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Reviewer: Dana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 08:04 pm Title: What He Deserves

Wow !!! who was the attacker Riley???Xander???

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Date: 11/15/2006 - 05:47 pm Title: What He Deserves

Wow, a lot comments on the first chapter already :)
One of Buffy's Ex is hitting Spike? Mmm don't think at the moment Giles can be included.
Who is the attacker? That is the question.. after the description it has to be one of Buffy's Ex. Xander never had Buffy .. so I would guess Riley because Angel would now about how much Vampires heal. *checks something* Buffy's name wasn't mentioned. So if 'she' was Anya it must be Xander. But when did Xander beat Spike?..... a lot of questions here :-D Please more :)

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2006 - 03:50 am Title: What He Deserves

i love the way you make the intruder appear to be xander , but i know it's that moron with the big broody forehead,. Sounds just like him " she's mine" "you took her from me" "How dare you touch what's mine " god i can't stand him. Anxiously awaiting more updates.

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2006 - 03:50 am Title: What He Deserves

i love the way you make the intruder appear to be xander , but i know it's that moron with the big broody forehead,. Sounds just like him " she's mine" "you took her from me" "How dare you touch what's mine " god i can't stand him. Anxiously awaiting more updates.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 09:31 pm Title: What He Deserves

Very intense. More please!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 09:15 pm Title: What He Deserves

i really cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 08:17 pm Title: What He Deserves

Holy crap! There are any number of he's and she's that they could have been talking about... I'm sure that was your intention, but I need to know! I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dragontiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 07:38 pm Title: What He Deserves

oh gods. that must have been zander. cant wait for more chaps....

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 07:33 pm Title: What He Deserves

great start, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Sally Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 05:58 pm Title: What He Deserves

Good chapter. I think you have a tendency to make Spike the victim in all your stories. Particulary, I would like to see a stronger Spike and not feel sorry for him like I always do. Maybe, sometimes, you can make Buffy the victim? Please dont take this the wrong way. This is just my opinion. Please update soon!!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 04:14 pm Title: What He Deserves

Oh my GOD! I've actually re-read this chapter twice now, for two reasons really. One, cause it's just so darn good! Two, cause I wanted to figure out what was going on. Really really excellent start here, I'm looking forward to reading this one. =D

Reviewer: anon462 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 04:06 pm Title: What He Deserves

Whoa!!! That was tense!!! Is it Xander? He hates Spike enough to do it? Was it Angel? He's sick enough to do it? Next chapter please, hurry!!! This is a very exciting beginning!!!

Reviewer: evildeadgirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 03:33 pm Title: What He Deserves

OOOhh...very good start Although you say post Entropy, I'm not convinced the shooter is Xander. We'll see. :D Update soon!.

Reviewer: ELLIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 03:32 pm Title: What He Deserves

aww poor spike ... i really didn't expect that. a bulet in the head has to do some serious damage...update soon. i wanna see buffy's reaction!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 02:50 pm Title: What He Deserves

good so far ...i wonder who the intruder was...i can think of two people

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 01:32 pm Title: What He Deserves

more more more more!!!! it looks like a nice story!

Reviewer: sour Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 01:14 pm Title: What He Deserves

You started to another good story I see. Well, please hurry to update, and don't damage Spike too much.
Dawn can find him in the crypt maybe?

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 01:09 pm Title: What He Deserves

xander is such a freak..grrrrrr..i hate him so much right now...loved the chapter though it was freakin' awesome...cant wait for more!

Reviewer: time of change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 09:30 am Title: What He Deserves

Holy hell! This is diabolical. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 08:05 am Title: What He Deserves

Poor Spike. Spike is going to need a lot of TLC. Hopefully, Buffy will be the one to give it.

Please update soon.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 07:25 am Title: What He Deserves

Gah! You're evil! You and your evil cliffies!!!! Hurry up and get back here with that next chapter, dang it!

So, is he really gonna show up on Buffy's doorstep with temporary brain damage?

Why do you have to hurt Spike....it's not nice! *whimper* Me very afraid.....

Reviewer: Nae Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 06:43 am Title: What He Deserves

OO. Love it so far. Think we can all saftly guess who the intruder was.

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 06:16 am Title: What He Deserves

yeah... i do think xander has this kind of darkness inside him!
and this first chatpter was... wow! lol
i liked so much spike comments and internal musing... and how xander talked about anya/buffy as they were... the same "thing"...

Reviewer: Blondie Bear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 06:10 am Title: What He Deserves

OMG THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE EXTREMELY SOON!!!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 05:32 am Title: What He Deserves

oh my!!!! OH MY!!!!! wow. you have to post soon. great start. loved it!!!!!

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