Date: 08/31/2007 - 12:41 am Title: A Changing Current
Wow, that was a flurry of chapters and happenings. I'm glad to see they're each starting to see each other as waaaaay more than just 'the enemy'. Beautiful.
Date: 08/30/2007 - 02:15 am Title: A Changing Current
This just gets better and better ... your muse must be on fire !!! I can picture every move that they are making, the environment and the emotions. She seems to recognize that he is an unwilling pawn in this war (as most individuals are). It is apparent that he regrets his involvement to this point. I'm anxious to see how he handles things in these next chapters ... one a day, right? (kidding)(but hopeful)
Date: 08/30/2007 - 12:01 am Title: A Changing Current
ah, the river again. I wonder if that was all William was going to say, or he had more to say.
Date: 08/29/2007 - 09:12 pm Title: A Changing Current
Gah! That was so awesome! I'm so glad you started writing this again, I missed it so much! Poor Elizabeth...such a confused mess right now. It's almost like Stockholm syndrome...falling for or trusting one's captor. Let's see how far it goes!
Date: 08/29/2007 - 06:56 pm Title: A Changing Current
Enjoyed :)
I liked the chapter; it seems as if Elizabeth and William were able to talk. They live in dangerous times. And their background (the killing of Elizabeth's family) doesn't make it easier.
Date: 08/29/2007 - 11:35 am Title: A Changing Current
As I wait with baited breath, my every prayer was answered! Loved the story development and the depth of the characters is definitely refreshing. Loved it!
Date: 08/29/2007 - 06:30 am Title: A Changing Current
Great chapter - I absolutely love this.
Date: 08/29/2007 - 05:49 am Title: A Changing Current
Great chapter, I can't wait to read more.
Date: 08/29/2007 - 05:44 am Title: A Changing Current
awesome update:)......cant wait for the next one
Date: 08/29/2007 - 05:41 am Title: A Changing Current
LOVED IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS U CAN, I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE. THANX
Date: 08/29/2007 - 03:56 am Title: A Changing Current
doing such a good job with this story. I know William's enemy is going to do something about the relationship between the two. Looking forward to next update. Keep up the great work