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Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2007 - 07:17 am Title: Chapter 23

And Buffy, always jumping to conclusion...when will she learn???
Anyway, I hope the father is not rearing his ugly head in between them now... too early, need them to be closer!!!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2007 - 05:36 am Title: Chapter 23

I'm glad Spike decided to be honest with Buffy. Can't wait to find out what happens next! Great chapter!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2007 - 04:55 am Title: Chapter 23

spike'sbeing an ass. i mean, i understand why and love him bunches for it but he's being an ass. lol. loved it lots.more soon. great job.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2007 - 04:44 am Title: Chapter 23

YAY HE TOLD HER THE TRUTH!!!! i love this story so much and am so happy u updated. i cant believe that they got into that huge fight and am glad that they worked it out. also i cant believe that she might tell faith her secret and i hope that if she does faith can be trusted with it. i really hope that the guy isnt work9ing for hank and that buffy and spike are and stay safe. also i hope that spike and buffy keep growing cloer and that their relationship gets stronger. please update as soon as u can, cant wait to read the next chapter. thanx

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2007 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter 23

spike is doing a lot for her. At least she could be is more grateful

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 22

Very good!
i realy like the story and i didnt mind the couple of "boring" chapters as you put it.
it gives more story line...oh and the whole dry humping thing they did, very nice sometimes better then the whole sex scene...of you write it well which is exactly what you did.
Kudos!!!
but please another chapter would be greatly appreciated.

Reviewer: Mamasan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2007 - 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 16

Hmmn, reading over some of your reviews for this chapter I felt there was some...er...um...quibbling about Spikes reaction to Buffy's vanishing. Let me put it this way - When my daughter was about 3 years old she ran out in front of an ice cream truck; I was so stunned by the looming possibilty that she could have been hurt (or worse), that my first reaction was to swat her butt! (1 of 2 swattings she ever recieved), and then hug her to me and cry until she gasped for breath. I feel that Spike's reaction was not only understandable (I mean Buffy has by this point begun to open his emotional doors!), but also true in every sense to his character. I love the developing character of Anya, she's savvy and confident. I'm hoping that she will be there for Buffy during times of turmoil, I think she has the makings of a very good friend. ::Pouts, thinks Jae should have had Spike say "...never be JUST friends...":: ::Lobs another rose at Jae!::

Reviewer: Mamasan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2007 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 15

::Suspects the Author knows a bartending professional:: Lol, good use of personal knowledge luv! Very clever chapter...Argh! My heart is sinking and my tummy's in knots! Did the evil daddy swoop down reclaim her and drag her back to his foul den??? Poor Spike! Just when his heart has begun to pump warm blood again!

Reviewer: Jessie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2007 - 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

For the record, I love the Buffy series and think Joss is a genius.

I was talking on yahoo and discovered that an online friend was excited to tell me about her daughters fan fiction. I think I'm supposed to say that mommason recommended your story. I loved this story and the little personality traits still in each of the characters...it was fun to live through them again. Though I I did feel that Buffy and Spike were moving a bit fast for the week or so they'd been together. I do have a question about why Buffy's father kept calling her Elizabeth. It had me confused every time. You are an imaginative story teller and I look forward to you maybe writing something totally from your creation.

Thank you and have your mom let me know when more chapters have been added.

Jessie

Reviewer: Mamasan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 15

Great character scene; applaudable emotional crescendo

Reviewer: Mamasan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 14

::Holds out her arms to Jae:: "C'mere baby girl!"::Gives her a big (a REALLY big), hug and licks her nose:: A million apologies little one, I know I have been quite neglectfull! Ok - my review is as follows: As with the preceeding chapter I'm pleased with the way you're widening the scope on several different planes. The characters are becoming more real - more than sexual beings; more complex. Sorry I would blather on a bit more but got to get to the next chapter....love you!

Reviewer: Mamasan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 13

Simply scandalous! I love it! Your transitioning is excellent. I like the way this chapter begins to broaden the scope of the story.

Reviewer: Mamasan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 12

I know it's probably becoming a bore for you by now; however, I must say, once again ~ Bravo my beautiful girl! It was HOT HOT HOT!!! Heh...

Reviewer: Mamasan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 11

OMG I LOVE that word "Snogging"! Sorry I've been so...um, er, well...such a slacker. I love this chapter too!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 03:25 am Title: Chapter 22

Ha, LOVED Buffy's trick on Angel. Brilliant. Hope there's not too much heartache in the future because of Spike's misplaced desires to protect Buffy.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 22

Hehe.. that was fun, Buffy disturbing Angel and his plans and her having difficulties to decide what to take.
So Spike and Faith, huh? I wonder if Buffy would like her. Ah well that's bad indeed: The peeping tom was a private eye. If it was because of Hank I wonder why he found Spike so quick. Maybe he was looking for Spike indeed, Hank remembering him related to Giles.
Uh-huh.. unexpected; Faith needed help of a different kind. But I loved Spike's reaction :-D
Oops, Buffy witnessed the kiss? That didn't go so well because Buffy noticed them lying and is hurt. Maybe the truth would be good? But I'm not sure if she would try to run away.
Wow.. it got hot. :)) Still it didn'T make Buffy forgot that he was lying. She wants to find out no matter what? Uh-huh.. Spike is in trouble. ~ Loved the chapter.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 06:01 am Title: Chapter 22

WAT THE HELL, HE SHOULD JUST EXPLAIN THE SITUATION TO HER!!! i love this story so much and am so happy that u updated. i loved how she emarrassed angel it was so funny. i really hope that he just explains everything to her and that they dont break up or fight about it. also i hope that that guy doesnt work for hank and that everything works out well. please update as soon as u can, cant wait to read the next chapter. thanx

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 01:17 am Title: Chapter 22

loved it lots and lots. please post soon.

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter 22

Still really enjoying this. Thanks for the update. Oh ...and very hot!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 22

I think he should just tell her. Update soon please!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 22

I enjoyed the Buffy/Angel scene... lol! And the Spuffy lovin' was smoking hot, it was a shame Spike's lie was troubling Buffy though. Can't wait to learn more about the detective. Great chapter! ~ Loved the pretty banner! :D

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 22

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 22

That's one way of avoiding a difficult discussion! Although I realise it wasn't re-meditated as such.

Brilliant as always.

Reviewer: Jenna Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh, I so love this story! Please don't let Hank get his grubby claws into Buffy! :(

Please continue soon, I love this!

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 22

Great Banner!! Like the update too :) Very funny w/Buffy & Angel and Very hot w/Buffy & Spike.

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