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Reviewer: Buffyconvert Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2009 - 06:57 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Wot a hoot! Buffy thout Cecily had a crush on her! But the English language HAS changed a lot - even in the last few decades...good story. Buffy's esponses as a 21st Century Californian are very apt.

Reviewer: lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2007 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Yeah I def. dont like Cecily. Not that I ever did in btvs. Im wondering if shes gonna do something to Buffy during the party.

Author's Response: I've never met a Cecily fan yet, lol.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Mmmh with the right topic William did indeed open up to Buffy. Till the Underwood visited.. I don't think Buffy remembers Cecily for what she did to William. But when I think of Cecily's remark I'm sure they know that Buffy is 'only' the nurse. And the got an invitation? I fear she is up t something and that something isn't good.

Author's Response: I always got the feeling from FFL that Spike wasn't completely honest with Buffy when telling her about his past. His "always been bad" comment was followed by the clip of William, but I don't think he actually corrected himself by telling her he hadn't always been bad. And he also said "I had to get myself a gang" when, in the following scene, it was very obvious that the gang was Angelus' and he was brought into it, rather than forming it himself. So, I think as the audience we were privvy to some details Buffy was not. Or, at least, that's how I'm writing it. :P I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for taking the time to review it. :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 05:08 am Title: Chapter Eleven

That Underwood girl. Can't say I much care for her in this universe either, though a chance to push Buffy and William together is an unresistable opportunity. A wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 08:41 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

So is this the ball he is turned at.

Author's Response: Could be. ;)

Reviewer: Harper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 08:39 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

There is much intrigue wrapped up in this version of William each page you get a little tidbit about him. From wondering if Anne picked out Buffy on purpose for William for some secret reason and "Yes, she's nice Mother" in a sad tone makes me wonder if something here is going on like he needs to be married or something and Buffy will do? And then too he's always hot, Ok now sure Spike is always hot but I mean in a different sense here. And what went on with the family friends that the Mom there doesn't like him. Lots of little things make me wonder with him to the point I'm almost taking notes. Hats off to the writer on this for you hve me guessing.
I give this story a 10 out of 10 everyone should read it.

Author's Response: 10 out of 10? I am so flattered you feel that way. Thank you!

Reviewer: Dj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 07:23 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Why does Ellen dislike William? Makes me think something happened in the past and also the reson he looked so panicked when they arrived. Man now I am just dying to see what comes next!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: RecordBreakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 07:16 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

I got behind not 1 update but 2 but it made it extra great to read both together. I get a laugh every time Anne notices Buffy and William getting along I think she hopes that when she dies that she will know William has someone. Love your work and I so want to see the ball now.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm hoping I will have time to post Chapter Thirteen tomorrow, so keep checking back. I'm glad you are enjoying the fic so far.

Reviewer: tananore Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Oooooo! A ball like a actual date of sorts! Ok now how do I get thru the rest of the day at my job knowing theres a ball about to happen lol. Evil fanfiction writers you hook me in and now I'm like waiting on a new episode.

Author's Response: To be compared to the actual show is the best praise I can receive, so thank you very much! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: bguardbjb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 02:21 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Faastly you are becoming my new favorite writer and I want to see more. Does she have a ball gown though? Or does whatsher face know she won't have one and invited her on purpose for that reason to make her look bad?

Author's Response: How flattering to hear, thank you. :) The problem of the ball gown will be addressed in Chapter Twelve, which I just posted. I hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 02:09 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Lots of turns in events going on I'm curious as to why the visitors sent William into a panic and he needed to compose himself. Was it for Cecily turning up at his house or was it just from it being with Elizabeth alone in the library and she touching him? If they are family friends I could see William having a long time crush on Cecily and her checking out Elizabeth out just cause she likes William crushing on only her. Sooooo the ball invite would be a way for her to try and step on Elizabeth if she sees William happy with her. Humm this story has got me wondering what all will happen next. I look forward to the reading. Excellent Spuffy story telling. I keep wondering if Buffy is thrown back into the future will she still have the bracelet or will Spike. For her it be sentimental and for him it be longing. Heheeheh only time will tell.


Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story and I hope that continues. :)

Reviewer: BloodRoses Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:05 am Title: Chapter Eleven

“Well!” said Anne, after they had seen their guests to the door. “That was quite a nice visit, wasn’t it? Very kind of them to stop in.”

Since neither woman had been overly friendly to her, Buffy’s response to this cheerful observation was less than enthusiastic. However, she was surprised to see William frown also.

“Yes,” he said thoughtfully. “I suppose it was…”



( I could be wrong here but Will was having a better time before they all showed up there. And I wonder why hasn't he asked Buffy more about herself.)

Author's Response: I'm sure William was having a better time when he was alone with Buffy...but his reaction to Cecily's invitation is something else altogether. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 08:50 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Another fabulous update. William is so endearing. I love this so much and can't wait for you to post more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm trying to update on a regular basis so just keep checking. Thank you for taking the time to review and I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)

Reviewer: Mselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 05:45 am Title: Chapter Eleven

We see so much of Buffy's thoughts I wonder what he is thinking. For Buffy must throw him for a loop and yet you know he is watching her all the time it was so sweer to see him talking to her and telling her about himself in the library cause I don't get the impression anyone ever has once again this fic delights me in its storytelling and I look forward to the ball

Author's Response: There will be some slight shift in POV, but I will say that the first part of the story will be pretty much Buffy's with only a glimpse into William's thoughts here and there. The second part will be William's. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)

Reviewer: Taras_Gold Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 05:29 am Title: Chapter Eleven

This story sucked me right in and I'm hooked. William is going to love being Buffy's escort unless.......... He already had plans to woo Cecilly. It could go either way and ow I will toture myself thinking about it till the next new post.

Author's Response: Lucky for you I'm updating feverishly. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing. I hope you enjoy Chapter Twelve.

Reviewer: Mephisto Walz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 05:22 am Title: Chapter Eleven

It's nice to see they are getting more relaxed around each other and I can't wait for Buffy to go to the ball either in her X-mas dress and bracelet or something else for she will blow Spike er...William away and make old Cecily look like a potholder next to her lol.
I thought it cute William is sneaking in things in conversation when he thinks Elizabeth does not know what he is saying. He is sort of hard to figure out now with Miss Underwood popping up sort of makes me wonder if William had a interest in her before in this story or what will happen next.
Cannot wait for more.

Author's Response: Potholder? lol. I love that. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)

Reviewer: Tears of the Moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 05:16 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Oh yes!!! Updates! Wow so much going on and you see Buffy following William more. I love the piano scene in the past chap. and I loved Buffy's reaction to noticing William noticing another woman. This story is so good but I do not trust Cecily or her ball about as far as I could throw her. I'm not sure if she's trying to expose William or out to embarrass Buffy in front of her friends.
As always I love your writing style and crawl on my kness begging for more of this story.


Author's Response: Begging with get you everywhere. I hope you enjoy Chapter Twelve and thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Arabella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 05:11 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Ah a ball and at the same time I'm worried for William he will get bitten at this ball. Take heed William girls in curls can never be trusted!

Author's Response: Could be...my lips are sealed. ;)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter Eleven

WATS WITH CECILY, SHES ACTING HELLA WEIRD!!!! i love this story and am so happy that u updated. im so glad that buffy and william are growing closer and that shes starting to like him as well. i really hope that when she goes to this party that cecily doesnt try to embarrass her or do something to upset her. also i hope that buffy saves william from dru, even if it could mess up the future. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read wat happens next. thanx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I'm updating as often as I can so hopefully you wont' be left in suspense for too long. :)

Reviewer: synonumous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter Eleven

that was amazing! i love it! like im blown away and its like hard to blow me away trust me. Ive read million of fics but this one is up there. its amazing please update soon! pleease!
love
syn

Author's Response: Thank you so much; I'm so flattered you feel that way. I'm trying to update every day or two, so just keep a lookout. And thanks for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: Jenna Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 10:16 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Yes, I am sure that William will be delighted to escort our Buffy to the ball!

Oh yaya!!!

Author's Response: Well, you never know... Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 10:09 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

more please :)

Author's Response: Wish granted. I hope you enjoy it. :)

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