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Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 10:55 am Title: Chapter 4

as u probably guessed i skipped chapter 3. i DID NOT want to see will or xander having sex. that's just gross for me. although nick is cute, them together is no-no. and whew! what a nice dream! on to ch. 5!

Author's Response: Aw come one...wuss! I promise the scene wasn't that bad, really. And Xander only made an erm...end performance.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2008 - 06:37 am Title: Chapter 4

Well that is a diabolical little game she has there. Seducing our slayer in his sleep. Gotta wonder what happens next time he's awake?

Author's Response: Yes, she is very much with the mind games right now. Thanks!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oh, that was good! :)

Author's Response: Always good to hear! :)

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2007 - 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 4

Hey! no fair, he wasn't awake to enjoy it. Can't wait to see his face when he notices the new bite marks on his thigh. Very interesting indeed.

Author's Response: Oh he enjoyed it, even though he was asleep!

Reviewer: Gillypod Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 4

Another great chapter - please keep writing. I don't know how you can keep two of them running as mine has taken over my life

Author's Response: Thank you, Thank you! I am rather amazed myself that I have been able to keep 2 stories going at once!

Reviewer: Raven Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ooo! That was so hot! I can't wait to see Spike's reaction when he finds the bite mark on his thigh! I absolutely love this story! Great job so far! Can't wait to see what happens next! Please update as soon as you can!

Author's Response: Hi Raven (which by the way is one of my cats names, so I love it!) Thank you for the review, I myself cannot wait to see what Spikey's reaction is going to be! Thanks again!

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter 4

Great new chapter in this unique role story

Author's Response: Thank you KW! Glad you are enjoying the story. Stay tuned for more...

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 4

And yeah, the W in B/X marked it more bearable. Still not my favorite cup of coffee.
Gotcha... Buffy just needed the invite for later. Oh like for now. So Buffy is visiting when he sleeps. I wonder if he'll ever notice bite marks or if he is in a kind of thrall and won't notice at all. Till next chapter :)
(PS: Regarding Breathless: You updated too many chapters for me to catch up now. Will try to do it next weekend.)

Author's Response: Ya know, I haven't quite panned out the next chapter. In all honesty, I never know what is going to happen until I sit down to write. It all sorta unfolds to me as my fingers crunch away on the keyboard. I do know that X is going to have a difficult "life" in the next few chapters, just don't know exactly what is going to happen as of yet. Thanks for always giving such excellent reviews! Look forward to hearing from you!

Reviewer: mollie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow!! That was a great chapter!! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks Mollie! I really enjoyed writting that last chapter, Buffy was so sneaky! I am trying to get another chapter out by the weekend, but I need to update on my other story first! Thanks again!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

good update

Author's Response: Thanks again!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 4

I liked the Buffy/Giles scene, for a minute there I was worried Buffy was gonna hurt Giles... it's good to know that wasn't part of her plan. I loved the yummy dream sequence that wasn't, Spike's reaction in the morning should be interesting. Great chapter!

Author's Response: I just couldn't hurt Giles! I have tried to switch the roles of all the main characters from good to bad and vice versa, but I just couldn't do that to Giles. That's why he is still on the good side in the story! thanks for the review, love hearing from you guys!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 4

Love it more please.

Author's Response: Thank you. Hopefully I can have another chapter out by the weekend! Really need to update on my other story before this one. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Gillypod Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter 4

Just checked the story on AFF and your missing a few paragraphs at the end

Author's Response: WoW! Thank you sooo much for catching that! How big of a dork do I feel???

Reviewer: Gillypod Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 10:38 am Title: Chapter 4

Great update , honey. the story is flowing nicely and the smut is hot

Author's Response: Thank you. My muse was all sorts of stuck earlier in the night. Somewhere around midnight she kicked into overdrive for some reason!

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