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Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 14

No ball dropping at all, just the vagaries of -- well, I started to say life on the hellmouth -- *laughs* I think you know what I mean though. Sometimes the reviews are slow in coming, but never fear, you are still doing your job and writing wonderfully. I love, love this story.

Reviewer: Jeanette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2007 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 14

I'll delurk myself to say this the last chapter was brilliant and so was this one on to the next seeing as I'm on catch up again....

Reviewer: Mamasan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 14

::Holds out her arms to Jae:: "C'mere baby girl!"::Gives her a big (a REALLY big), hug and licks her nose:: A million apologies little one, I know I have been quite neglectfull! Ok - my review is as follows: As with the preceeding chapter I'm pleased with the way you're widening the scope on several different planes. The characters are becoming more real - more than sexual beings; more complex. Sorry I would blather on a bit more but got to get to the next chapter....love you!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 14

Well for my part I'm behind the updates again. :)
So Spike will get more room that he isn't so tempted any longer ;-) ?
Good that they continued to talk when Buffy got it wrong (inconvenience). But she does always the unexpected (like kissing him).
Hehe and now Spike has to tell Cordelia too. ~
And I see your reviews almost doubled *g*

Reviewer: Samantha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2006 - 04:29 am Title: Chapter 14

I'm absolutely loving this story. And it isn't uninteresting at all. Please, please keep writing. You do a wonderful job.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2006 - 04:07 am Title: Chapter 14

DON'T YU DARE STOP WRITING THIS BECAUSE OF LACK OF REVIEWS ,I FOR ONE AM READING AND LIKE IT LOTS . THE ARRANGEMENT WAS GREAT ALSO, SOMETIMES RL INTERFERS IN A READERS LIFE TOO NOT JUST A WRITERS. PEOPLE WILL READ THIS AND THEY'LL REVIEW , TRUST ME ITS A GREAT STORY, YUR VERY TALENTED.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Jo. Although, I have to ask, do you mean the fic The Arrangement because that was by another author. But, I appreciate the kind words and I am glad you are enjoying my fic. Thanks again!

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2006 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter 14

great update. still here

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 14

Not uninteresting! this is fabulous! can't speak for anyone else, but I'm gonna be with you to the end, most definitely! Excellent chapter--the chemistry between those two is perfect! congrats on the nominations!

Reviewer: Bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 14

Still here reading. Liked this chapter! Please write more soon!

Reviewer: karen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 14

i love this fic!!!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 14

HAHA. Lovin' your Cordy! Keep the updates coming!

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 14

It's not at all uninteresting! I love it! Maybe it just wasn't as cliffhangery, so people didn't feel the need to review or not. I can't remember if I did or not, I usually do, but sometimes, I just forget. Great chapter, as usual, and I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 14

No ball-droppage I can assure you! Every chapter of this has me begging for more. I adore your characters, your Spike voice is perfect and there's the ever-present cloud of evil Hank to keep one gripped further.

Please don't be despondant; I've been with you from the start and I honestly don't see that changing.

Reviewer: just another reviewer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 14

HEY! love your story..read your little plea for reviewers too lol...just letting you know ive been with oyu from the start and i loooove the story..not a thing about has gotten worse or anything..only better! keep going!

Reviewer: Spikesonlychilde Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 14

wow - we abandoned you. It totally wasn't cause it was boring! Anything but! I adore this story - I can't wait for updates. I do like The Dance Of Joy everytime there is one.

You're a very talented writer. Wish there was a 'Simply adored and loved for all of eternity' button on this review thing instead of just Liked and Disliked. It would be more fitting.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 14

So they're moving then? I hope this works out well for them. I havea feeling trouble willl be coming soon! Update soon please!

Reviewer: orchid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 14

You didn't drop the ball, the story is still great and I'm still sticking with ya! I'm interested to find out how Spike back at work will affect things. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 14

LOVE the story!!!! keep up the good work and update again soon!!!!

Reviewer: kj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 14

great story, i love it, keep going.

Reviewer: Becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 14

Hey! you're doing an awesome job but member last week was thanksgiving week so that would explain the lack of reviews (you know, people going out of town and such) but i love where your going with this! Its adorable so far how buffy is trying soo hard!!! And Spike poor thing trying to fight it! aww!lol! well update soon!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 14

loved it. i really loved it. congrats on the nominations. ummmm...i really can't understand how u lost reviews for this story cuz it's amazing. whoever isn't reviewing i'll deal with them for ya! lol. i mean, not really cuz i don't know who they are and plus i bruise like a peach. i'd keel over before the first punch is even thrown. lol. great job. please post soon. loved it bunches.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 14

Hi! I'm one of your forgetful reviewers. I mean to, but then I get distracted. I'm loving this story so far. The sexual tension is superb. I always love it when Spike has to try and hold himself back. I hope it's a long while before Hank makes an appearance though.

Reviewer: gaillee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 14

Another superb chapter. Sorry I didn't review the last one...was in a hurry that day. Love all these characters so far. Am eagerly waiting to see how the Cordelia thing goes. Loved the "channeling Giles" and the fact she didn't let him get away without a kiss. Great job!

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 14

Whoah... I wished I read this fic sooner. It's bloody brilliant! You got me hooked, so bad right now. I'm definitely keeping tabs on your story now. Normally I would've thought that this is a fast pace but oddly for your story it fit. It didn't feel out of place or like a perpetual elephant in the room - it felt oddly right. A slightly older Spike and a 16 year old Buffy. It's a tricky game to play, but you told them real nicely. By that I mean believably. I know how hard it can be to pull that kind of plot off and believe me, I'm impressed. ;)

Keep going, Jae. Thanks for sharing your story!

Reviewer: Meritamon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 14

No way!!! You're doing great. I saw this story an hour ago so thats the first review. I won't be able to review every chapter and honestly I usually don't review stories I read because I barely have time to read them. I know its bad, I would've hated it if I were an author... Whatever, I just had to say that I LOVE THIS STORY, it's GREAT, you are an AMAZING writer. Oh, and by the way congrats on the nomination!!!

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