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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 03:18 am Title: As the Dust Settles

So Hank really should have known better. Glad Buffy has some instinct, though I wonder what it'll get her now.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2006 - 08:51 pm Title: As the Dust Settles

Second thoughts now? Giving Matthew the cross. Too late now, he's dead. And William was the one in command, responsible for the death.
Did William has the right anyway to execute Hank? (martial law?) Maybe Buffy would understand this. But Matt was innocent. *sigh* (Good chapter)

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 11:00 pm Title: As the Dust Settles

The true horror of war is illustrated beatifully. The human trafedy when all the polemic is stripped away should devastate us all and this story brings that to the fore.

I'm still horrified and shaken, but I imagine I'm supposed to be.

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 10:48 pm Title: As the Dust Settles

Can't wait for the next chapter. Seriously, amazing.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 02:20 pm Title: As the Dust Settles

Great update!

Reviewer: Syl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 06:23 am Title: As the Dust Settles

Great story so far! Why is William taking Buffy along? Is she a prisoner of war? Will there be an explanation for this? I can't wait to see the next update to see where you are going with this story.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 05:47 am Title: As the Dust Settles

i kew he was sad that mathew was killed and that he cared for mathew and cares for elizabeth at least a little. i love this story and am so happy u updated. im glad that william threatened to kill that guy that killed mather. i feel so bad for elizabeth and i hope that she some how comes to deal with the loses and that william can somehow make it up to her. also i hoep that everything wokrs out in the end and that theyre happy together. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to see wat william and elizabeth do next. thanx

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 04:35 am Title: As the Dust Settles

good update

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 03:51 am Title: As the Dust Settles

yeah, it's like I thought, Spike just sees it as war and casualties, fighting for his side. understandable, but sad. Hopefully, Buffy will be able to change his mind :-)

Reviewer: Luvin It Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 03:42 am Title: As the Dust Settles

Keep up the great work. and update ASAP cuz u got me hooked.

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 03:28 am Title: As the Dust Settles

oh myy...keep writing it's awesome =)

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 03:12 am Title: As the Dust Settles

I don't see how Buffy will ever forgive William enough for her to be able to fall in love with him. I just can't see that happening. No matter how nice Spike treats her. I wouldn't be able to forget that he was the one responsible for killing my father and little brother. But I will probably keep on reading a little more to see how you are able to do it. I do love Spuffy lovin cause is the best.

But you are a good writer and this story so far is good. So keep up the good work.

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