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Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 10:16 am Title: Chapter 46

nice use of homecoming!!! u so rock!! i would so kick Angel's ass just on principle or at least throw him out!

Author's Response: At least a good kick to the shin just for the whole principle of the matter, huh?

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Date: 02/25/2008 - 10:05 am Title: Chapter 45

okay, first off i wish i could knock their heads together and just say "MAKE UP!". and maybe Liliah could get AIDS i dunno.

and that review is TOTALLY wrong!! u didn't make Spike out to be a piece of meat! he's just loving, soft naughty Spike from S6-7 (NOT INCLUDING THE ATTEMPTED RAPE). and i'm thinking that Buffy is maybe the Buffy from S2-3. she was real peppy and teeny. and Riley would SOO act like that if he was on drugs and drinking! hell they implanted him w/ that strength thing, fixed him, and he went all uber bite-me! so don't listen to that stupid critic cuz they don't know squat!!!!

ooooh only a couple more chapters to go!

Author's Response: Ha! Didn't think about giving her a nasty infection, damn! Thanks for the very refreshing, uplifting review..always nice to hear that its someone else being a dork and not me writing badly. :)

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 09:55 am Title: Chapter 44

i'd do what Buffy did but i'd certainly listen to Joyce's advice!

Author's Response: Yep, gotta take the motherly advice...unless its my mom's. She's a bit of a loon, but I love her!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 09:51 am Title: Chapter 43

i believe him. Dru was always off her rocker and did like a little pain w/ the pleasure. he just broke my heart but i can stand in buffy's corner. i'm yo-yoing.

Author's Response: I did the same thing while writing this story. Could totally see things from both sides.

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Date: 02/25/2008 - 09:46 am Title: Chapter 42

let me guess: Spike did time for beating someone up??? and i don't care how noble Riley tried to be, he's still a dick!

Author's Response: It's a little more complex than that and yes, Riley is still very much a prick!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 09:42 am Title: Chapter 41

i'm just waiting for the Dragnet theme to come on! and yeah, Liliah is a BIOTCH!

Author's Response: Yes, she's been awarded the Super Biyatch trophy.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 09:37 am Title: Chapter 40

that was awesome! wish i could've been there!!! and ooooh yeah, Riley is up shit creek without a float!!!

Author's Response: Yes he is, but he so deserves to be!

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Date: 02/25/2008 - 09:30 am Title: Chapter 39

yep! something's going to happen on the beach!

Author's Response: Yea Fun!

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Date: 02/25/2008 - 09:21 am Title: Chapter 38

okay i was lovin' the whole Anya "riley has a small weenie" thing until i saw the judge's last name!!! HARGROVE!!! HARGROVE!!! that's MY last name!! omg!! i eyes just bugged!! that tripped me out to a zenith scale! now i'm kind of giddy cuz i'm "in" ur story!! LMAO

Author's Response: Hey! That's cool. I came up with that name after dispatching a call to an address on Hargrove Rd. Silly, huh? Loved Anya in this chapter!

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Date: 02/25/2008 - 09:15 am Title: Chapter 36

i'm lovin' the spuffy love but god i can't wait to get rid of Riley!

Author's Response: Soon, I promise!

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Date: 02/25/2008 - 09:11 am Title: Chapter 35

I'D DO IT OFTEN WITH HIM TOO AND SOD MY LITTLE SIS!! SHE HAS MORE SEX THAN ME!!

Author's Response: Agreed! Course, I'd prefer not to think about any sexual experience my lil sis has. Gross.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 09:05 am Title: Chapter 34

as much as i LOVE this story, i really don't think Riley is going to go quietly. i think there's going to be a confrontation and i just had a flash of when Buffy runs after Dawn that it's going to be on the beach. i'm probably wrong but i pictured crazy feckin' Riley being, well, crazy and he had someone, i'm not sure, maybe Spike and a gun and he was doing a stand-off with someone else. now u can't go and change it but that would've been an awesome ending!!! now to move ahead to the real one!!

Author's Response: Glad you're still sticking with it, the end is pretty good...maybe not as exciting as say guns and whatnot..but, sufficient.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 08:57 am Title: Chapter 33

like i said before...i LOVE soft lovable Spike. he's just got to bring out the "grrrrr" every now and again. thanks for keeping Buffy with him! (duh...it's Spuffy!)

Author's Response: Agreed. Love my Spuffy!

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Date: 02/25/2008 - 08:51 am Title: Chapter 32

as much as i WOULD melt, those were also the famous last words of Mr. Riley "GAG ME" Finn before he went beserk-boy!

(Spike said i love you!!! ::giddy bounce::)

Author's Response: Riley sucks! Boo on him! And, yes, Spike professed his love. WooHoo!

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Date: 02/25/2008 - 08:45 am Title: Chapter 31

nvm on the baby question!!! and ooooh see now that's a cliffhanger!

Author's Response: I thought the baby topic was covered, had to reread the chapter!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 08:41 am Title: Chapter 30

correct me if i'm wrong but didn't Angel and Cordy have a baby???

otherwise looved it!

Author's Response: Urm...they do and I think the answer you're looking for is in the next chapter. That is if I remember correctly. Gonna have to go back and read this story!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 08:34 am Title: Chapter 29

is it wrong to pump ur fist and grunt YEAH!!!?? (in like a total non-sexual way!) aww poor Buffy's gonna have to get out of her fright. i bet Spike kissed her after dropping his fist huh?

Author's Response: Um, yeah...they won't be so much with the kissage right now. Sorry.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 08:28 am Title: Chapter 28

i just love mushy lovey Spike!

Author's Response: Yeah, me too. But, love's me some snarky Spike, too!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 08:15 am Title: Chapter 27

where's this address again?

Author's Response: Right, like I'd give it to you if I had it! Bah!

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Date: 02/25/2008 - 08:01 am Title: Chapter 25

lovin' it! next!

Author's Response: Look at you, asking for the next chapter like you can't just click the button! :)

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 07:54 am Title: Chapter 24

awwww, i always knew his past relations and i still felt sad for him! just don't bring in Anya to cheat with!!!!

Author's Response: I promise Anya will not be with Spike, cross my heart!

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Date: 02/25/2008 - 07:47 am Title: Chapter 23

this chapter brought to mind this!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-hxN25eKRdg

(hopefully it'll work! Enjoy!


Author's Response: I will check it out, thanks!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 07:42 am Title: Chapter 23

::stares at computer screen:: ::looks around for FWB:: ::points to screen:: I WANNA DO THAT!

Author's Response: I'm a little shy about things like that, but could easily be persuaded if JM was interested! :)

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Date: 02/25/2008 - 07:26 am Title: Chapter 22

i love how Buffy's made out to be the "perfect" woman but in stories she constantly can't cook or drive. LOL. i love the whole freakin' chapter!!

Author's Response: Aww shucks, thanks.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 07:17 am Title: Chapter 21

i feel that this is a set-up! c'mon! he hired the EVIL attorneys!!!

Author's Response: Hmmm...wonder what will happen next?

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