Date: 04/08/2007 - 02:43 pm Title: Four
Oh I love it, at first I thought they were in the tent, was that Spikes way of asking her to stay with him.
Date: 04/04/2007 - 11:12 am Title: Four
Wow. That was hott! And the whole underwear in tatters thing and Buffy's musing on it? Brilliant. I love it!
-Alyx
Date: 02/08/2007 - 01:47 pm Title: Four
Hey, I was just reading through this again (yes, I read your stuff over and over again) and noticed that in Chapter 3, you refer to one of Dru's girls as Darla, then in Chapter 4, Spike's old girlfriend is also Darla. I just did not think you intended that. If so, my bad. Loving this still, can't wait for more.
Date: 02/07/2007 - 06:14 pm Title: Four
Buffy is rating Spike's kisses? Then she'll be busy. Lots of kisses :)
Awe, both f them have problems to keep quiet that they've fallen in love. Cute :) Guh, that was very acrobatic. Good that nobody got really hurt. Well without the trousers Spike would've been more surefooted ;-)
Mmm I hope Spike will be more faithful for Buffy as he was for Darla (groupies); because when he would cheat on her I don't think Buffy will take it. But reading how he thinks about her I don't think that he'll do it. She means too much for him.
Don't worry, the chapter was worth the wait. Can't tell you which quote because a) the chapter distracted me and b) I don't know a lot of films in English so I maybe wouldn't recognize the quote anyway. I love how they seem to be growing together, in the sense of getting a relationship, wanting to be together.
Date: 02/07/2007 - 02:09 pm Title: Four
Quote there was a quote....holy shit no, that was the hottest woodsy sex I have ever encountered. WHOA WHOA WHOA...yeah it might be -2 outside,but damn that would the melt the ice off a glacier.....Very nice, very very nice.....*pants*
Date: 02/06/2007 - 11:45 pm Title: Four
I think I want to go camping again.
Date: 02/06/2007 - 04:49 pm Title: Four
I adore this little tale and it's wonderful to know that you have the desire to write more.
This last part was gorgeous in its hotness and passion. Your Spike is irresistible , so sexy , so possessive , so tender all together. A dream come true for Buffy , I have no doubt. And for him as well, who l had ost hope to find someone worthy of his attentions.
Thank you so much !
Date: 02/06/2007 - 04:46 pm Title: Four
This was a romantic and deeply erotic chapter. I love the way these two are just giving in to the attraction, and now Will has declared his intentions, I'm less nervous about the end of the camping trip. The story beginning in the future, with no sign of Will anywhere has had me a bit anxious about the happy couple.
Date: 02/06/2007 - 02:12 pm Title: Four
The Princess Bride. After the escape. It's -7F (with a wind chill of -38F) and the furnace can barely keep up where I am and I'm still sweating. That was incredibly passionate. Write how ever many chapters you want--sexual intercourse or verbal discourse, I'll keep reading.
Date: 02/06/2007 - 12:58 pm Title: Four
The Princess Bride is one of my very favorite movies, so yes I got it right away. Once again, great chapter. I love growly, horny only for you, give it to me now Spike. You write him so well. He is possessive in a "My Woman" way, but instead of pissing you off, it just makes you yearn to be his woman. I also love a decisive Buffy, who is not too afraid of her feelings. Plain and simple; I just love the two of them in this story. Thanks so much for the update!
Date: 02/06/2007 - 10:04 am Title: Four
Nice! Very nice!!
And yes, I figured out the quote.
Date: 02/06/2007 - 08:52 am Title: Four
Simply wonderful! Loved the chapter! :D
Date: 02/06/2007 - 02:28 am Title: Four
Warm? Smokin' hot!
Think she forgot her bra, though......
As for the rest...Awwwwwwww....!
Date: 02/06/2007 - 01:32 am Title: Four
"Since the invention of the kiss, there have been five kisses that were rated the most passionate, the most pure. This one left all of them behind."
I'm happy to see that you are still working on this and it was so worth the wait.
Date: 02/05/2007 - 11:21 pm Title: Four
Figure out the quote? Bah! My addled brain forgot what day it was after this chapter.
It's so romantic. It was the kind of chapter that makes you sigh in longing for a man like that. It was lovely Nia, and freaking HOT as hell.
Might make me rethink my extreme aversion to nature. LOL!
Cheers,
Nina
Date: 02/05/2007 - 11:14 pm Title: Four
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Date: 02/05/2007 - 11:00 pm Title: Four
that was gr8, more please
Date: 02/05/2007 - 10:18 pm Title: Four
loved it soooooo much. glad u posted. more soon. these two are jst soooo cute.
Date: 02/05/2007 - 10:12 pm Title: Four
Awww that was great and well worth the wait :D very sweet and hot, more soon please!!
Date: 02/05/2007 - 10:02 pm Title: Four
Princess Bride all the way, sweetie -- pure kiss, indeed!
Loved every single syllable!!!!!!!!!!