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Reviewer: ajw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 06:00 pm Title: Part IV

I hope you're going to finish this one!

Author's Response: But of course! I don't like leaving things unfinished. Makes me itchy...

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 04:22 am Title: Part IV

teehee! that last bit was hilarious! And YAY for Joyce for talking some sense into Buffy...bummer that Spike left, but if I were him, I would have done the same, since Buffy would probably have turned on him eventually. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! And I'm glad you liked my twist of humor. And Joyce was always a cool headed chica...most of the time.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 09:51 pm Title: Part IV

Oh! It worked :) And now everybody has to deal with the aftereffects.
Buffy and Spike didn't notice the spell break first.. still very busy. ;-) And I was right, Spike indeed claimed her. Interesting spell indeed, and a fertility spell too?
Good that Joyce could explain something more to Buffy. So Spike interpreted her feelings wrong, she wanted to get consoled. ~ This was mostly fun (seeing Buffy and Spike so heartbroken not so much) but I'm looking forward to more / aka last chapter :)

Author's Response: Well...not wrong, exactly. And knowing Buffy and Spike, had he stayed, there would have been words that would have made this story longer than the 5 chapter limit I put on it. LOL

Reviewer: hotllipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 03:10 am Title: Part IV

Too funny! Looking forward to the conclusion.

Author's Response: thanks for the review, and I'll get it up soon!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 03:05 am Title: Part IV

"there's underweaqr on my lamp!" very nice touch! More please. I love where this seems to be going.

Author's Response: haha, I sniggered when I wrote that. A true, genuine snigger.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 09:51 pm Title: Part IV

Great chapter! Loved it!

Author's Response: Merci! :)

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 07:11 pm Title: Part IV

Absolutely adored it!

Joyce's succinct observations of Buffy's thought process is fantastic.

Thank you for such a fun read.

Author's Response: Why thank you! I'm glad you like it, it was a fun write!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 06:45 pm Title: Part IV

Oh this is so good, does this spell mean that Buffy, Anya and Joyce will all be preganant and can't wait to see how the claim on Buffy will work.

Author's Response: We shall see, we shall see! :)

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 06:08 pm Title: Part IV

Gees Buffy can be so dense sometimes. Great chap. can't wait for another update.

Author's Response: Yeah, they both can. But it's kind of why we like them...it's fun getting them back together!!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 03:55 pm Title: Part IV

LOL!! I really shouldn't read this while at work... I'm trying so hard not to laugh! But it's just so funny! =D

And poor Spike... poor Buffy! They're the king and queen of miscommunication and misunderstanding each other. *sigh* lol.

Looking forward to more! =)

Author's Response: muwahaha! If your boss gets mad, tell him/her that I'll write something specifically for them, just so you can keep your job ;) And I'm actually going to address their inability to form a coherent, decent sentence in the next chapter...

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 03:38 pm Title: Part IV

OH! Giles and Joyce were in DAWN's room? Hilarious!!! I'm so glad Joyce is trying to rectify the situation. I can't wait for her to rope in Giles.

Can't blame Spike for leaving. How could he have known Buffy wouldn't want him to leave? All he sensed from her was negativity, and she didn't say a word. That rejection hurt more than any others he's had before.

And Anya might be pregnant after this....hee hee hee.....really have to marry her, now, in that case, Xan!!!

Gotta love Anya's endless demon knowledge.

Author's Response: heehee, yeah. You know, there's the whole cliche of doing it in your parents room...which Spuffy did. But your kids room? That's comedy! And I wouldn't make Anya marry Xander for any reason unless she really really really wanted to...

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 03:27 pm Title: Part IV

LMAO at the last line and ewww at Xander as a daddy

Author's Response: Yeah, well...Anya's an uber cool person, maybe she could save the child?

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 03:24 pm Title: Part IV

Great chapter! Everyone's reactions sure were interesting. Loved the mother/daughter talk between Joyce and Buffy. Can't wait to find out how the story ends! :D

Author's Response: Thanks. It's not going to be overly angsty, because I didn't want one of those. But I also didn't want sickening sunshine, puppies, and kittens either.

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