[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 07:12 am Title: Chapter 20
yes! the classic gym scene!!!! awesome!!! i love how he'll just strip down w/ no regard. i wish he'd do that in real life!!! damn!
Author's Response: For real! That would be so awesome. **drools**
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 07:02 am Title: Chapter 19
oh jesus! yes, let's have a pity party for Riley. the jerk who can't control his temper. the jerk who couldn't make Buffy HAPPY or satisfied. the monotone corn-husker who gets on my ever pickin' lovin' nerves! the last thing i feel is sorry for him. more like give me a bat and see how far i can swing. he gets no sympathy from me!
Author's Response: I know, I know...he so does not deserve any sympathy. I just felt that everyone needed to know what his mental stability level was at this time and what he was thinking. Plus, the need for him to know where she was staying is important.
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 06:50 am Title: Chapter 18
hummana-hummana!!! and a big loud GULP
Author's Response: Well, I am very proud with my self...you're basically speechless because of my writing! WooHoo!
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 06:41 am Title: Chapter 17
and i walk away with a SMILE!!!!
Author's Response: And I have a smile because you do! Yea!
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 06:23 am Title: Chapter 16
oh dear lord! i just hope no cameras were around!
Author's Response: Luckily, no cameras or snooping paparazzi in this one!
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 06:17 am Title: Chapter 15
the perfect end to an awkward chapter! yummy!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, hun!
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 06:09 am Title: Chapter 14
omg! where's that mag? lol sorry, i'm a slut for those gossip mags. thank you Jesus & Co. for finally getting them together (which ultimatily would be u huh T? how's it feel to be God-like? lol)! on to next chappy!! ::bounces with surpressed glee::
Author's Response: God-like, not so much....but, I am a pretty big deal. LOL! J/K! So happy that you are liking this! **Happy dance**
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 05:45 am Title: Chapter 13
that ending so doesn't scare me cuz Spike's never taken any of Angel's crap. haha!! i just laughed cuz he's pulling a classic 'Angel'. i love it when they fight!! LMAO and ewwww Harmony!
Author's Response: Very much with the ewww factor with Harmony, that's why she's pretty much toast from here on out. Loved writing the S/A interaction, they are so much fun together!
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 05:31 am Title: Chapter 12
okay, last part of the chapter, i'm on my tipy-toes going "where's spike? where's spike?" then THE ASSHOLE is beating up Dawn and Buffy and i'm practically hollering it. and i'm just imagining how Spike has heard about this so i know how mad he is. then he walks in and she's all cut up and i'm just like "fuck!". embarassment aside, i can't wait for Finn to get his!
great chappy.
Author's Response: This was a difficult chapter to write. Not so much with the actual writing, but by getting the right amount of emotion and what not in it. Glad you liked it, aside from the ickyness.
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter 11
oh goodie goodie!! ::rubs hands together:: u're bringing the WHOLE gang in huh? the only person i haven't seen lately is Cordy. u're doing a great job T!
Author's Response: I try to get everyone into each story, if possible. They just work so well together. You will see more of Cordy in the later chapters!
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 05:10 am Title: Chapter 10
i could soo see that magazine! and i'd buy it too! i usually read maxim anyway and that seems like it'd be a hot issue. great job w/ the descriptions! i'm liking this song too! although to see it written out, it seems very different than the one Evanessence. i dunno. great chappy!
Author's Response: I'd have loved to see that cover! Yowzer! And, I agree with you on the song. It does lose a bit of emotion somehow, much more powerful when you actually hear it.
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 04:59 am Title: Chapter 9
are ya stupid or something? break up w/ his Neaderthal ass! i could soo see Buffy in New York in winter wearing chic winter clothes and vixen red lipstick. that's the image that caught in my mind. and kismet is a bitch!
Author's Response: The inevitable will be here soon. Do you really think I'd keep her with that jerk? Blech.
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 04:50 am Title: Chapter 8
two letters: N!O!
Author's Response: Three letters: Y! E! S! It's very crucial to the whole story, just believe in me!
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 04:39 am Title: Chapter 7
see i wrote "unsatisfying" but i meant "unsatisfied". the image of Riley's naked body in my brain disabled me for a minute.
Author's Response: HA! Yes, that image has a very hih upchuck factor. Either way, I was picking up what you were putting down.
