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Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 08:15 am Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter, very hot. :)

Author's Response: Hey, I thought you were going to bed for the night? Muahaha!! (Best evil laugh I could do) I have you hooked!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 08:05 am Title: Chapter 15

That was hot, think I need a cold shower :)

Author's Response: Hell, I needed a cold shower and a cigarette and I wrote the dad-blame thing! LoL!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 07:53 am Title: Chapter 14

It's not easy to be a star... poor Buffy.

Author's Response: Always have a hefty dose of bad with every good. Sucks sometimes.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 07:49 am Title: Chapter 13

Yeah, she needs a place, she can't stay there. The beach house will be fine :)

Author's Response: Yes, I imagine the beach house will do wonders for Buffy! HeHe!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 07:41 am Title: Chapter 12

This looks promising! :) Thay meet again.
Riley was such a bastard, but I don't think he'll hurt her again, not now anyway. Who was that woman? Dawn was really brave.

Author's Response: I asume you mean the one doing naughty things to Riley? That's just an insignificant blip on the grand scheme of things, no one important! Thanks!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 07:32 am Title: Chapter 11

I hope they will have a great tour! :)

Author's Response: They will! Have to have something positive in poor Buffy's life, right? She'd go round the bend if everything was wonky.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 07:26 am Title: Chapter 10

Will she notice him? :) I hope she will.

Author's Response: Maybe? Maybe not? Guess you'll just have to read more, huh? Thanks!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 07:16 am Title: Chapter 9

I guess she will leave Riley soon.

Author's Response: All in due time, my pet! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 07:11 am Title: Chapter 8

I hope she'll say no.

Author's Response: Now where would all the "fun" angst come from if she said no? :)

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 07:06 am Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 07:00 am Title: Chapter 6

So Dru finally left him, good for him, they didn't seem to get along at all. Was he cheating on her with others?
Not very good behaviour if you're in a relationship...

Author's Response: No, he didn't ever cheat on Dru...well, until the very naughty bathroom thing with Buffy. It just had to be done, right?

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 06:53 am Title: Chapter 5

That was hot, too bad that Dru destroyed the magic.

Author's Response: Damn the Dru! Not too much more of that though!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 06:43 am Title: Chapter 4

Now, you got me hooked :p I've got to read more :)
I wonder if she will stay or go home?

Author's Response: I love that you are hooked! I especially love hearing about your addiction, you are a fantastic reviewer! Makes me smile!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 06:36 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh, no, Riley... *lol*
Beautifully written , liked the last sentence a lot.

Author's Response: Yeah, stupid Riley, but he finally gets whats coming to him, just takes a while. Thank you so much! It's been so long since I have had a review for this story that I have actually went back and reread most of it, so I think we are on the same chapters! LoL!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

Faith is always Faith :) I hope Buffy will dare to show her songs for the band. I guess everyone will like them, except Faith.

Author's Response: Yep, Faith is always Faith...you just can't change her! Thanks!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, you were right :) Like it so far... And I love that song :)

Author's Response: Great! So glad that you decided to check this one out! It's my first and I am really proud of it! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter 12

Riley... liked him on BtVs, husband didn't.. too prep for him. But this one.. she's has to call the cops..

And her own private body guard. Spike. Nice.

Enjoying.

Author's Response: Who wouldn't love Spike as the protector of their body? **giggles** As you will be able to tell in like all of my stories, I really do not like Riley. Totally pissed me off most of the time! Glad you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Tanja Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue

I have truly enjoyed reading your story, even if it's taken me forever to finish it. RL sucks! ; ) I can't wait to read more stories from you, I think you're really talented. Thanks for sharing this story with us! : )

Author's Response: RL can be bitch! Too bad we can't really sit around reading fanfic all day, right? Immerse ourselves in yummy-James Marsters hotness all day. Grr! Anyway, thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a wonderful review!

Reviewer: SpikesBabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue

Wow , i got angry , i even cried. its so near to what happened to me execpt i didn´t got in to a new relationship.

I was frustraded when i read what others reviewed. I been abused and even álmost strangled and . i could totaly understand Rileys behavior. And i can also relate to Spikes feelings , that he wanna kill Riley.. I have a male friend who wanted to kill or abuse my X-housebound badly! There is no rules for how people reacts when somebody they care for gets hurt!

So please belive me when i say , that this was one of teh best fics i read .. And to me it was so close to the real thing it scared me. I liked it a lot!

Author's Response: Hey Spikes Babe! Thank you so much for the heartfelt review! While I haven't been through the through the exact same thing that many people have went through with a physically abusive partner, I have had to deal with an emotionally abusive one and I tried to bring that out in the story. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my story. Breathless was my very first venture into the fanfic world and I am astounded at the response it reveived. Thank you again!!!

Reviewer: sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2007 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue

I really enjoyed this story - particularly the plot centered chapters. I would have preferred that they were the predominant portion. I thought you developed the characters well and the story was well written. For a story without a beta - there were remarkably few errors and there certainly weren't enough of them to detract from the story. Good job! Thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Sorry it has taken so long for me to respond, but I just got back from the beach. Seeing that this was my very first fic, I am pleased that you found it to be developed so well. Thank you again!

Reviewer: youdontknowme Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2007 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue

Don't forget to mark this as complete! Great job, loved this fic.

Author's Response: OMG! Thank you for reminding me. I totally forgot to do that! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2007 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue

Can't tell you how much I loved your fic! Will be on the look out for any other fics you write!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! If you have been reading my other fic, Lose Control, at all I will be starting back on it this week! As for starting any thing new, I have to weed through the numerous ideas floating around in my brain and pick something. Thanks again for reading this story and for always taking the time to leave a review.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue

OH that was such a great ending, but why do I have this little feeling you are cheating us on the little gift he is going to flip on the way she rubbed to tummy first makes me wonder is she pregnant.


Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I had originally planned on taking the final chapter all the way to the big announcement, but time became an issue as well as interest. While I love this story since it was my very first, I was starting to get bored with it and wanted to hurry and finish. I really dislike it when authors leave their storys as WIPs and I didn't want to do that to my readers since you guys have been so wonderful about leaving reviews! thanks again!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 05:48 am Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue

That was a lovely ending. I have my happy face on now! Thank you.

Author's Response: And thank you, Sam for such a nice review. So glad that you liked Breathless and were kind enough to take the time to comment on each chapter!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 02:53 am Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue

Really enjoyed reading this story and in my imagination, Buffy breaks the news of the upcoming addition to their family with a song.

Thanks for this story and look forward to reading your other stories.

Author's Response: Wouldn't that be funny? Somehow I think finding the perfect song to announce getting married and preggers would be difficult. Thanks for thre review, vette!

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