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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 09:53 pm Title: Camp

With Burbank William should watch his back. He could be dangerous. *to the next chapter*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 03:26 am Title: Camp

My what happens now. Those two are not friends. Another great chapter.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 07:05 pm Title: Camp

Good update.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 04:22 pm Title: Camp

Hmm I think you should have given William a background as an English soldier instead of a West Point all american soldier. It just don't seem right to me that you give away a lot of his personality that way.

Then you wrote that he wore a Lt. Colonel uniform but then he became a Major. Kinda confusing really.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 02:15 am Title: Camp

i cant believe that it was that guy that sent him to do that. i kew that william would never do that and he only had to because he was ordered to, that guys a bastard. i love this story so much and am so happy u updated. im sorry i havent reviewed sooner, i was gone on a trip. i really wish that elizabeth stps hating william and comes to love him, although how after wat hes done to her i dont know. i just hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read wat happens next. thanx

Reviewer: Hostile 17 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 01:32 am Title: Camp

OH! I like this story! Update soon, please.

Reviewer: BloodyLuv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 01:19 am Title: Camp

yay!!!, you updated, i was starting to fear this fic was not gonna be updated anymore, great chapter!!! hope to see more soon!!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 01:00 am Title: Camp

good update

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