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Reviewer: Lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2007 - 01:40 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Aw very sweet. Loved it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you did. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 08:54 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

I have the feeling Buffy did a bad thing for herself, to convince William to accompany her to the party.. even if it was a clever way now to do it. She felt good before they attended the party? I hope it stays this way...
Ah dancecards! I forgot they were used back then.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 05:23 am Title: Chapter Twelve

How I love them. I just love it. So very sweet, how they just creep along. Wonderful.

Reviewer: Arabella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 12:46 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Despite his discomfort of people he does not seem to want to see he takes Elizabeth to make her happy and please her
How much kinder can the man get?
I was so excited to see a new post this morning I'm running late for work but I do not care it was worth it
Please add more soon.


Author's Response: What a great compliment to my writing. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: tananore Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 12:41 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

A perfect morning of tea and toast and a sweet update. More please I'd like seconds and thirds of this.

Author's Response: I'm so glad I helped make your morning better. Thanks so much for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 09:55 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Lovely and charming - they both are. At the moment. That terrible time is coming, isn't it?

Author's Response: lol. That isn't very optimisitic of you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: BloodRoses Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter Twelve

It's cute to see Buffy trick William into wanting to go with her and Buffy's dislike of Cecily and her knowing of Williams crush on her but the woman but knowing his feeling for her were more. And then thet both were checking each other out. I really hope we see more of the actual ball and get a dance scene. I really dig the old timey geel of this story it makes me think not all romance is dead.



Author's Response: I'm so glad you feel that way. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: bguardbjb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Loved this!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad. :)

Reviewer: Starlee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 04:22 am Title: Chapter Twelve

“It is rather nice,” he admitted. “And the ballroom is beautiful beyond compare. Yet I think I prefer the simplicity of our home.”

“So do I,” she told him, and he smiled.


Awwwwwww "Our home"


Author's Response: You know...I do believe you're the first person on three sites that ever noticed that line. Give yourself a pat on the back. ;) Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad you like the story.

Reviewer: Tears of the Moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 04:17 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Oh!!! this made my night! 5 dances! 5! Ok get your arms aroung the girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the show of enthusiasm. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)

Reviewer: Raven Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 04:13 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Aww! That's so darn cute! I love it! I hope that this isn't the night in which William is supposed to be turned. That would be so sad! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update as soon as you can! I love this story so much! Keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review. :) I'm going to try and update the story this afternoon, so just keep checking back.

Reviewer: Mephisto Walz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 03:51 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Every girl in real life or a Spuffy fan-fiction needs that moment where you walk down the staircase in a killer dress to your Spike er...William. With every new chapter in this story I never know what to expect and once again I am blown away with Williams every action for every small detail to Elizabeths needs it's nice to see that side of his character in a story. I hope to enjoy more of this soon.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: Dj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 03:39 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Charles Archer now there is a guy just perfect for vampiring or worse marry Cecily!!! And a waltz is coming so William dance with your girl :)
Great update

Author's Response: Marry Cecily? I think that's a fate too cruel for any man. lol. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Missy Devorak Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 03:34 am Title: Chapter Twelve

I started on this and just couldn't stop reading it
This is so beautifutly written I can see it all in my head like were there Excellent story

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I greatly appreciate your taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Taras_Gold Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 03:23 am Title: Chapter Twelve

I find Elizabeth not knowing things and William explaining them so endearing and him filling in her dance card and him realizing she wants him to dance with her was such a sweet moment. And he wanted her to be pleased with her dress so she felt she fit in. Love Love Love this fic.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review . I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

Reviewer: Mselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter Twelve

I love the fact he doesn't want to go but will go to please Buffy and the fact she knocked his socks off!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 03:01 am Title: Chapter Twelve

OMG HOW CUTE!!!!!! i love this story so much and am so happy that u updated. i think its so sweet that williams jealous when she talks to other men and that he wanted to dance with her. im so glad that theyre growing closer and that shes starting to see william for who he is and is starting to like him. i really hope that cicily or anyone else doesnt do something to hurt william or make fun of him and that william and buffy have a great time. also i hope that everything works out well and that dru doesnt turn william. please update as soon as u can, im dying to read more. thanx

Author's Response: I'm hoping to update tonight or tomorrow, so keep your eyes peeled. And thank you so much for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:04 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Yippee - another chapter so soon. I get such a warm, glowy (if that's a word), happy feeling when I read this story - although I'm not sure how long that's going to last! I love it when it's so well written that it's as if I am watching it all unfold rather than reading. Please keep up the excellent work and update very soon.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Love it, more please.

Author's Response: I'm hoping to update tomorrow or if not that day the next. Keep checking back and thank you so much for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Ann Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 07:14 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Hello.
I began reading your story this morning, and just checked in again and noticed to my delight that there was a new chapter waiting for me.
Some of the language reminds me a bit of Jane Austen, which gives it a perfect touch of renaissance and romance, but not too much so that it becomes faux and 'wannabe'-ish.
William is so sweet, and I'm struck by the strong feeling I get just from reading it of what's beneath the surface. All the small hints andclues of something greater, expressed in his behaviour and slight insight to his feelings.
I find myself wishing that Buffy will never return to the 21st century, and that she'll settle with William and have several children with sparkly blue eyes, but I have a feeling you have other plans with this story, and I'm sure anything you'll do is great! I haven't figured out where you are going to go with this fic, which is a good thing - I mean, the plot is not cliché or transparent.
I'm looking forward to the next update, hoping to see sweet dancing and William/Buffy closeness.
Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :) I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

ahh slow & romantic, great chapter :) more please

Author's Response: Soon, I promise. Thanks for reviewing. :)

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