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Reviewer: Talia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2015 - 07:51 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

This is so good! I can't stop reading, and... Ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh I SHIP IT!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2007 - 03:04 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

Great ending to the chapter. Damn his mom for interupting them though,. lol

Author's Response: Yeah, bloody mothers. They always pick the wrong time to talk. :P

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I hope William will talk to Buffy again and tell her what he told Anne. Because otherwise their stories will be different :) Yeah, Buffy was indeed the talk of the evening. Anne didn't say a word yet if they like the thought of William courting Buffy. The rose was very romantic.q

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 03:01 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

I got my kiss... or I guess they did, but it was indeed divine. So simple, and yet completely powerful. And I beleive she would follow him anywhere. Amazing, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: scelto Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

aww i love it! i love them! oh gosh, this story gives me some type of warm fuzzy i've never had reading a story before. it's so, just, sweet and innocent. it's beautiful!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) I'm glad you like this story and really appreciate your taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Bel Canto Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

I really love reading this story it shows heart.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you feel that way. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

OHH HOW SWEET WILLIAM IS!!!! i love this story and am so happy that u updated. im so glad that theyre getting closer and that they like each other so much, they both deserve to be loved and to be happy and they to that to one another. i really hope that everything keeps going well and that people leave them alone. also i hope that william and buffy will court and that wit goes well. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read the next chapter. thanx

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

A very loving story and a great twist on the part oof William in Spike we never see. Please add more when you can.

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2007 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

Sigh-----so beautiful!

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

A little adventure headed Elizabeths way :)
A very nice story

Reviewer: ladymalchav Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I wonder if Anne is ok with William liking Buffy given the times and her station in the household and coming from a work house if she would be ok with her son having feeling for Elizabeth. Don't get me wrong Anne cares for Buffy you can tell but she's not a very educated nurse and Anne has to notice that. Or she chose Elizabeth herself for William hoping she'd see in him all the things she sees good in her son. I'm not sure but I love reading this and seeing if any of my thoughts come close to what happens in it next.

Reviewer: nazonatte69 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I'm starting to worry with so little vamp activity that perhaps they know she is there and are watching her or something or one of the kitchen staff is reporting to Dru or something. Evil is a foot I think cause just when everyone gets too happy or comfy in pops evil.

Reviewer: quasadu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I love that Buffy stays try to Buffy-ness ans says the first thing to pop in her head it's a delightful tale.

Reviewer: bloodykitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Very pretty fic I feel like I'm watching a old movie reading this tonight. A flower and a note a possible secret meeting? Cant wait to see

Reviewer: mmmbento Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

this has life I feel like I'm right in there while reading this. I am a huge fan please write more soon.

Reviewer: RecordBreakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Oh my giddy heart! They have something!!!

Reviewer: Raven Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 10:50 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

This story is simply beautiful! I love it so much! Please update as soon as you can! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I love this story, can't wait to see what happens next.
More please.

Reviewer: LilyLake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 07:49 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Ahhhhhhh where is he taking her too? I'm dying to know!

Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 07:31 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

It is interesting to see how he struggles against himself not to touch her when you can see he wants to from the small hug embrace she gives him with the smelling of her hair. The great thing about Victorian times is that so much thought and meaning went into those stolen touches but it simply was not allowed and how it feeds into the passion they feel so I can see why with his writing it's the only outlet he can have in regarding any woman he might have any feelings for. I think that with your writing it makes it all the more sexy and endearing is the longing and how you describe it out. I really enjoy this and wonder when he is turned and when she is pulled back to the time she is from how either of them will deal with the loss I applaud your writing on this it is effulgent in it's own way.

Reviewer: SpikesDeb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

“That Cecily cow…she wasn’t effulgent. Was she?”

LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL!

Cow is right!

Reviewer: Ula Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I feel like I'm reading a classic and I love it please write more soon!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 05:50 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I think I held my breath the whole way throught that chapter. I was so excited to see that you had updated. This is so beautifully written. I love it.

Reviewer: Chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Aww...I really love reading this story, You've written the shy,nervous William so fantastically well.

I just hope nothing horrid happens - but then I expect they will ..lol

Reviewer: VM 24BFF Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 05:09 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I think it's so incredibly brave of him to give Buffy his words when knowing how everyone has rejected him and made fun of him in the past but he is honest with her and shows her his feeling towards her. So beautiful I want a guy like young William here it almost made me cry to see his happiness. Man I need a tissue!

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