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Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 45

Okay let say this first I'm totally enjoying reading this fic. I can't see any problems with the way Buffy, Spike or even Riley are being portrayed.As your the writer of this fic let your own instincts guide you and not the views of others. We all recieve reviews we don't always want or like but the best thing is to ignore the flamer and maybe they will grow up a little...As for the next update I look forward to seeing it when your ready to post....

Author's Response: I am blessed in the fact that I have only received one truly unpleasant review and this is my first attempt at fanfic. Must being doing something right, yeah? Thank you so much for taking the time to soothe my fears! LoL!

Reviewer: thirdstar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 45

That was kind of a stupid review to receive. Did they also complain that Buffy isn't actually a famous singer and that Spike would burst into flames in the sunlight?

This is a very nice story and I think that you managed to stay true to their characters, considering this is AU and they would have experienced different things in their lives to make them have slightly different personalities.

I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here and I am looking forward to more Spuffiness.

Author's Response: I did try to make all of the characters as close to the show as possible. But, you are right...being human and/or nonSlayer will make the outcomes different and I think some people just haven't thought that idea through. Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 11:22 am Title: Chapter 45

I think that the author of the bad review is wrong. This fanfiction here of yours is

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review for me!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 10:37 am Title: Chapter 45

I don't feel that about Spike at all. You've created a situation that is very plausible and certainly far more interesting to read than anything I could come up with - hence my reviewing your writing! You must be doing something right - you're on chapter 45 - and people are still reading and reviewing. Please keep up the good work and update as soon as you are able.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Sam! Being that this is my first foray into the fanfic world, I am really elated to see that it has done so well. Thanks again!

Reviewer: rachel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 10:16 am Title: Chapter 45

I like this story, and it's your own to take where ever you want it to go.

Keep writing.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Rachel. It has made me so happy to get so many positive reviews today! The next update probably wont be out until midweek of next week because I will be out of town visiting friends.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 10:04 am Title: Chapter 45

First off no I do not think you have treated Spike like a piece of meat, this reviewer u spoke of must be new to fanficdom if she can say the characters would'nt act this way, like u say in your A/N this story is AU and your own creation ,one that i've greatly enjoyed reading . Don't let this one review bother u so much, your doing great kiddo,keep it uo.

Author's Response: After hearing from all of you guys and receiving such a great response in reference to my story I really don't care too much about the bad review. Hey, it's the only one like that so far. Everything else has been totatallu positive. Well, thanks for making my day brighter, Jo!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 09:44 am Title: Chapter 45

I disagree...you've made Spike human. I think this is a great story and have enjoyed reading it. Can't wait for more updates

Author's Response: So very ture. I imagine if Spike was a vampire and chipless Riley would have ended up drained on the beach somewhere and not just getting the crap beat out of him! LoL! As far as updates, I am going out of town to visit friends for the weekend so there more than likely wont be any posts until midweek of next week. Thanks for the review, Jenn!

Reviewer: cvc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 09:16 am Title: Chapter 45

that reviewer was wrong. i was gonna say stupid but i did not want to seem mean !!i love this story

Author's Response: I am really happy that you are liking my story and thank you so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 08:12 am Title: Chapter 45

Oh I think it is great. As you stated it is AU, and one thing we know from the show Spike can't handle something he drinks.

I love the way you are portarying him, and Buffy and Riley for the matter.



Author's Response: Agreed and thank you so very much for taking the time to review. I do sometimes feel that I am slacking in the character dept. but I try very hard to make it is close as possible. With Riley, i just hated his character so I guess that shows in my writting. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Elly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 07:23 am Title: Chapter 45

Still loving it. As for the negative comment, bollocks. You made perfectly well-rounded characters & that person just doesn't know a good thing if he or she were slapped in the face with it. I happen to love this fic & am anxious to see how it all comes to an eventual end. :) You have a rare talent of writing, something that I know I will never be good at. I commend you for it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Elly. I am still rpoud of my story, especially since it's my first attempt ever at fanfiction. It just hurts to hear negative comments, especially from a reader who has never reviewed before! Thanks again.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2007 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 44

I feel really bad for Buffy! After being in an abusive relationship with Riley it can't be easy for her to decide whether to trust her love for Spike! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Muse has been wanting to take the story in a totally different/long drawn out way, but I really dont want to spend any more time on this than needed. I should have something out by the am! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2007 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 44

I'm so sorry to hear about your kitty! I know I'd be devastated if my kitty, Bella, disappeared. I hope you find your kitty soon! And I hope your crazy week turns around. =)

Good chapter! I'm glad Joyce isn't against Spike on this. Hopefully they can sort things out. And hopefully Buffy will find out that it was Lilah and not Riley that gave her the file.

