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Reviewer: Rachel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2007 - 07:15 am Title: New Arrivals

I don't know if you'll read this, but I genuinely enjoyed your story and am sorry to see that it has not been updated in some time. Please continue updating.

Reviewer: Carrie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2007 - 04:07 am Title: New Arrivals

Yes, yes... please update! I loved both of your stories... please (insert whiney begging) please update!

Reviewer: synonumous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 05:30 am Title: New Arrivals

update meany poo

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 04:23 am Title: New Arrivals

This has been such a powerful story so far. I hope that you are planning on finishing it. I keep looking for updates everyday!

Reviewer: angela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 06:10 pm Title: New Arrivals

moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore

Reviewer: MyBlondieBear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 03:27 pm Title: New Arrivals

Update please? I really love your story.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 10:42 pm Title: New Arrivals

Human cargo? Did they save slaves? The sight doesn't seem to be pretty because Buffy reacted this way.
I wonder what William intends to do with her now.

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 05:58 pm Title: New Arrivals

Great story. Poor William forced to carry out his sadistic superior's orders. Buffy has been thru so much I hope she can learn to care for him when she learns the truth. Update soon.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 03:31 am Title: New Arrivals

Hope for them yet. A lovely touching moment amidst so much despair. A devil you know type situation. I look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 07:21 pm Title: New Arrivals

I missed your previus update so I was delighted to have two chapters to read.

I regret that you feel the need to explain the horror within your story. As I see it the emotional events are a realistic representation contemporary to such conflicts and you have done a wonderful job in arousing the strong feelings that should be experienced when reading of such atrocities.

It will be difficult to reconcile a romantic relationship from such a premis, but the issue is not whether we should hate Spike for his actions, but rather whether we should hate the machinations leading to his actions.

War is not personal, yet the consequent devastation always is. After all, how many fathers, mothers and children wold Hank's arsenel have killed?

I could write a dissertation on this so I'm shutting up now!

Great chapter; I love Rose as the voice of reason and I am looking forward to more.

Reviewer: BloodyLuv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 12:46 pm Title: New Arrivals

great chapter!! update soon

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 08:46 am Title: New Arrivals

Fantastic (pardon the pun) writing. Don't know how you'd overcome what's gone on before but love is strange. Don't keep us in suspense for too long.

Reviewer: Li Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 07:37 am Title: New Arrivals

Nice to see a bit of soul in the right bastard, I understand your point and from his point of view he did do the right thing... but youi've written it so well I cnat help but feel enraged for the girl. I'm really interested to see how this goes , I can feel the potential for greatness here, not too many can play the repentance card well- but this story gives me the same feelings I felt when reading Winter's Storm. You're a great writer, things are tense now and I am so excited to see how life at the camp and the relationship unfolds!

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 06:18 am Title: New Arrivals

very intense chapter

Reviewer: Dolau Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 05:28 am Title: New Arrivals

Oh, boy. You're good :-).. That's some awesome writings you've got going here. Very well written and captivating. Makes my emotions go all over the place. Looking forward to more..

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 04:03 am Title: New Arrivals

awww see he does care for her. i love this story so much and am so happy u updated so quickly. i know he cares for her and feels so bad about wat he had to do to her family. also i know she feels for him and that even though shes not ready to forgive him for wat he did, she still feels something for him. i really hope that with time they grow closer and that they come to love each other. aslo i hope everything works out and that they end up happy together. please update as soon as u cna, im dying to read more. thanx

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 03:53 am Title: New Arrivals

good update

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