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Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2007 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 16

That panic he's feeling is incredibly intense. And that fear, when it's realeased turns to anger, but he handled it wonderfully. Good chapter.

Reviewer: Mamasan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2007 - 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 16

Hmmn, reading over some of your reviews for this chapter I felt there was some...er...um...quibbling about Spikes reaction to Buffy's vanishing. Let me put it this way - When my daughter was about 3 years old she ran out in front of an ice cream truck; I was so stunned by the looming possibilty that she could have been hurt (or worse), that my first reaction was to swat her butt! (1 of 2 swattings she ever recieved), and then hug her to me and cry until she gasped for breath. I feel that Spike's reaction was not only understandable (I mean Buffy has by this point begun to open his emotional doors!), but also true in every sense to his character. I love the developing character of Anya, she's savvy and confident. I'm hoping that she will be there for Buffy during times of turmoil, I think she has the makings of a very good friend. ::Pouts, thinks Jae should have had Spike say "...never be JUST friends...":: ::Lobs another rose at Jae!::

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2006 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 16

YAY And there I'm able to read the update :)
No one was home? That sounds as if Buffy it out with them, a good sign I guess. But Spike still thought the worst. Good that Xander drove back this moment. And Anya was fun :)
Loved Spike taking his heart in his hands and started to tell Buffy what he sees in them, couple-wise.

Reviewer: Melissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 16

This is awesome! keep up the awesome writting.

Reviewer: margaret Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2006 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter 16

thanks, great story

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 16

Hehe...I thought she was with them! Poor Spike was freaking out! So is Buffy okay with them being boyfriend and girlfriend? I hope so! Update soon please!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 16

can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 16

He is in Loooove!!! and admitting it too... how nice. Can't wait to see (read!) her reaction...

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 16

*giggle* Together, boyfriend-girlfriend... wow, good to see he's being stronger and taking this road. Great update!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 16

Loved the way you closed the chapter. Fantastic update!

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 10:59 am Title: Chapter 16

He's brave and foolhardy at the same time, but it's almost like he's spent forever treading water and not going anywhere with anyone - and along comes Buffy. He's passionate and forthright and she's young and shy. Great combination. Will he lead and she follow, or is it the other way round? Great chapter.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 10:08 am Title: Chapter 16

This is wonderful. You're updates always put me in such a good mood!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 09:49 am Title: Chapter 16

Spike's such a little boy :) I'm really dreading when Hank sweeps into their lives; hopefully they'll have built up something he can't break before that. Oh, and can you write my into your script so I can kick Hank's ass? Just a thought... lol

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 09:44 am Title: Chapter 16

Love it, was expecting him to say lovers not boyfriend girlfriend but that works to esspecially since they have not had sex.

Reviewer: Annefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 08:45 am Title: Chapter 16

ouhhh loved, loved, loved that one and big YAY for the final scene, thanks! cant wait for more ;)

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 06:39 am Title: Chapter 16

Spike has polished off his heart and is giving it to Buffy on a silver platter. Buffy being so young and inexperienced is unaware of the huge leap of faith and love that Spike has made. I really enjoyed reading Buffy's innocent negotiations on just what their relationship is and quite frankily I can't blame her on making Spike spell out the terms of their new found relationship. It is a big deal to commit at so young an age especially when Buffy seems to have not had a boyfriend - is that right? I guess that Buffy will share all her "first's" with Spike who is a very experienced bachelor.

Great chapter - thanks for the update.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 05:11 am Title: Chapter 16

Nah, sorry, I wasn't fooled, but I am a bit surprised about something... I think Spike over-reacted just a tad. I don't mean when he was worried Hank had found Buffy, I mean after the fact, when he knew Buffy was safe. Like how he thought that she wasn't caring about his feelings by not leaving a note. She still had two hours before he was due home, why would she think she needed to leave a note? I am glad that Spike is slowly starting to admit his feelings about her, and to her. Bravo. Overall, really good chapter. =)

Author's Response: Yeah, he did over-react, but I think he knew that. I think we can both agree that Spike doesn't have the best handle on his emotions and while reason would dictate that she had just made a mistake, his overactive emotions and tendency to jump the gun would make him more prone to totally-blown-out-of-proportion behavior. Not that that is a very good excuse for acting like an ass. Thanks for your review, gypsy-jin...you smartie, you. ; - )

Reviewer: melissa g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 05:03 am Title: Chapter 16

wow great chapter. that one was so interexting and entertaining, god i just loved it. cant wait to see how see how she reponds to him sayin there boyfriend and girlfriend. love this story so much and cant wait for an update. thanks for writing.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 05:02 am Title: Chapter 16

loved it

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 04:53 am Title: Chapter 16

OMG SHE BETTER BE HAPPY ABOUT THIS!!!! i love this story so much and am so happy u updated. also im so glad that she was with xander and anya and that he was so worried about her, its shows just how much he cares. i really hope that they get together and are happy together. also i hope everything keeps working out well and that hank doesnt find her. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read the next chapter and see wat she says. thanx

Reviewer: MAc 1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 04:40 am Title: Chapter 16

Okay, still really loving this story. One thing though -- I believe the age of consent in Nevada is sixteen for girls, so in Las Vegas she wouldn't be underage. In Calif she would be. I suppose it is possible to make a case that he lured an underage girl out of state for sexual purposes and it therefore be considered a crime committed in Calif (where he lured her from -- that would be the assumption, whether true or not, for that kind of charge to be made, if it could be made), whereas if they had just met while both living in Nevada there would be no problem. Other than that quibble, I like where you've gone with the story and anxiously look forward to Buffy's answer. Thanks! :-)

Author's Response: You are correct that the legal age of consent in Nevada is 16 for both sexes and legally, Spike probably wouldn't be charged with anything if he were to be arrested. However, that being said, for the purposes of this fic you have to remember that Buffy's father could almost certainly push for a stiff penalty with his connections...not gonna go any further into than that. And you know, May-December relationships are still very taboo especially in regards to a teenage girl and an older man, so it is quite conceivable that it would cause problems even though it wasn't illegal. I appreciate your comments, Mac, and I'm glad you're still enjoying it. ~Jae

Reviewer: BLONDIEBEAR Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 04:38 am Title: Chapter 16

....always worth it. sorry 'bout that.

Reviewer: blondiebeard Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 04:37 am Title: Chapter 16

loved it. really thought buffy would have had enough sense to leave a note for spike but it was an honest mistake. loved it lots and lots. evil cliff hanger here. doesn't buffy want to be with him??? that little "oh" at the end kinda gives me the impression that she's not entirely sure. great update. please post soon. and don't worry about not posting daily. the wait for an update is /
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Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter 16

"oh"? that's her response?? she wants to, right? PLEASE let her want to!!! excellent chapter, definitely ran the gamut of all my emotions, from worrying about Buffy to emphathizing with Spike to fearing whether his possessiveness would mess them up to loving the happy Spuffy...now all we need is for her to say HELL YES!!!

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 03:48 am Title: Chapter 16

Loved it. Maybe we can get some spuffy lovin soon. hehe..

Keep up the good work.

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