Reviews For Breathless
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Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 09:05 am Title: Chapter 34

as much as i LOVE this story, i really don't think Riley is going to go quietly. i think there's going to be a confrontation and i just had a flash of when Buffy runs after Dawn that it's going to be on the beach. i'm probably wrong but i pictured crazy feckin' Riley being, well, crazy and he had someone, i'm not sure, maybe Spike and a gun and he was doing a stand-off with someone else. now u can't go and change it but that would've been an awesome ending!!! now to move ahead to the real one!!

Author's Response: Glad you're still sticking with it, the end is pretty good...maybe not as exciting as say guns and whatnot..but, sufficient.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2007 - 06:24 am Title: Chapter 34

Enjoyed :)

Author's Response: Good! :)

Reviewer: pixiecorn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2007 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter 34

.........well were just waiting for the shit to hit the roof now....i hope what u have planned next isnt to big

i'm loving the story keep up the great work :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I do have some angsty drama planned for the future, but I promise it won't be too terrible. Thanks again!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2007 - 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 34

Loved it! Wary though of the "what can go wrong". Can't wait til the next update!

Author's Response: I just had to put in the dreaded "what else can go wrong" line! Simply because it always means that something willl go wrong soon. Thank you for the review. If all goes well tonight I should have another chapter out by early morning, I am about half way through with the next update!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 34

Don't give Dawn anymore sugery energy.....LOL

I too wonder when the shit is going to hit the fan.


Kimber

Author's Response: Dawn will be supervised from now on with the sugar intake! Thanks for the review and yes, the poop will be hitting the fan shortly. Wouldn't be an angsty story if not, huh?!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 - 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 34

Nice update. How bad are you going to make it? Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! It won't be too terribly bad, I promise. But there will be some DRAMA coming up soon!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 - 10:25 am Title: Chapter 34

OH I think BUffy is worrying over nothing, somehow I don't see Spike giving Buffy up.
More please love it,

Love your other story to I haven't seen you update it in a while Lose Control.

Author's Response: Thank you for the fantastic review! I will go ahead and post an angst warning...in the next few chapters the poop will literally hit the fan. Don't worry too much, this is still very much a Spuffy story! As far as my other fic, I posted a chapter several weeks ago and I know that i have been rather lazy on it. However, I am really trying to finish Breathless before it totally drives me insane! Thanks again!!!

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