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Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2007 - 03:03 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

I'm reading through this fic over and over again, and this chapter is just so so SO beautiful. :)

Author's Response: Why thank you, Devin. That was one of my favorite chapters to write. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: Lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2007 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

I loved the poem. It was so sweet and beautiful. Im really happy that william told buffy how he feels and im glad buffy finally realizes her feelings aswell. Awesome chapter. I cant stop reading!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked the poem. I wanted it to be in canon with William, but not silly, so it's nice to hear I achieved that. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 09:35 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

(But I can be wrong about the night, just that is was one at the Underwoods). Mmmm Buffy seems to think that it was 'the' night. Then she changed indeed things, a lot. Though I'm curious I have to continue another time. Loved the conversation that resulted from Buffy following William.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 09:00 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Oh my god. This was an amazing chapter. Their moment together on the bench -- THE KISSING OF THE NECK!!!! -- and the poem at the end.... So well written. It literally brought tears to my eyes. Incredible chapter, so so great.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Devin. I'm glad you like the story and hope you continue reading. :)

Reviewer: Golden Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 03:54 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

This is just delightful and several times reading this I feel my own heart hump for these two. This is my favorite romance on the board here by far.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you feel that way. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 05:48 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Nary a kiss and I am completely swept away. Perhaps such undemanding love is what's perfect... Though I wonder what comes next for them in this world. How she sees him. So very amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: smg fan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 04:52 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Wow, I lvoe this chapter, got little butterflies in my stomach when he was telling her about his feelings, it was so sweet. Wonder weather Buffy is going back to her time or staying here :P. Hope you update soon!

Reviewer: Neptune Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 02:09 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

So beautiful a story it makes me miss BtVS all over again well done! Please add more when you can.

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 09:47 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

oh i love this story! William is soooo sweet! You write him so well! Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: Mselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 03:40 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Awwwwwww she keeps tenderly reaching out to him in little ways and she is so perfect in what she says to him because she see's how fragile he is and she shows him he is the better man and he is safe in his feelings for her. You can see she is scared to and unsure but she still wants him to be happy and comfort him. I think she lves him as well and just does not know it..
I just love this for it makes my heart jump to when I read it like you are right there with both of them and that is the skill of a very good writer. Please please add more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :) I always thought it sad when people mistook William's sensitivity in FFL to be a weakness. I know the script even called for him to be a "wuss" but I never saw him that way at all. I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who appreciates his vulnerability. :)

Reviewer: bguardbjb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 03:34 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

I like the fact that even though William thinks Elizabeth too will reject him and his feelings he's honest with her and tells her his writing is now all about her. He may be shy and awkward at times but he's honest and it was good to see him not rejected for his honesty with her and then he would slip her his work. Really into and loving this story and hope you continue making us all your William fans here.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :) I always did want to see William rewarded for his honesty and affection in FFL, though obviously Cecily was not the woman to do it. That's why I decided to manipulate that scene somewhat to fit into my story. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 10:24 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Leave us wanting more why don't you? I can't express how much I love this. Why not let her stay and let them be happy together. Stuff the future - this is far more romantic.

Author's Response: I'm glad you feel that way. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Serena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 09:08 am Title: Chapter Fourteen


Loved it! Please update asap!

Reviewer: VM 24BFF Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 06:36 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

I think it's cool she's sort of choosing a life with him I just fear when she gets ripped away how it will effect both of them and I know I'll be dying to read that.

Author's Response: Not saying a word on that front, but I'm glad to know whatever happens you'll be there to read it. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 06:05 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

OMG THAT WAS SO SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i LOVE this story sooooo much and am so happy u updated. im so glad that he told her he loved her and that shes falling for him too. also i though it was so cute that she kised him on the neck and he called her his love. i really hope that they get together and that tehyre happy. also i hope that dru doesnt come after him and turn him, i dont buffy to go back and hate spike(even though william is spike). please update as soon as u can, im DYING!!!! to read wat happens next. thanx

Author's Response: I'm glad you feel that way. Thank you for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: Unavita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 05:55 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Superb writing and I'm hanging from my seat.

Author's Response: The best compliment a writer could receive. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Mephisto Walz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Ackkkk! I fear that if Elizabeth tells him her feeling he will have a moment of happiness and she will disappear and go back to her time and he will be devastated. Its like I want her to go back to Spike in her time and see what happens and at the same time I don't want William turned into a vampire and you know sooner or later it will happen to him. I think in every review I do I say I love this but I do it is the best story of Elizabeth/William I have ever read. An I cant resist wanting o read more.

Author's Response: That's okay Mephisto, you can just go right on saying it. lol. Really, though, I do appreciate your taking the time to review. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)

Reviewer: tananore Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Poor William he thinks Buffy was using him as a means to meet other people and men and I felt so bad for him reading Buffy just wanted to go to the ball for a chance to meet more entertaining people and get away from him. It's weird in this page you get to see how much Will is like Spike where he's is always fighting back on his true feelings and how in becoming Spike sometime down the line in a way it's freeing for him. You almost want him to be turned just so he finds some peace. If that makes any sense.

Reviewer: Record Breakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 03:57 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

I think I want to steal the line (gutter wiper) and use it on my ex.
PLEASE ADD MORE SOON I"M DYING

Reviewer: KMaryKricket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 03:46 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Effulgent is a word I'd describe this story :D
I'd really like to see more

Reviewer: MyBlondieBear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 02:54 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

I love this story so much. It's written really good and you have definitely made William sound like William. I don't see any Spike qualities in him. I cant wait to see if Buffy get's pulled back into the future against her will... Anyways it's really good. Please continue!

Reviewer: Spikeztruluv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

I luv this story and had to read chapter 14 TWICE!!! Please let the SPUFFY continue!!!!!

Reviewer: Ula Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 02:19 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

He loves her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please add more.

Reviewer: SarahPlainAnTall Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

I am sick on a Friday and reading this made me feel so much better I have to thank you. I dont ever review unless the fic is that good and this fic is that good.
Please please please please keep with this fic it's to good to not have a ending even though I never want it to end.

Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 02:14 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Ok I live in the real world and at this point even I am in love with William. Why must all the good guys be in a fiction?
Heehehehehe
Well I love this new chapter and I love this whole storyline it is just wonderful. Than kyou for entertaining me tonight.

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