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Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 - 09:29 pm Title: XIV

Spike's vivid dream of how things really went in "The Gift" is intriguing, and his new knowledge about changing the outcome by his sacrifice is, too. How can Buffy living not be for the better? She's much more settled and happy than the other reality allowed. I love the image of Buffy snuggling up to a sleeping Spike, and Spike accepting her so readily in sleep.

Willow's actions with the jar are already ominous, and now she's plotting to wipe Tara's memory? Some things haven't changed at all. Thanks for the entertaining update.

Author's Response: Wow! What a great review! The entire exercise of this story is to explore how much would really have changed had Buffy not died -- more importantly, if Spike made his sacrifice two years earlier, instead of at the end of S7. We're seeing with Willow that not everything changes for the better...you'll have to stick around to find out what else will (or, perhaps more importantly, won't) change. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Rogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 - 03:10 am Title: XIV

Amazing story!!! I just found it and read all of it in one sitting. Such a great idea! I've never read a story where Spike jumped instead of Buffy, and you're writing it so well. The fun and intricate plot twists, good character development (is it too much to hope that Giles will be making an appearance again soon, esp with the hints that Dark Willow is approaching?) and your use of TV Buffy storylines with plenty of creative flair to make them totally unique. I hope Tara doesn't die, but I trust you the author to make those decisions, and with the first 14 chapters being as kick ass as they were, I'm really looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm working on chaper fifteen; unfortunately, it's slow-going. I hope the muse perks up soon; I really do. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Feydruss Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 06:17 pm Title: XIV

I hope you're going to finish this! I'm really into it now!

Author's Response: Oh, don't worry. I'm definitely going to finish this story; it's just going to gnaw at my brain until it's finished.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 03:21 pm Title: XIV

I love how you've explained why Spike came back with a soul. It makes perfect sense and works brilliantly for the story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: sophie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 02:53 pm Title: XIV

How did I miss this story?! Very interesting, I haven't read a version where Spike jumps instead and I'm really enjoying this one. Hope you can update again soon!

Author's Response: I've had several people leave me reviews asking that same question! And I'm definitely working on an update; don't worry!

Reviewer: kcarolj65 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 02:33 pm Title: XIV

I haven't left a review for this story yet? Shame on me! It's wonderful, really; IMO, probably the best version of the "Spike jumped instead of Buffy" idea I've read. Excellent characterizations, and a believable journey for Buffy from gratitude to love. I also love the inclusion of "No, you don't." Well done! I'm eagerly looking forward to your next installment.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I'm glad that readers are generally agreeing with me when Spike decides not to accept Buffy's admission at face value; I was expecting massive amounts of flames. :P

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 11:22 am Title: XIV

Oh no a would be stalker is not good.

I loved the chapter, and that Buffy was ok with Spike in her room. I wonder what else we are going to find out about why Spike is back and what is instore for them.

Author's Response: It's no longer an issue; I've sorted it out. And you'll just have to wait and see--I don't want to give anything away!

Reviewer: Katkin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 11:11 am Title: XIV

Hey hun... This chapter was brilliant, as always with your work I'm chomping at the bit to read another! lol
Really gald that you maybe posting more frequently because I so can't wait tot read more!

thank you! xxx

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I feel guilty that I let an entire month pass without an update -- AGAIN -- so I'm really going to try to get the next chapter up within the next few days. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 10:20 am Title: XIV

I just read the whole story (for some reason I seem to have missed this one) and now I'm hooked. Can't wait to see what will happen next, please try to update soon! Loved the Spuffyness at the end. :)

Author's Response: ::grin:: Turnabout is fair play, eh? :D I'm definitely going to try to update soon; thank you for reading!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 09:28 am Title: XIV

Good question what it was that took Willow away when Spike misses it already. Because someone intended to do something with it as someone (PTBs) send Spike back with his soul and now gave him insights of what would have happened without him in a dream.
And the jar, it seems it wasn't the best decision to leave it with Willow. It's influencing her already. Too much power... and she thinks about buying Lethe’s bramble already *sigh*
Looking forward to more if you have time :)

Author's Response: It wasn't very smart to leave it with Willow, was it? There couldn't POSSIBLY be a reason I did that.... :P The entire purpose of this story is to see how S6 would have changed if Spike had died instead of Buffy...and how much would have stayed the same. I'm glad you're keeping up with this!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 05:59 am Title: XIV

i missed this story , its very interesting! i can't wait to read more

Author's Response: I'm sorry I made you wait! I'm working on the next chapter; hopefully the writer's block will stay away for good.

Reviewer: isa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 02:12 am Title: XIV

I was wondering what happen to this story.

So, spike had a dream about what was suppose to happen. And that buffy was the one who was suppose to die and not him. wow, I enjoy that part and his feelings about that.

I like how he went to buffy's room. he is getting there buffy. Just give him time. And show him that you love him.

keep up the wonderful work. more please.

Author's Response: ::grin:: It's unfortunately going to be slow-going for Buffy and Spike for a little while, but I hope the payoff will be worth it in the end. I'm sorry I left you for so long without an update!

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