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Reviewer: AM Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2010 - 10:32 am Title: Chapter 58

Hi,
I'm a little confused on a few points:
Why would Xander be (randomly and completely out of the blue) hitting on some other girl when you've already established that he is dating and living with Anya?

Why wouldn't Anya get jealous/pissed that he was hitting on the girl and take her own vengeance out on him, human-Anya-style (smacking him on the head and withholding sex)?

Why would Xander and Anya be staying in separate rooms once they got to London if they're living together in Sunnydale?

There just seemed to be a bit of a continuity issue.

Love the story, though! :)

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2010 - 07:48 am Title: Chapter 58

Xander is in danger of turning into an even bigger idiot than he already was. Fun chapter.

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2010 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter 58

I'm so happy every time I see a new chapter. I'm looking forward to ripping the Wankers' Council a new one. More SOON please.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2010 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 58

Ah I thought Bebee was from Buffy.
Xander .... they better would have left him stay behind it seems *sigh*.
What an idiot.
At last the others enjoyed the house and environment without causing trouble.
Enjoyed - looking forward to more again.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2010 - 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 58

oh wow, perfect absolutly perfect....wow and more wow..
loved what you did to Xander and Haakon, whimper whimper....

Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it... and THANK YOU for the inspriation and the characters!

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