Date: 06/08/2007 - 12:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Just found your fic and I'm enjoying it. Interested to see if he's going to keep her for himself or allow her to be shared with the others. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 11/24/2006 - 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting concept, though you're writing is a bit rushed. Everything seems to run together; maybe get a beta? They help a lot with those kind of things, and catch little missteps like, "She knew that her parents were probably freaking out, and they probably already had people searching for her, but she didn’t care."
But you have a great idea, really worth developing.
Author's Response: I don't exactly know what a beta is and how to get one. But I will try to either get one or fix it up.
Date: 11/14/2006 - 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the start of this one :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review
Date: 11/14/2006 - 06:10 am Title: Chapter 1
yes I am very interested
Author's Response: Yeah, thanks for the review
Date: 11/14/2006 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I like it a lot - please keep going and update asap!
Author's Response: Thanks, and I will update asap.
Date: 11/14/2006 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter 1
definitely good so far
Author's Response: Yeah, hope you like the rest.
Date: 11/13/2006 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked it. I love historic fics. The only thing i didn't care for was the fact that some of the people's names didn't really match the time period or some of the diolog. other than that i liked it and look forward to reading the update.
Author's Response: Sorry about that. I'm working on fixing it right now. Thanks.
Date: 11/13/2006 - 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooh--this is excellent! Love it already...can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you like the rest.
Date: 11/13/2006 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
The date in this story says 1863, but in the show Spike wasn't even turned until 1880, is there a reason for that?? And you also used words like freaking out. Don't take offence, just making a little friendly criticizm. Pretty good story though, and I can't wait to see where it leads.
Author's Response: I had forgotten to add that I changed it around to my liking. And I don't remember writing the words 'Freaking out' But I will fix it. Thank you for your help.
Date: 11/13/2006 - 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning, looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thanks, hope you like the rest.