Oh I love this whole new Chapter 8 that you've written.

It's soooooooo goooood!!!!

I love reading how they've reacted to eachother in this chapter. When I first read this story I always kept wondering how William must feel or what his point of views would be since I'd noticed it didn't really show up. Very interesting to finally know what's going on from his side!!!!

It's so interesting seeing Buffy trying to resist his charms. You really notice more differences in this chapter between the man, William, and the future man he turns into, Spike. Woah!!! Big difference between the two...amazing how a century plus has changed him.

Awesome job on adding the little bit on Buffy inquiring
time travel. That really showed she was making an effort to try to get back home because I also noticed as you had that she never really made an effort to do anything about her sitation.

Also when she returns hom and says the tears were from the rain....awwwww poor thing. That part also shows how caring William is that he spent the night pacing. Good to know that how much he cares won't change in the century plus that he lives. While we're on that subject, I also love how you've put into Williams side his dreams of a family of his own and of course how much of a nurturer and protector he is. It's so good to know that at least that part of himself, the nurturer, proctector side doesn't change at all as he turns into Spike in the future.


Thank You so much for the new revisions....

lovin this story. great job.

Author's Response: I'm glad you do. Thank you. :)

Question- Buffy was usually on the "a vampire is totally not the same as they were human, for it's the demon taking host in the human's body," so why would she keep comparing William to Spike, wondering why they're so different? Although, William is still present in Spike, but Buffy is blind to that of course. Still reading, though.

Author's Response: Obviously, you misunderstood and are a little confused.... In those first few chapters when Buffy is still suspicious of William, it is because of the lies *Spike* told her about his human self. She does not think William and Spike are the same person; that is why she continues to be surprised in the later chapters when William shows similarities to the vampire.

That breafasts is one of my favorites. "I've seen him look deader."--I can only imagine what either of them think of that idea. And the budding relationship of Buffy and William is such fun, even if neither of them are quite aware of it yet. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Buffy always has had a knack for putting her foot in her mouth hasn't she? I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reviewing. :)