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Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 12:41 am Title: A Changing Current

Wow, that was a flurry of chapters and happenings. I'm glad to see they're each starting to see each other as waaaaay more than just 'the enemy'. Beautiful.

Reviewer: ksd Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 02:15 am Title: A Changing Current

This just gets better and better ... your muse must be on fire !!! I can picture every move that they are making, the environment and the emotions. She seems to recognize that he is an unwilling pawn in this war (as most individuals are). It is apparent that he regrets his involvement to this point. I'm anxious to see how he handles things in these next chapters ... one a day, right? (kidding)(but hopeful)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 12:01 am Title: A Changing Current

ah, the river again. I wonder if that was all William was going to say, or he had more to say.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 09:12 pm Title: A Changing Current

Gah! That was so awesome! I'm so glad you started writing this again, I missed it so much! Poor Elizabeth...such a confused mess right now. It's almost like Stockholm syndrome...falling for or trusting one's captor. Let's see how far it goes!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 06:56 pm Title: A Changing Current

Enjoyed :)
I liked the chapter; it seems as if Elizabeth and William were able to talk. They live in dangerous times. And their background (the killing of Elizabeth's family) doesn't make it easier.

Reviewer: V Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 11:35 am Title: A Changing Current

As I wait with baited breath, my every prayer was answered! Loved the story development and the depth of the characters is definitely refreshing. Loved it!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 06:30 am Title: A Changing Current

Great chapter - I absolutely love this.

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 05:49 am Title: A Changing Current

Great chapter, I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Pixiecorn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 05:44 am Title: A Changing Current

awesome update:)......cant wait for the next one

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 05:41 am Title: A Changing Current

LOVED IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS U CAN, I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE. THANX

Reviewer: jjt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 03:56 am Title: A Changing Current

doing such a good job with this story. I know William's enemy is going to do something about the relationship between the two. Looking forward to next update. Keep up the great work

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