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Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 09:55 am Title: Chapter 44

i'd do what Buffy did but i'd certainly listen to Joyce's advice!

Author's Response: Yep, gotta take the motherly advice...unless its my mom's. She's a bit of a loon, but I love her!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2007 - 07:06 am Title: Chapter 44

Joyce did the right thing :)

Author's Response: Yes, she did. See, I made Joyce goog in one story!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2007 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 44

I feel really bad for Buffy! After being in an abusive relationship with Riley it can't be easy for her to decide whether to trust her love for Spike! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Muse has been wanting to take the story in a totally different/long drawn out way, but I really dont want to spend any more time on this than needed. I should have something out by the am! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2007 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 44

I'm so sorry to hear about your kitty! I know I'd be devastated if my kitty, Bella, disappeared. I hope you find your kitty soon! And I hope your crazy week turns around. =)

Good chapter! I'm glad Joyce isn't against Spike on this. Hopefully they can sort things out. And hopefully Buffy will find out that it was Lilah and not Riley that gave her the file.

Author's Response: Thanks Jin. My kitty, Rusty, is sadly still MIA. :( I would like for Buffy to figure out that Lilah is the culprit, but I haven't figured out how to put it in. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2007 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 44

Poor Spike, tried and convicted just as sure as Riley has been. Seems a shame that he also has been punished with Captain Cardboard without a chance to plea his case. Seems to me that Buffy needs to decide whether or not if Spike is important enough to her to trust him around not only herself but Dawn as well. Seems to me that Spike never harmed Dawn or Buffy like Riley and that Dawn may need to be the one who will sway Buffy's mind on whether or not Spike can be trusted to not hurt her or her big sis. Look forward to more chapters.

Author's Response: Hey Vette! Thanks for the fantastic review. Buffy will get her head out of her ass soon, I promise.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2007 - 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 44

Please don't make Buffy wait too long before going to speak to Spike. I don't think time will make it any easier to do and I still feel really bad for him and he wasn't even in this chapter! Joyce can see that his story is plausible which could help his cause. Please update soon and I hope your cat turns up.

Author's Response: I have actually decided to change a few things in the story to make it shorter because I am ready to move on to another story. Spike will make an appearance in the next chappie. Things will progress a little faster from here on out as long as things go allright with RL. Thanks for the review, Sam.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2007 - 10:52 am Title: Chapter 44

Thank you Joyce, we saw what Buffy is feeling I wonder what Spike is feeling.

More please.

Author's Response: I thought a bit of motherly instinct might knock some sense into Buffy. Thanks for the review!

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