Date: 07/23/2007 - 12:11 am Title: Giles Turn
You've got a good story to tell. I love the way they're all giving Spike that chance, that he so desperately wants...to belong to a family. It's much easier to read and your punctuation is improving. Good work. Now to see who's POV, this is?
Date: 07/17/2007 - 05:58 pm Title: Giles Turn
OH that was good, so GIles and Joyce are happy they are together.
Date: 01/06/2007 - 05:16 pm Title: Giles Turn
You updated? :-D
Oh and the spacing looks good.
What Giles said about the Slayers wanting kinky sex being submissive sounds logical.
And Spike was very insightful why Buffy has problems to knowledge that she loved someone, especially Spike.
But him saving Joyce changed things for Buffy I guess. Or simply gave her the courage to speak. ~ Till next chapter!
Date: 01/05/2007 - 03:43 am Title: Giles Turn
Great story with a unique plot and much easier to read this time. Look foward to more