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Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 11:12 am Title: Chapter 7

Ok the image of a naked Riley is in my brain and I dont like it! I dont like it!!! in fact that particular image could kill me. Although I'm guessing the sex was highly unsatisfying. Reading on xx hopefully the image of a naked *gags* Riley wont even be in the fic again.

Author's Response: Yes, the imagine of naked Riley is enough to make anyone lose their cookies. Bleh! Of course, I was told about another genre of fanfic earlier that made me throw up in my mouth....SPILEY! Can you imagine?! Gross!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 04:39 am Title: Chapter 7

see i wrote "unsatisfying" but i meant "unsatisfied". the image of Riley's naked body in my brain disabled me for a minute.

Author's Response: HA! Yes, that image has a very hih upchuck factor. Either way, I was picking up what you were putting down.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 04:37 am Title: Chapter 7

see. u ruined it! the mystique is gone and i soo hope it comes back. the first words i read is: "Buffy slid from the bed, leaving Riley snoring peacefully." i almost upchucked in my mouth! that's just so gross! and as i guessed it, she was extremely unsatisfying. i'm debating on wheather i should just skip this chapter and move on or go back for more torture. tick.....tock....tick....tock.....:::sigh:: i hate myself. ::scrolls up::

Author's Response: Aw, come on! It's a perfect way to describe the lack of...stimulation...that Buffy is getting from both the sexual aspect of their relationship to the emotional aspect. You know you love it!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 07:06 am Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 7

Too bad that Buffy is dating Riley now when she thinks that some important things are missing between them.

Author's Response: Kinda like their relationship in the show, huh? Although she cares for him, they never should have been together that long.

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