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Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 07:12 am Title: Chapter 20

yes! the classic gym scene!!!! awesome!!! i love how he'll just strip down w/ no regard. i wish he'd do that in real life!!! damn!

Author's Response: For real! That would be so awesome. **drools**

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2007 - 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 20

Still hot :) But I wonder what Riley is up to? He knows where she lives....

Author's Response: He's not being a good boy, that's for sure! Thanks again!

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 04:19 am Title: Chapter 20

nice naughty chapter

Author's Response: Thanks! For a long time I couldn't write the smut aspect of the story. Now, I can't seem to stop!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 20

good update

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Morbidmuch Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 20

I really likeit and I can't wait for teh next chapter :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I am hoping to have another chapter out by this weekend, but real life will be hectic this week. Stay tuned...

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 20

That was a fun chapter lots of spuffiness, can't wait to see what happens next. This story is really good and so well written , luving it.

Author's Response: Thanks Jo! Love hearing from you guys, really gets the Muse going!

Reviewer: nichole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 20

great chapter and update...i look forward to more...N

Author's Response: Thanks Nichole. As I have said previously, I am training a new person at work and will probably not be able to update as much. Thanks again.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 10:43 am Title: Chapter 20

Love it, more please.
So it Buffy trying to say that she doesn't want Angel to pay him anymore.


Author's Response: Thank you! Actually, Buffy pays Spike. Angel just gets the contract going. So, Buffy feels totally weird paying Spike to protect her if they are having "the sex".

Reviewer: Gillypod Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:45 am Title: Chapter 20

Nice and smutty. The chapters are just getting better and better - hope you bring Riley back soon though cos he needs his ass kicked.

Author's Response: Thanks. This chapter started out as a fill in the gaps thing, but in the end I really liked it. Riley will be here shortly, just haven't quite figured out how I want the ass kicking to go down. Trust me, he will get what he deserves!

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:44 am Title: Chapter 20

great spuffy! im glad psycho riley hasn't come in yet! his last comment about their relationship is soo cute! hope you write more soon its great!

Author's Response: Thanks! It took me several days to get this chapter just right, or as close as possible. I am going to try and write some this weekend on both of my stories, if all goes well! Thanks again.

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