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Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 12

Stupid, asshole, selfish prick that should die very painfully and should be cut into incredibly slowly until he bleeds out and then should become alive again so it can be done to him again!!!! other then that the chapter was very well written. reading on xx

Author's Response: LoL! Thanks for the....colorful review!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 05:31 am Title: Chapter 12

okay, last part of the chapter, i'm on my tipy-toes going "where's spike? where's spike?" then THE ASSHOLE is beating up Dawn and Buffy and i'm practically hollering it. and i'm just imagining how Spike has heard about this so i know how mad he is. then he walks in and she's all cut up and i'm just like "fuck!". embarassment aside, i can't wait for Finn to get his!

great chappy.

Author's Response: This was a difficult chapter to write. Not so much with the actual writing, but by getting the right amount of emotion and what not in it. Glad you liked it, aside from the ickyness.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 07:41 am Title: Chapter 12

This looks promising! :) Thay meet again.
Riley was such a bastard, but I don't think he'll hurt her again, not now anyway. Who was that woman? Dawn was really brave.

Author's Response: I asume you mean the one doing naughty things to Riley? That's just an insignificant blip on the grand scheme of things, no one important! Thanks!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter 12

Riley... liked him on BtVs, husband didn't.. too prep for him. But this one.. she's has to call the cops..

And her own private body guard. Spike. Nice.

Enjoying.

Author's Response: Who wouldn't love Spike as the protector of their body? **giggles** As you will be able to tell in like all of my stories, I really do not like Riley. Totally pissed me off most of the time! Glad you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 12

Just found your story today. Had to read it all. Nice pot-boiler. please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! I should have another chapter up tomorrow around 7pm. Please check back!!!

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 12

Okay, you have me offically hooked. I can't wait to see Spike kick the living crap out of Riley (I didn't like him in the show anyway)!!! More please please please please!

With sugar on top :)

Author's Response: I will have another chapter up tomorrow, probably around 7pm. Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 12

Oh yes yes yes at last. What a piece of work Riley turned out to be. Great chapter in a very nasty sort of way.

Author's Response: Yeah, Riley is a ponce. Couldn't stand that she was stronger than him in the show and couldn't stand that her career was going to be much brighter than his. Jealous punk! Thanks for reading and reviewing, love hearing from you guys!

Reviewer: Gillypod Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 09:46 am Title: Chapter 12

Finally you post the chapter where Riley is a complete sod. You need to put up the next one to make people feel happy at the reunion after all the badness. Still loving it even second time around

Author's Response: I loved that chapter, even though it consists of some pretty bad content.

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