Date: 10/05/2007 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter 14
*sighs*
I lurved this chapter.
Date: 12/19/2006 - 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 14
I seem to be too similar and this one is a bit different.
Also, you mentioned the Seread here all the time and never comment, but you've forced me to. I'm really loving the story and I'm enjoying seeing Buffy and Spike in a unique situation. So many stories are so simial in plot and this one stands out as different.
Also, you mentioned the Second Street Bar? Are you a Reno girl? I myself have spent far too many evenings there listening to bad karaoke. Just curious....
Author's Response: Well, thanks for delurking to give me some feedback!
And yes, I am a Reno girl...lol! I haven't been to it in a while, but I have some very fond memories of that bar. ::sigh::
I appreciate the comments on the originality of my plot and I have to agree that there are *so* many stories that have the same storyline. It's hard coming up with unique plotlines in a fandom that has 1000's of stories out there already.
~Jaesha
Date: 12/17/2006 - 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ha. Hey, I figured...he's in the spotlight, a lot of up-and-comers have that soft porn career that started them off. It's not so far fetched. And I'm told Mexanese Transvestites are quite a la mode these days.
Date: 12/16/2006 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 14
The first date.. On personal information (like about her mom) Buffy is very silent. She needs to open up to him more in the future; but that is something they'll have to work on together.
LOL and now it's proved that the magic hat works *g*.
And maybe Buffy will believe Spike now hat he is faithful. ~ Loved the update :))
Date: 12/16/2006 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter 14
I think that calls for an "aw!" More please!
Date: 12/16/2006 - 12:58 am Title: Chapter 14
Loved the bit about the hat, and the story about Oliver's antics on stage was hilarious. I'm glad Spike and Buffy talked things out about the groupies. Great chapter!
Date: 12/15/2006 - 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 14
I hope no one gets hurt. Update soon please!
Date: 12/15/2006 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 14
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!! :D
Date: 12/15/2006 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 14
I really have been enjoying your excellent story! Just one minor nitpick with chapter 14; LA gets plenty of cold weather. Tomorrow we're getting a storm and temperatures won't get above 60. And it can snow in Las Vegas. :-) I know; I'm a weather nerd! lol
Author's Response: See, I knew someone was going to say something about that! And truth be told, Las Vegas is running in the high 40's, low 50's right now...I know this because I live in Nevada. But let's just chop it up to creative license and leave it at that. I will admit that it is a factual error on my part. Sound kosher? Thanks for reviewing. ~Jae
Date: 12/15/2006 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 14
aww, sweet chapter! Happy Spuffy on the town, and then some serious conversations in the room...loved it!!!
Date: 12/15/2006 - 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 14
good update
Date: 12/15/2006 - 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 14
No Mexican Transvestite wife?
Sadness. On to plan b...he's a porn star! Staring with JAPANESE Trasvestites! ;)
LOL. Love the story, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hehehe!!! You crack me up! Japanese transvestites, indeed...lol! And Oliver as a porn star? LOL!!
Date: 12/15/2006 - 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 14
Loved this as always. Keep up the excellent work.
Date: 12/15/2006 - 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 14
Nice to see Buffy starting to let Spike in, great update, more soon please :o)
Date: 12/15/2006 - 11:18 am Title: Chapter 14
aww very sweet chapter, thanks!
Date: 12/15/2006 - 10:50 am Title: Chapter 14
love it, more please.
Date: 12/15/2006 - 10:49 am Title: Chapter 14
I really love the way that you pack so much into each chapter. Thought provoking conversation, romance, a little history, a little peek as to what is to come. Great writing, GREAT STORY !!! I look forward to each and every addition.
Date: 12/15/2006 - 08:25 am Title: Chapter 14
So, as I was reading this I started thinking about good old Oliver, he sleeps with a lot of girls, tells others about it, and is hidding something. I'm thinking he's gay and doesnt want anyone to know.
Buffy was half right about the hat, it only works if Spike keeps it on his head. We are slowly finding out about Buffys past, I wonder who it was that hurt her so bad?
Date: 12/15/2006 - 08:19 am Title: Chapter 14
I freakin' LOVE this story!! The pace is great, especially with those crumbs of lust thrown in, and it's just all-around fantab!!
Date: 12/15/2006 - 08:05 am Title: Chapter 14
Even though I'm a woman, it still upsets me when another woman insists that all men are the same kind....it's not logical, and couldn't be true. The math just doesn't work. It is hard after you've been hurt to trust again, but it's not like it's everyone in the world'd fault that you aren't trusting. It's just better to move on with life.
Author's Response: I couldn't agree with you more. I'm not down with the man-bashing, never have been. It's hard to think the worst of the entire gender when there are so many good ones out there. Many thanks for posting! ~Jae
Date: 12/15/2006 - 07:00 am Title: Chapter 14
Nice Spuffy chapter.
Date: 12/15/2006 - 06:49 am Title: Chapter 14
glad buffy's little assumption of spike sleeping with his fans didn't turn into some huge argument. loved it bunches. post soon.
Date: 12/15/2006 - 06:38 am Title: Chapter 14
The story about Oliver falling off the stage naked, and then continuing to sing naked was just plain funny. Hehe!
Really good chapter, very sweet seeing them just hanging out with each other like that. :)
Date: 12/15/2006 - 05:36 am Title: Chapter 14
This story is so good, keep it up hon
Date: 12/15/2006 - 05:33 am Title: Chapter 14
Oliver does seem kinda slutty. Let's just hope that Spike can be trusted. I have to say that I love how fast you update this. It's one of my fave stories right now. Great chapter=)