Date: 12/05/2006 - 01:18 am Title: All men are fools
ok. so far in this story you have used brake in the wrong context every time.. each time it should have been break. also, as jenny and giles are intelligent and successful people they would tend to use proper english. jenny would not say "me and giles are going to the movies.' she would say "giles and i are going to the movies." it gets distracting when words are used wongly. it takes away from a very good plot such as this story has. there are some wonderful beta's out there. i do enjoy this story very much by the way.
Date: 11/17/2006 - 10:16 pm Title: All men are fools
We know Jenny took the news good (becoming a grandma) but Giles wasn't so fond; but because Spike didn't tell.
At last Spike made Buffy happy, calling her his girlfriend... because still not telling them it's his baby hurt Buffy. Till the next part :)
Date: 11/17/2006 - 08:08 pm Title: All men are fools
AWWWW, I am so happy that Spike isn't being a jerk off anymore! This is fast becoming one of my favorite stories! Great writing! Can't wait for an update!
Date: 11/17/2006 - 04:59 am Title: All men are fools
This is fast becoming one of my favorite WIPs. I'm glad Spike's starting to come around. Loved the boyfriend comment. And I'm glad Jenny told Giles.
Date: 11/17/2006 - 04:31 am Title: All men are fools
loving it
Date: 11/17/2006 - 02:48 am Title: All men are fools
cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!! :D
Date: 11/17/2006 - 02:01 am Title: All men are fools
loved the chapter!..at first i wasnt all that sure about jenny but now i love her..cant wait for more!
Date: 11/17/2006 - 12:52 am Title: All men are fools
This story just keeps getting better and better! Keep up the good work!
Date: 11/16/2006 - 11:28 pm Title: All men are fools
Spike was so sweet calling Buffy his girlfriend. Great chapter!
Date: 11/16/2006 - 11:28 pm Title: All men are fools
I love Jenny, she is great. Please update soon!!!
Date: 11/16/2006 - 11:15 pm Title: All men are fools
i hope he doesn't back out! Update soon please!