Date: 10/31/2007 - 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 23
This is so incredibly excellent. Your writing really is one of the few that is so good. The emotions are wonderfully intense. I'm really excited to read more when you next update.
Date: 10/24/2007 - 07:23 am Title: Chapter 23
Killing me a little that it ended there. He gave her one extra day and in that time she even managed to move. She's really done a good bit of productive thinking there, and I'm glad Fred was able to help, too. Hopefully she can use the right words and get her message across before they get too mad at each other. Another great chapter. Please, update soon.
Date: 10/21/2007 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 23
Fred is right. Buffy and Spike have to sort everything out together. Can't wait for more!
Date: 10/21/2007 - 01:47 am Title: Chapter 23
Awesome update. Can't wait for more.
Date: 10/21/2007 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter 23
Maybe a mild, semi-platonic, co-habitation will ease some of the doubts in Buffys mind. Great update, will watch for another!
Date: 10/20/2007 - 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 23
ahh u cant leave it like that i wanna see what happens next! cant wait for more, very well written
Date: 10/20/2007 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 23
I love Fred. And she makes really good sense, Buffy, so keep listening to her.
Date: 10/20/2007 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 23
I am so glad she got the apt and Spike came back now I wonder how thier talk will go.
Date: 10/20/2007 - 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 23
With all her long-way-round logic, it takes the objectivity of a relative stranger to Buffy's life, to sort things out for Buffy. A few simple words and there it is: a problem halved is a problem solved ...... in other words, girl, work it out with him rather than without him.
And now Buffy has a firm footing. A job and a home. And she doesn't hesitate to invite him in.
Now your gettiin' it, Slayer.
Date: 10/20/2007 - 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 23
Buffy is insecure about what to do and not to risk to be hurt again. I love Fred's logic to figure it out together or And it will continue to be complicated until you uncomplicate it :)
But Buffy really wants to have her time; I think we'll get to know in the next chapter what Spike thinks about that. ~ Till then!
Date: 10/20/2007 - 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 23
As usual.. a lot of Buffy babble and battling her feelings about .. Spike in particular. And then finally deciding.. about a job, a place to live, and Spike.. Come in - means much more than just the simple gesture of a good hostess..