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Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 04:06 am Title: Not Alone

Very nice scene-- all of the women helping the vamp. Looking forward to seeing his regenerative powers after getting some blood in him. I like how you write Buffy struggling with her jealousy of both Dawn and Anya-- very true to reality-- the fight between what one should "logically" feel, and the gut-level pain of what one feels. Very well done! More soon, please!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 07:14 pm Title: Not Alone

loved it. please post soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 05:41 pm Title: Not Alone

I love your quick updates :)
Maybe Spike remembers in his subconscious... because he feels save with Dawn. Buffy did break up with him so his memories aren't "pain free".
He felt safe enough to cry.
Yet it isn't easy for Buffy to notice this behavior (that Spike clings more to Dawn, trusts her, than he trusts her).

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 01:49 pm Title: Not Alone

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!! :D

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 08:35 am Title: Not Alone

my heart aches every time I read a chapter of this, but its like a drug, I cant stop!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 05:14 am Title: Not Alone

Great chapter

Reviewer: lv_heath Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 04:36 am Title: Not Alone

Good work so far. Angel could give some vamp advice to help Spike, if you want to include him in the story. I'm hoping Spike doesn't have evidence of rape, but with the amount of torture so far, it's more than likely...

Reviewer: anon462 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 02:33 am Title: Not Alone

Excellent chapter! I really liked that Dawn was able to calm his fears and make him feel safe. I hurt that Buffy was feeling guilty for not thinking about Spikes injured back, especially since he was injured so badly in so many places. I also felt bad for her that she was having thought that Spike had know reason to trust her.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 01:18 am Title: Not Alone

Awww Spike! I certainly hope Dawn won't be in the room when they need to tend to any wounds below the waist. As comforting as she may be for Spike, I'm not sure he would like know she's seen.. uh.. him.

Good chapter!! :)

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 01:08 am Title: Not Alone

great chapter

Reviewer: silvinne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 12:52 am Title: Not Alone

Thanks for another great chapter. Please, update soon

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 10:38 pm Title: Not Alone

Super great story, I love it! So tender...hard way for Buffy to gain some perspective, though :( But I have faith in the Spuffy (and in the writer!)

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 10:33 pm Title: Not Alone

stil lovin this story, it has me on an angsty edge at the end of each chapter. keep up the good work and the regualr postings

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