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 04:37 am Title: Chapter 7
see. u ruined it! the mystique is gone and i soo hope it comes back. the first words i read is: "Buffy slid from the bed, leaving Riley snoring peacefully." i almost upchucked in my mouth! that's just so gross! and as i guessed it, she was extremely unsatisfying. i'm debating on wheather i should just skip this chapter and move on or go back for more torture. tick.....tock....tick....tock.....:::sigh:: i hate myself. ::scrolls up::
Author's Response: Aw, come on! It's a perfect way to describe the lack of...stimulation...that Buffy is getting from both the sexual aspect of their relationship to the emotional aspect. You know you love it!
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 04:31 am Title: Chapter 6
okay, here's ur problem. u're sending Spike AWAY from Buffy. Buffy is here. little red dot! Spike is here! little blue dot! we want them to meet in middle, not send blue dot off the map! help me out here T!
Author's Response: Quit with your whining...LoL! Just so you know (since I say it all the time to my other readers) there is a method to my madness! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 04:24 am Title: Chapter 5
okay, see....i was up with ya until the last part. what's with the fecking cell phone?! DRU! SHE LEFT! BROKE UP!! GONE!! FINITO!!! ADIOS!! now i'm as frustrated as Buffy is; and not in a good way!
Author's Response: Aw, I promise she won't be making trouble for our lovely couple...well, alot of trouble, anyway!
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 04:12 am Title: Chapter 4
damnit i've got chill bumps too!!! damn movie in my head!!! Spike's face is like right....here! *points to left shoulder* his chin is ON my shoulder and i can feel his breath on my neck!!! eheheheheheheh! *shakes, shivers* moves on to next chapter! *tries to push face back but it does no good* i'm in deep shit here!
Author's Response: Yeah, it's really frustrating when imaginary Spike won't leave you alone...really gets in the way of RL! LoL!
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2008 - 11:46 am Title: Chapter 2
SEREN-ITY! SEREN-ITY! WOOOO!!!!
that kind of has a catchy ring to it! lol good job so far!
Author's Response: It really does have a catchy lil ring to it, do it again! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2008 - 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1
hi! how ya doin? it's me! i'm on this story now! just got finished reading about pedophile Spike, now i'm reading about Bodyguard Spike. so far i'm liking it! this could've been Angel S7 (if there had been a six those evil.......) and maybe everyone had lost their memories. i'm liking it so far! after this one i'll only have LC to read. :)
*so not meaning to call Spike a pedi. hell i'd call him DAD-DY!! i'm 23, he's 45......that has all kinds of kink written on it! LOL when it comes to Spike, age really doesn't matter. hell Buffy was 21-22 and he was 100+*
Author's Response: Ha! Funny side note at the bottom. I totally agree, he's fifteen years older than me and I'd jump his bones at the first chance. Glad you're starting this story, hope you'll like it.
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 08:10 am Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue
Is she pregnant? :) Just a feeling I got...
So this is the end? Feels sad, because I really loved your story! Luckily, I can read Lose Control and Forbidden Passion :) Love them too! ;)
Author's Response: You guessed it, she's preggers. I left it there thinking I might come back some day and right a fluffy one shot about them later. I may get around to it someday. I'll miss your constant reviews for this story, guess that just means I have to get on the ball for the other ones, huh? FP and LC are both coming to an end, figuring less than five chappies left on each; unless muse gets a wild hair up her bum! I have kept myself at a restricted 2 WIPS at once, which is hard since my mind runs rampant with story ideas. I'm too afraid that I'd get too much on my plate with more stories than that and leave my wonderful readers in the lurch. Couldn't do that at all! So, glad you loved this one so much, keep up with the others and don't worry too much...there will always be more in store for you from my strange and sometimes warped gooey mind. Thanks so much, Ariadne!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 07:56 am Title: Chapter 47
Aww, sweet and sad. Just the epilogue left... off to read it now :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm elated that you have liked this one so much!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 07:39 am Title: Chapter 46
So, Angel dated Drusilla too. Not nice to have two girlfriends at the same time... Dru has always been twisted...
Author's Response: Yeah, Angel was a total poophead back in the day, huh? Buffy's a bigger woman than I would have been in the forgiveness department.
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 07:23 am Title: Chapter 45
That reviewer was so wrong! Probably jealous of your writing... or he/she didn't know much about fics.
Spike isn't a piece of meat, he is human :)
Author's Response: I got one for this story and I think one for FP about making Spike into a male-ho. Hmm..never thought to see if they came from the same person or not! Thanks so much, your comments always brighten my day!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 07:06 am Title: Chapter 44
Joyce did the right thing :)
Author's Response: Yes, she did. See, I made Joyce goog in one story!
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