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Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 04:09 pm Title: Enemy In the Camp

Loved it, how much of a liar is Xander, can't wait to see what she will find on Spike, poor Spike not even safe anymore,

Reviewer: pfeifferpack Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 04:39 pm Title: Enemy In the Camp

I keep reminding myself that Xander just saved the world from Dark Willow (you DID say all else from S6 happened) so Buffy has even more reason than her usual loyalty to not suspect Xander.

Excellent writing! You are a treasure.

Kathleen

Reviewer: pfeifferpack Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 04:07 pm Title: Enemy In the Camp

I keep reminding myself that Xander just saved the world from Dark Willow (you DID say all else from S6 happened) so Buffy has even more reason than her usual loyalty to not suspect Xander.

Excellent writing! You are a treasure.

Kathleen

Reviewer: Abbyland Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 03:20 pm Title: Enemy In the Camp

Hmm, I have to agree with scelto although I'm not entirely certain that even then Buffy will be ready to at least entertain the possibility that Xander isn't who she thinks. Besides Angel, I think Dawn may be the first to give in to her doubts.

Yes, all of the pulling on Spike's head wound may cause it to reopen but Xander could easily be argue that away by saying Spike was pulling on his hair during his nightmare. Also, Xander punched the wall during his encounter with Spike. Did it leave a mark and will Buffy see it? Will she make the connection that only Xander went upstairs?

Buffy isn't necessarily stupid but she has a knack for not seeing what's right in front of her. She doesn't want to believe that a human did this to Spike, let alone a human that she knows and is close friends with, so any plausible explanation that will support her bias of Scoobies = good she will gladly cling to it. She can't imagine that Xander or even Willow would give in to their insecurities and prejudices. Xander, as far as she is concerned could never do any such thing.

And how many of us would swear for a brother, sister or best friend because we believe in them and all the times they've been there for us only to discover we were completely wrong and we really didn' t know that person as well as we thought.

I'm just glad that Angel is convinced of his guilt and will be keeping an eye on him. Xander is going to have a hard time continuing to torment Spike if Angel gets on his back, especially is he starts to investigate him - like how did Xander get that torture equipment? Angel must be able to track those purchases back to him, even if they were through some underground scheme.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 12:40 pm Title: Enemy In the Camp

Xander is such a bastard, he deserves to die. Real slowly.... because people like him may start with a vampire but I think he won't stop now that he found fun torturing somebody.
Too bad, really, too bad that Buffy still believes Xander. He lies to easily. *big deep sigh*

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 08:39 am Title: Enemy In the Camp

Brillant! I love this~!

Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 07:11 am Title: Enemy In the Camp

NOOOOO! I can't believe he got away with it. I am normaly not a violent person, but I want Xander to suffer in this story... A LOT.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 04:25 am Title: Enemy In the Camp

great chapter

Reviewer: Obsidian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 03:29 am Title: Enemy In the Camp

Grr, sometimes I just want to smack Buffy! Hard! God! It's like she got drunk off 'Stupid Juice', fell off the 'Stupid Truck', and got hit by the 'Stupid Train'! Please fix her soon, before I edit myself into your story and kick her ass!

Other than that, you are evil and your story is amazing Amen.

Reviewer: scelto Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 03:08 am Title: Enemy In the Camp

so yes, i just reviewed, a second ago... but i must mention something... with all of the hair pulling on xander's part... wouldn't Spike's wound have come back open? so i was thinking that i hope buffy sees that and realizes that hey, Dawn would never do something like that, and Spike sure as hell wouldn't rip open his own head wound... so yea... she should see it. or i'll kick her in the face for being such a 'tard.

Reviewer: scelto Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 03:01 am Title: Enemy In the Camp

so i'm going to kill buffy. it's official, you can't continue the story without buffy getting bodily harmed, severely, because honestly? this is getting to the point of being ridiculous. she should know. even buffy isn't *that* stupid... i mean, my god, the "*eyeroll* love of her life" tells her that her "best friend" is the bad guy... and everything falls into place... but her crazy blonde brain doesn't get it. she should be checked into that mental ward from "Normal Again"... because she really needs it this time...
*phew* anyways... i love it. i enjoy the suspense, even though it's killing me!! :)

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 02:09 am Title: Enemy In the Camp

obviously buffy has a long way to go before she finds out the truth...or wants to see it! loved it lots. hard for me to read cuz the truth was soooooo right in buffy's face and she didn't even notice it but loved it all the same. more soon.

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 02:01 am Title: Enemy In the Camp

Buffy is being so stupid. She needs to wake up soon. I hope Angel does something really bad to Xander.

Please update soon.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 01:38 am Title: Enemy In the Camp

can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: Mollie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 01:12 am Title: Enemy In the Camp

STUPID BUFFY!!! I hate Xander, he needs to die a slow and painful death!

Reviewer: silvinne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 12:19 am Title: Enemy In the Camp

Great chapter. Please, more soon!!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 12:08 am Title: Enemy In the Camp

I can't believe her!?!?! Poor Spike...no wonder he thinks she won't believe him. Clearly she won't. I can't believe she's soooooo blind to the truth. By the time she accepts it, it'll probably be too late for Spike. At this point, I'm hoping Angel takes Spike away from Sunnydale. Poor Spike....he's my favorite character of all time. He doesn't deserve this. Can you please torture and kill Xander? Pretty please? Update soon please!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 12:05 am Title: Enemy In the Camp

Good GOD! Xander seriously needs a BIG ole wake up call... with a healthy dose of his own medicine. I'm really glad Angel isn't buying his crap, he may be Spike's only hope at this point.

Really good chapter! =)

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2006 - 11:46 pm Title: Enemy In the Camp

Good for Angel-- This is probably the first time I've been so happy that Angel has been in a fic before! ;)

Reviewer: Valery Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2006 - 11:37 pm Title: Enemy In the Camp

Im sorry for saying this but I dont think Buffy is neither stupid or blind. If I was in her shoes I would totally believe in my best friend and she has every right to think that Angel is wrong. She has always put her family and friends first and this is no exception.
I not agree totally with the topics of your fictions but I like the way you write thats way I keep reading it.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: Enemy In the Camp

damn! i thought buffy and angel would cattch Xamder in the act!!!
very exciting stuff!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2006 - 11:20 pm Title: Enemy In the Camp

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Fairys Midwife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2006 - 11:17 pm Title: Enemy In the Camp

Damnit! Just....DAMNIT!

Reviewer: Nika Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2006 - 10:56 pm Title: Enemy In the Camp

Grrr. Xander's such an ass, and Buffy's so blind. Why does she have to be blind, now Spike's going to be in more torment. I really hope she believes it soon, because Xander seriously needs to get an ass kicking.

Reviewer: Spikesonlychilde Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2006 - 10:45 pm Title: Enemy In the Camp

this story is really good and I know that this stuff has to keep happening to make the end so much better but urg I wish she would figure it out and *destroy* Xander.. I still can't believe it's realyl him - so thought it was Riley. But very good plot twist. never wrte that before so I thought I'd write it now. I love this story - can't wait to read more.

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