Date: 02/06/2007 - 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 13
And all kinds of truth have come out. I wonder if he'll take her back. I wonder if there's any way he wouldn't. Amazing. Great chapter, please, update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed, and thanks so much for starting to read my li'l fic. :)
Date: 02/06/2007 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 13
:) I love the thought that both are having feeling for the other (Buffy and Spike) but I don't think that they will be able to talk about it soon. Awe! I'm glad I was wrong! And Spike remembered at last Buffy from the Bronze. Duh.. and the trouble started. Buffy didn't believe him and overreacted. The plus side is she's trying to make up now. I hope she'll find him in time before he gets too drunk or does something silly :)
Author's Response: Haha, but you know how Spike is-- drinking and silliness are the answers to everything!
Date: 02/06/2007 - 04:49 am Title: Chapter 13
Sweet! I like that her jumping the gun on the blame was pointed out to her quickly so she can fix it.
Author's Response: Yeah, Buffy's a smart girl, but sometimes she can be so... silly about those sorts of things. bleh. But I'm glad you liked. Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/06/2007 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter 13
nice updatage. Too bad Buffy always jumps to the worse-case-scenario first then realizes her errors! Oh well, they still have to do the paintings together so I'm sure things will heat up again soon enough. More please.
Author's Response: Glad you liked! :) Updatage, haha, that made me laugh.
Date: 02/06/2007 - 02:23 am Title: Chapter 13
Well, at least Willow talked her out of her stubborness quickly. But I assume the flickering candles foreshadow something...if not the dorm catching on fire, then something else about to go wrong. Also, perhaps a bit oppotmistic about the power coming back on so quickly. Wouldn't count on it after even a minor almost expected disaster like a quake in CA.
Author's Response: Power problems in CA... bleh. I hate them. But I promise it's not too unrealistic-- all's not "omg better!" with that sort of thing, yet. :P Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02/05/2007 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oooh! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Glad you liked!
Date: 02/05/2007 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 13
Please update!
Author's Response: I'm working on my heaps of homework, and then the next chapter. :)
Date: 02/05/2007 - 10:35 am Title: Chapter 13
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Author's Response: Glad you liked!
Date: 02/05/2007 - 10:01 am Title: Chapter 13
Love it, More please.
Like the way everyone knows about the dance but her and him.
Author's Response: Haha, because Spike was so drunk and silly, and Buffy was... not wearing her contacts or something. ;) I'm in such a weird mood. :P More's coming soon!
Date: 02/05/2007 - 09:42 am Title: Chapter 13
Ah, Buffy... always jumping to conclusions when it comes to Spike..
Enjoyed... Get well !!!
Author's Response: Thanks very much. :) She's such a silly thing though, when it comes to Spike... a bit frustrating. But that's why it's so good when they finally get together!
Date: 02/05/2007 - 09:40 am Title: Chapter 13
Ok, I can see why you left the candles burning and you do have artistic licence after all!
Loved the chapter with Buffy's shame clouding her judgement; Willow talking some sense into her and the urgency of the ending. Also, you got in the word "effulgent". Heehee!
Author's Response: I've used it twice... sooo lame. But I love it! And yay for artistic licenses. :) Glad you liked!
Date: 02/05/2007 - 08:59 am Title: Chapter 13
So like Buffy and Spike to fuck it all up when it's getting good...Arrrgh Frustration. I hope Buffy can fix it, leading to a lot of spuffyness!
Author's Response: Haha, we'll just have to wait and see. ;) And it IS so like them... grr arg.
Date: 02/05/2007 - 07:41 am Title: Chapter 13
Thank goodness for Willow! I'm glad she was able to help Buffy realize her mistake. Great chapter!
I hope you feel better soon! :D
Author's Response: Thanks very much. :) For some reason, this fic is very Willow-heavy... hmmm...
Date: 02/05/2007 - 05:39 am Title: Chapter 13
more please
Author's Response: I'm working on getting more out, and I hope you liked!
Date: 02/05/2007 - 05:31 am Title: Chapter 13
Right...no burning buildings...
Oh, Buffy........poor Spike. She notices that he wears his expressions openly, then turns right around and accuses him of lying...when the truth was obvious on his face, if she had looked. Yep, really huge mistake. Thank goodness Willow was able to make her see that immediately........this could have lasted for days, knowing them.
Yep, he wouldn't have bothered to say the final pieces just clicked for him if he didn't care about there being a lie between them. That was funny how Willow immediately recognized him as the mysterious dancer guy. She just blurted it out there as soon as the door closed! LOL....
Author's Response: Haha... Just keep saying that. Buildings don't burn in Buffyverse (unless there are cave people inside of them or something).
Haha, well Willow's not one to really keep secrets-- I love the nervous girl. :) Hope it was believable!
Date: 02/05/2007 - 05:12 am Title: Chapter 13
Grr, Buffy the blockhead. She can be so frustrating sometimes, but I'm glad Willow made her realize the truth. He could have pretended that Riley was lying, but he didn't. Buffy has to realize that he's one of the good ones and pushing him away would be of the bad. Okay, it may sound like I'm being bitchy right now, but I still love the story. Hope for more soon=)
Author's Response: Haha, I know how it is-- the ranting of the frustrating actions of characters. They can be so dumb sometimes, huh? :)
Date: 02/05/2007 - 04:38 am Title: Chapter 13
wow. nice going buffy. glad willow was there to help her realize her mistake. loved it lots nad lots. more soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked. :) Willow is cool, haha.