. Real tears. I could see it, the fear and desperation and terror that Buffy was feeling and I'm sure the bus driver picked up on it. Some great writing there.
Date: 11/24/2006 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am completely intrigued with your story from the first couple chapters I've read so far. The idea that Buffy, in her total desperation for relief from the loveless abusive hell that is her home life, would latch onto a years-old passing 'promise' made by a man she'd never met before and would probably never see again is just heartbreaking and totally believeable to me. You've written her despair and her frantic doubts convincingly enough to draw me and in make me believe it. I very much like the story so far and also appreciate your frequent updating. Thanks for sharing your story with us, and please keep updating frequently.
Date: 11/09/2006 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
YES!!! she made it! yikes, that was suspensful! I was on the edge of my seat! yay for nice bus drivers :-)
Date: 10/31/2006 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
great update
Date: 10/31/2006 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm sooooo glad she made it! I hope she gets there alright! Update soon please!
Date: 10/31/2006 - 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ah I see, it's when you just have time to go to the funeral; it makes more sense for William being there.
Buffy has everything planned out. Hopefully all will go well. Her living with Hank and her new stepmother (and ~sister) doesn't do her good.
A risky plan.. especially simply go to Spike, not phoning first. Hopefully explaining everything will convince Spike better. Uh-huh.. Buffy is telling what's on her mind! A first in years... but risky if the plan doesn't function. She'll be punished.
Phew! That was tight.. almost Hank got her. Seems he has given up for now :)
Date: 10/31/2006 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm really enjoying this story. Great first chapters;) Wonder if Hank will maybe follow the bus ...? That would be really bad for Buffy so I hope he won't look for her- at least for now, because I have the feeling he'll cause her even more trouble in he future..well, if he will I hope that Buffy will be with Spike in that time and Spike'll deal with =) Looking forward to next chapter!
Date: 10/31/2006 - 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
God, Hank is evil in this; I wonder why he hates her so? Poor Buffy. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 10/31/2006 - 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
great chapter! cant wait till next update!
Date: 10/31/2006 - 10:52 am Title: Chapter 2
wow, more, more, more, please!! I LOVED this chapter, Hank can be so scary sometimes and I was so happy when she punched Harmony :)) Cant wait for some spuffy moments, please update soon!
Date: 10/31/2006 - 09:12 am Title: Chapter 2
This fic is really good, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 10/31/2006 - 08:13 am Title: Chapter 2
I just read the first two chapters, and i'm really enjoying the story so far. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Date: 10/31/2006 - 05:23 am Title: Chapter 2
I like it!!!!!!!. Great first chapter. Can't wait to read more
Date: 10/31/2006 - 05:16 am Title: Chapter 2
great chapter.
Date: 10/31/2006 - 04:49 am Title: Chapter 2
loved it sooooo very very much. i have a feeling that this will not be the last time that buffy sees her father. he'll probably be making trouble for her some time in the future of this story. please post soon. great job