Date: 01/11/2007 - 05:58 am Title: The Proposal
You do an AMAZING job capturing the "voice" of Buffy~ I can totally hear SMG calling Spike out in the cemetary and telling him that the stalker routine is getting old. I can completely hear her voice when she rants, "forget it, I knew this would never work."
And Spike~ Love how Buffy has to acknowledge that he's more practical in his concern for Dawn's safety than she is, and that Buffy is aware that something about Spike completely "unravels" her (let's just say that makes at least two of us)! ;)
I like the way that Spike subtly proves he's been there for both of them, and that he cares and has the bruises to prove it. And then Buffy feeling badly for ignoring that little truth.
And the dream sequence was very hot! More soon, please!
Author's Response: Thank you! The thing I'm trying my hardest on is keeping the character's voice right so to hear that I've done a great job is the greatest thing ever. Thank you.
I'm glad you like the fact that Spike is being subtly. He can really be a 'in your face' person, but he also has his quiet ways.
So glad you enjoyed. Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'll have more later this week.
Date: 01/06/2007 - 01:09 pm Title: The Proposal
Now Buffy must find a way to explain everything to Spike...
And see, Buffy: Spike cares a lot, about Dawn too. He was careful where to talk about her.
*gg* And he is right, it's the second time that someone made a pair out of them.
And yet, both were able to make the other one hurt with their words.
Buffy has a bad timing too. Starting so late to dream about Spike and her... too bad that Dawn had to wake her up ;-)
Good update; looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01/06/2007 - 04:39 am Title: The Proposal
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wounderfully written.
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you!
Date: 01/05/2007 - 04:08 am Title: The Proposal
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!! :D
Author's Response: The next chapter will be up soon!
Date: 01/05/2007 - 04:08 am Title: The Proposal
Very funny story
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 01/05/2007 - 02:44 am Title: The Proposal
Of course he would agree to it, and then she would have erotically unfulfilling dreams about said vampire. I love it. When does he move in? Can't wait for more, please, update soon.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoy it! And I'm not giving away any secrets, you'll just have to wait and see what happens. ;-)
Date: 01/05/2007 - 01:48 am Title: The Proposal
Interesting premise... I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks! More will be coming soon.
Date: 01/04/2007 - 09:03 pm Title: The Proposal
Love it more please/
Author's Response: I'll have more soon!
Date: 01/04/2007 - 08:32 pm Title: The Proposal
nice chapter can't wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/04/2007 - 07:48 pm Title: The Proposal
Good, emotional chapter reminding us exactly how difficult things are for Buffy mentally.
Lovely dream sequence as well; wish mine were that good!
I can't wait 'til the charade begins.
Author's Response: Thanks! Sometimes I think peopl just want to instantly hate Buffy without thinking about where she's coming from, so I'm trying to show that. Thanks for reading and reviewing!