Date: 09/27/2007 - 09:01 pm Title: The Beach
Oh man!!!! You have got to go on!!!
Date: 09/17/2007 - 11:54 pm Title: The Beach
Well..that was VERY good for your first time!!!!
Hope you'll continue, I'd love to read more from you ☺
Date: 12/04/2006 - 05:50 am Title: The Beach
you??? you're a first timer????? wow. never would have guessed. great start. buffy's in for some fun!!! lol. more soon.
Date: 12/03/2006 - 10:45 am Title: The Beach
that was really good, can't wait till the next installment.
Date: 12/03/2006 - 09:31 am Title: The Beach
What a thoughtful birthday gift for Spike... one that Buffy is enjoying too, having a day in the sun. Good that the beach was so deserted. (I'm no writer so I can't give tips but I'm looking forward to more.) Good so far :)
Date: 12/03/2006 - 02:07 am Title: The Beach
Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Date: 12/02/2006 - 09:55 am Title: The Beach
Adorable! I love 'Spike in the sun' stories, and a little bit of sand and sea did nothing but make the story even prettier!
I loved it honey!! xx
Date: 12/02/2006 - 05:14 am Title: The Beach
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!! Wounderful story.It is very well done.
Date: 12/02/2006 - 01:18 am Title: The Beach
defnitely loving it
Date: 12/02/2006 - 12:51 am Title: The Beach
WOW...really loved this start to your fic...no angst just lovely spuffy...nice change...great job and update again soon:)
Date: 12/01/2006 - 10:34 pm Title: The Beach
Hahahahaha!
Date: 12/01/2006 - 09:50 pm Title: The Beach
This is an intersting start; you need to read through it once more to catch the small errors, but for a first attempt, not bad at all!
Can't wait to see how your 'storyline' pans out! :D
Date: 12/01/2006 - 06:53 pm Title: The Beach
great start, looking forward to more
Date: 12/01/2006 - 06:10 pm Title: The Beach
Really great start. Keep up the good work.
Date: 12/01/2006 - 06:02 pm Title: The Beach
Very cute, I think Buffy might need to suffer a bit for being so flip to Spike about having no life! LOL!
Neat concept, there are a few beach stories floating around, but I've never seen one where the Scoobies play a part in getting Spike out in the sun. It's an interesting twist.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 12/01/2006 - 06:01 pm Title: The Beach
I loved it. Don't worry about it being your first time, It was wonderful :)
Date: 12/01/2006 - 05:28 pm Title: The Beach
Okay Liked the story and can't wait to read more so quick write more. I'd never know it was your cherry story
Date: 12/01/2006 - 05:27 pm Title: The Beach
I loved that! I would definitely like to see their movie night! Since they're all alone, maybe some naughty movies! lol
Date: 12/01/2006 - 04:53 pm Title: The Beach
I loved it. Can't wait to read more. I don't have any tips to give you - you're a really good writer. Totally adding this to my favs list - awaiting updates obsessively. lol. Once again, I loved it.