Date: 09/30/2007 - 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
See? He just does what's right. She knew going to him would be smart. And he's gonna protect her from everything. Including that evil father of hers.
Date: 04/22/2007 - 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
So far i must say im really enjoying this story! It has a really fresh feeling to it...
Date: 11/25/2006 - 04:25 am Title: Chapter 4
How clever of you to walk your story through what you already know and what you can find out through your "connections" (giggle - i mean the bad--assed bartender in your life). Another excellent chapter. I thought the last one was good but this one is...poetic almost. The story is really coming alive now.
Date: 11/09/2006 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yay! things are going swimmingly! I guess I can't expect them to stay that way, but it's nice all the same...
Date: 11/03/2006 - 05:06 am Title: Chapter 4
absolutely loved it
Date: 11/03/2006 - 12:10 am Title: Chapter 4
ooohh it's getting good !!!!
Date: 11/02/2006 - 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ah good Spike had to go out now. Then Buffy hadn't wait any longer. Sounds as if Spike is a full time bartender... and this place sounds interesting. And Cordelia sounds like a potential help. (I liked the background info here.)
Loved reading the chapter :)
Date: 11/02/2006 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
Nice chapter. Can't wait to see what Spike decide's to do about Buffy.
Date: 11/02/2006 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great update. It's good to see some other characters and I'm so pleased that Spike/William has a big bad persona! It'll be interesting to read some of his backstory.
Date: 11/02/2006 - 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
this is really good so far! keep it up, it's going great
Date: 11/02/2006 - 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm glad they met again! I can't imagine what would have happened to Buffy if she didn't find him! Update soon please!
Date: 11/02/2006 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!! :D
Date: 11/02/2006 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
aww I'm so glad to see you update every day! Once again, great chapter! Cant wait to read more!
Date: 11/02/2006 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
STILL LOVING TH ESTORY THANKS
Date: 11/02/2006 - 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
Loved the chapter. Looking forward to the next one=)
Date: 11/02/2006 - 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
I enjoyed reading about Spike's evening before he found Buffy. Can't wait to find out what happens at Spike's apartment. Great chapter!
Date: 11/02/2006 - 10:48 am Title: Chapter 4
love the story, cant wait for more.
Date: 11/02/2006 - 08:36 am Title: Chapter 4
I like this story; you have all the original characters but in very different roles and you've put it somewhere new, but very familiar to us. Look forward to your next chapter.
Date: 11/02/2006 - 07:06 am Title: Chapter 4
Just caught up with this story, really good so far. :)
Date: 11/02/2006 - 06:26 am Title: Chapter 4
loved it sooooo much. wonder if spike will be able to get the truth out of buffy. hmmmm. great job. more please and soon!!!