Date: 04/05/2007 - 03:49 am Title: Chapter 13
Gut wrenching but unavoidable. I do wonder where Dru is to play into all of this now. They can't very well just set her free to roam. Loving it and looking forward to the next update.
Date: 04/04/2007 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 13
Great so far and I would love to read more!
Date: 04/04/2007 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 13
Spike is supportive of Buffy. Especially after the Joyce incident she needs it.
Good update, loved the fight. And the inner fight Buffy was going through and Spike going through the motions because of Angel being back. Loved it. :)
Date: 04/04/2007 - 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 13
Fantastic chapter!! Oh yeah, I'm def. still here and loving this story like crazy!! Man, that hug between Angel and Buffy---and her seeing how much pain it caused Spike---just broke my heart. Loved it!! Can't wait for more!!
Date: 04/04/2007 - 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 13
Powerful chapter. Loved it and can't wait til the next update!
Date: 04/04/2007 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 13
That was such a moving chapter, definitely did justice to the version of the events on the show. I can't wait to see how Spike will take care of her or where he's going to take her...
Date: 04/04/2007 - 07:15 am Title: Chapter 13
God...breathtaking story! Amazing! PLease update soon!
MOa from Germany
Date: 04/04/2007 - 06:07 am Title: Chapter 13
SO looking forward to more!!
Date: 04/04/2007 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 13
words can't describe how much i enjoyed reading this chapter of yours! who ever told you that you suck, tell them to piss off! i can't wait to read more, so update as soon as you possibly can?
Date: 04/04/2007 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter 13
So maybe we'll be seeing some more updates.... I'll have to start leaving more reviews then.
I like how Spike looked on as Buffy sent Angel away. Great chapter!
Date: 04/04/2007 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter 13
Another version of Spike and Buffy running off where memories haven't been made.....
Well done on interpreting the episode. Someone still has to seal with Dru, though.
Date: 04/04/2007 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter 13
OH I loved it, more please.
Date: 04/04/2007 - 12:30 am Title: Chapter 13
Incorporating Spike and Buffy's relationship and bond into this chapter worked seamlessly. I enjoyed the added violence against Angelus, even though it did little to change the course of events. Spike's fight with Dru was also colored by their new history together.
This was a wonderful turn of phrase: "He moved as though he’d already thumbed through the script; as though he knew her next attack before she did. As though reality had a five-second tape delay, giving him an immeasurable advantage."
I loved this, too: " The welcome tenor of his voice washed over her like a personal baptism. Buffy blinked and realized for the first time she’d been crying. Crying silent tears. When she looked up, she found herself awash in compassion unlike anything she’d ever known. And in that second, she yearned for his arms like she’d never yearned for anything."
Having Spike at her side, understanding the heartbreak of sending a souled Angel to Hell is really going to change the trajectory of the story. I'm looking forward to it.
Date: 04/03/2007 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 13
great chapter
Date: 04/03/2007 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 13
Angelus really made the word lover nasty didn't he?
Things should be a lot better for Buffy with Spike there instead of on her own. Great update.
Date: 04/03/2007 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 13
MWA HA! I'm reviewing! And I don't think I'm signed in, but I'm way too lazy to go back and sign in. I have a new beta note for you (don't write French if you're going to write it incorrectly, n'est pas?" (oh quit it, you know you love me.)