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Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 09:21 am Title: Chapter 38

okay i was lovin' the whole Anya "riley has a small weenie" thing until i saw the judge's last name!!! HARGROVE!!! HARGROVE!!! that's MY last name!! omg!! i eyes just bugged!! that tripped me out to a zenith scale! now i'm kind of giddy cuz i'm "in" ur story!! LMAO

Author's Response: Hey! That's cool. I came up with that name after dispatching a call to an address on Hargrove Rd. Silly, huh? Loved Anya in this chapter!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2007 - 06:48 am Title: Chapter 38

So Lilah is Riley's attorney... I wonder how this goes...

Author's Response: She's just as much of a slimey toad in this as in Angel!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 38

Can't believe Riley's going to try to get away with a insanity plea! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: He can try! Can't say if he will succeed or not! Thanks for the review and I hope to have something out by Sunday morning!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 11:17 am Title: Chapter 38

Good update. Surely Riley's insane to think he's going to get away with it. Please don't make it too bad for Buffy.

Author's Response: Well, Riley is a tad bit nutso! The trial part is actually not going to be too bad on Buffy. Or, that's what I imagine as of right now. It's the aftermath that leads to some problems. Ok...that's too much information for now! Thanks for the review, Sam!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 09:43 am Title: Chapter 38

Oh, I hope the judge hits them both, Lilah and Riley, with his wooden thingy.........

OH, I can't wait for the response.........

More please

Author's Response: Hey Kimber. i am planning (hoping) to have another chapter out sometime this weekend. My computer at home went caput and all of my chapter outlines are on it. My husband, being all sweet, took it to the shop before I could get my dad darned disc out of the drive. Hope the comp techs dont read too much!!! Anyways, going on my memory on the next chapter, so it may take a little longer than normal. Hopefully by Sunday morning!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 09:38 am Title: Chapter 38

He wouldn't. Oh this is just bad.
MOre please.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! i am glad you liked it, even though i wasn't overly pleased with the whole thing. It was just so forced on my part. I was thinking of drawing the trial out, but really I just want to get this story finished soon. I am going to try and get something out this weekend, so stay tuned!

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