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Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 07:26 am Title: Chapter 22

i love how Buffy's made out to be the "perfect" woman but in stories she constantly can't cook or drive. LOL. i love the whole freakin' chapter!!

Author's Response: Aww shucks, thanks.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2007 - 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 22

Seems like I'm reading again... I just couldn't stay away :) What about Riley? Is he lurking outside the house?


Author's Response: Glad to have you back! Thanks!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 22

Really nice chapter.


Author's Response: Thank you Sam!

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 22

Awesome chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Gillypod Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 22

Hi babes, really great chapter. You don't need the smut to produce fantastic writing and this just proves. Keep it up, honey, and we expect more from you soon. And I agree, Riley is a ponce

Author's Response: Thanks Glynis! I wasn't really sure about my stopping point when I letf work this morning, so I didn't know how you guys would like it. So very glad to see it went over well! I am going to try and get the other part out before I leave work in the morning! Thanks again!!!!!

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 22

i love the way thier relationshp is going , they are so good together , makes you wonder what
whedon was thinking on the show coupling her with Mr. broody and Riley the Doofus . Thats the one thing i hated about the show. Anyway this is a great story and i'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter and may i ad that your writing style is great.

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks Jo. Totally agree with you on the selection of Buffy's dates. But, Whedon always pointed out that a "happy couple is a boring couple!" so I guess that explains it. Also, thank you so very much for the wonderful comment on my writting style! While I am quite confindent in the storyline, my writting abilities are still questionable in my mind since this in my first fic. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh lovely get together.......the calm before the storm. You might want to go and change your chapter heading....to 24 from 1.....I hate when I do that...LOL



Author's Response: AGH! Thank you Kimber for pointing out the chapter number. I was in such a hurry to post before leaving work this morning that I missed that. And yes, there is a storm a brewing. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh I love this story, Hope Riley doesn't get to them again. More please.

You always say more when you are drunk.

OH and a word of advice don't make steamed seaweed wraps a week after you start dating your husband for your first thing sooking him. 12 yrslater and still snot sure about my cooking.

Author's Response: Thank you! However, Riley will strike soon. Things will be bad and you guyswill more than likely throw things at me! LoL! Just remember, this is a Spuffy story. Also, my husband won't eat anything! Period. It's all plain hamburgers, chicken fingers and french fries. He's 25 going on 12. So, I never have to worry about the steamed seaweed wraps anytime soon. The bad part is that I am a really good cook, other people beg for me to make them dinner but my own husband turns his nose up. Men suck sometimes! Thanks again!

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 22

"looks like they found the wine" lol. Great update, glad to see its so regular. hope to see more soon!

Author's Response: Had to use that line. My best friends husband actually said that about me and her one night many years ago after our monthy "girls day in" where we got wine, pizza and chick movies. He and his friend came home and found us giggling on the couch. It was funny. Thanks for the review.

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