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Reviewer: Nia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 12

*sighs*

Sweet, honest, hot, tender, hovering-just-at-the-edge of exploding. Gah. Good stuff, sweets, really good stuff.

Reviewer: Mamasan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 12

I know it's probably becoming a bore for you by now; however, I must say, once again ~ Bravo my beautiful girl! It was HOT HOT HOT!!! Heh...

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2006 - 07:26 am Title: Chapter 12

yup, it's that staying on the same page part that I think is gonna be an issue--not that any of us readers mind, of course ;-) excellent chapter--absolutely loving this fic!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2006 - 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 12

Hot Hot Hot! And even more Hot! Great chapter. It was even better because they didn't do too much. Ah the lovely tension!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2006 - 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 12

Loved it :)
First Buffy meeting two new people that want to help her too, then her going through the motions because of the thought of her age and Spike with another woman (Buffy's POV), then back at home that Spike voiced that he is attracted to her :)

Reviewer: synonumous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2006 - 04:22 am Title: Chapter 12

yay it was good! nothing wrong with the story at all your a good writer! update soon please >_

Reviewer: Bren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2006 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter 12

I love how sexy,yet sensitive Spike is ! {;ease update soon !!!!

Reviewer: Marie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2006 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter 12

another great chapter! I cant wait to see what happens next !

Reviewer: callmeducks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 12

wow, really like this. a lot. spuffiness makes me smile. and i like the story too, kudos to you and your magical brain.

Reviewer: Spuffy_obsessed Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 12

Aww. He's being so kind at the fact that she's still young and innocent but still being that alternately sexy side of him. Yum! great chapte! You have to update soon, I want to see what Anya might have Buffy buy because I know Anya sees something between them two.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 12

I hope they stay on the same page too! Update soon please!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 12

Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more. :D

Reviewer: gaillee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 12

I just stumbled into this today out of curiosity...Whew! While I usually don't like all human AU, this is really well written. And hot!? I will be watching eagerly for updates. Thanks for several enjoyable moments.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 12

Steamy! I think I'd die if a guy (especially a Spike-shaped guy) whispered those kinds of things in my ear while he was hovering over me. *sighs dreamily* lol, I'm pathetic. Good chapter! :)

Reviewer: annefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 12

ouuuu big step (well for me anyway) between Spike and Buffy. At least they know their feelings for each other. Loved it, as usual, cant wait for more!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 12

LOL ANYAS SO FUNNY!!! AND THAT WAS SO HOT BETWEEN SPIKE AND BUFFY!!! i love this story and am so happy u updated. im so glad that their relationship is progressing and that theyre getting closer. i really hope that it continues and that they become a couple. i was so glad that buffy liked xander and anya and that theyre so nice to her. also i really hope that everything works out and that xander, anya and spike protect her from hank if he comes looking for her. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx

Reviewer: Dana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 12

OOHH Very Hot! I really liked this chapter, I'm glad Spike isn't resisting any more! I really like Anya, most stories have her too over the top, in this one she is a good balance! I am really enjoying this story! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 11:55 am Title: Chapter 12

Now that I am officially delurked AND you have written THE best chapter ever I guess i will be reviewing each chapter now. Hey, you work hard on this ... it is the least that we greedy readers can do eh?

First of all, I always adore a story with Anya in it ... her character is a gas and you have used her very effectively so far. I have a feeling that she will play an integral part in the future ... should be good since she seems to know and care for William.

Secondly, you are have really done a wonderful job of creating a very HOT and honorable, multifaceted William and a very innocent yet strong Buffy. This will be a cool realtionship (at least I am hoping so). This was an awesome chapter, one of the ones that I read twice.

Great work, You are very talented, Thank you for sharing!!!

Reviewer: Spuffygirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 10:55 am Title: Chapter 12

One word comes to mind. Hot! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter 12

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter 12

Loved it, More please.
So that is a good question is Cordelia more than just a boss, he was thinking earlier that its been to long since he woke up with a women beside him, does that mean he hasn't had one in a while or just his thinking in this chapter made it seem like he was a just get what he wanted then leave.
Wonder what they will buy on there shopping trip, I see a trip to Victoria Secrets coming on, or what will Spike tell his boss and everyone at work. What will happen to the doorman when they find he left a 16 yr old sleep out side while she was waiting for Spike.
More please.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter 12

well this chapter sorta gave me a happy too....lol. great job. loved it. more please. these two are really getting along aren't they. and gotta love that anya. she's blunt but she breaks the ice and that's always a good thing.

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:22 am Title: Chapter 12

I love this story. I'm always happy to see when a new chapter is up. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:17 am Title: Chapter 12

great update

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