Author's Response: Thanks Jin. My kitty, Rusty, is sadly still MIA. :( I would like for Buffy to figure out that Lilah is the culprit, but I haven't figured out how to put it in. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2007 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 44

Poor Spike, tried and convicted just as sure as Riley has been. Seems a shame that he also has been punished with Captain Cardboard without a chance to plea his case. Seems to me that Buffy needs to decide whether or not if Spike is important enough to her to trust him around not only herself but Dawn as well. Seems to me that Spike never harmed Dawn or Buffy like Riley and that Dawn may need to be the one who will sway Buffy's mind on whether or not Spike can be trusted to not hurt her or her big sis. Look forward to more chapters.

Author's Response: Hey Vette! Thanks for the fantastic review. Buffy will get her head out of her ass soon, I promise.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2007 - 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 44

Please don't make Buffy wait too long before going to speak to Spike. I don't think time will make it any easier to do and I still feel really bad for him and he wasn't even in this chapter! Joyce can see that his story is plausible which could help his cause. Please update soon and I hope your cat turns up.

Author's Response: I have actually decided to change a few things in the story to make it shorter because I am ready to move on to another story. Spike will make an appearance in the next chappie. Things will progress a little faster from here on out as long as things go allright with RL. Thanks for the review, Sam.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2007 - 10:52 am Title: Chapter 44

Thank you Joyce, we saw what Buffy is feeling I wonder what Spike is feeling.

More please.

Author's Response: I thought a bit of motherly instinct might knock some sense into Buffy. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2007 - 05:06 am Title: Chapter 43

Started reading this story and really am enjoying it. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: So glad that you are enjoying my story, Vette! Thanks for taking the time to leave a review also. I love hearing from you guys. Guess I need the validation like everyone else on here, huh? I am hoping to get something out by Sunday, just depends on how busy I am at work tonight and tomorrow.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 43

You're weaving an intriguing tale; the only problems I have with it are some of Buffy's reactions--then again, I'm a psych student, so I know the psychological effects of domestic violence a little more intimately than most. But still, liking this.

Author's Response: I'm sorry that you are having problems with the story. I am trying to do it as well as possible. I wanted her to be vulnerable and hurt, but still try to be strong in the end. Even though her being strong has hurt my dear Spike. Maybe I can make him feel better, yeah? Thanks for the review, Xela!

Reviewer: dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 43

wow that was a sad chapter. please hurry and update again soon, i want to see how buffy and spike work through this new angsty ghost from the past.

Author's Response: It will take some time for Buffy to figure out not only what she wants but what she needs. Be patient, I will fix it soon. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: camp8 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 43

fix it

Author's Response: I will eventually, promise. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 43

This is so lame. After all the tenderness and devotion that Spike has shown to Buffy during her ordeal this is what she she would repay him? I know that she has a bad experience with Buffy but after everything they have been true she must have at least gave him a chance to explain. She owe him that.

Author's Response: The way Buffy treated Spike is lame or my story? Please let it be the first topic. :)~ Anyway, Buffy just needs some time to get her head out of her ass. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 43

Bad Lilah! Isn't it sad that there are ppl just like her in RL?

I hope Buffy'll let Spike explain...

Author's Response: Lilah blows. I totally know someone just like her in real life and there have been many instances where I thought she needed to be bitch slapped. Buffy will come around eventually...just needs time, junk food and maybe a visit from a close friend or two. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 10:53 am Title: Chapter 43

OK , she made me mad , disbelieving him like that , time for Angel ,Cordy and Buffy to talk , i'm sure they know the truth. Enjoying your story very much ,love that u update frequently.

Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review, Jo. I am always afraid that I am not updating enough for my readers. In the begining when it was new to me I was updating several times a week. Now that it's coming to an end I find that it's harder to write now. Maybe it's because I am overthinking the situations or something?

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter 43

Why do I feel that Angel is going to intervine in their relationship and help them get back together.

More please, love it.

Author's Response: You read my mind. As I have said before, the story unfolds for me as I write for you guys. While I may have something laid out in advance, I can never tell what Muse is going to do with it when I sit in front of the computer. I am thinking about having Angel explain some things about crazy Dru. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 10:11 am Title: Chapter 43

I think that closets should be outlawed and that way no one would be able to keep their skeletons in them. Feel bad for both of them but why do I always feel worse for Spike! Surely he'll have a hard time convincing her to change her mind about this. Please update soon because I need some Spuffiness in my life.

Author's Response: I totally agree with you Sam. I always feel sorry for Spike even when he does something wrong. Maybe it's because he's just so damn hot and loveable?! Thanks for the review and I will try to get something out soon.

Reviewer: cvc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 09:29 am Title: Chapter 43

awwwwww.....crap d reationship is messed up again!!!!i really love your story !!!i mean really !!!but i hate angst ! i understand dat its part of your plot though sooooo ....i am lookin forward 2 d spuffy

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Things will improve soon, stick with it!

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