Thank God william did that. I didnt think he had it in him. Liked buffy and william having a day for them.

Author's Response: Buffy's definitely becoming a powerful influence on him. Bad, in the eyes of society, but certainly good for his relationship with Buffy.

It's great to see Spike coming out in William. :) So so sweet! This is just so utterly romantic. :)

Author's Response: Romantic is definitely the angle I was going for. Glad to know I succeeded. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Can't always forget the down side, even when things are going so very well. I wonder if he heard her. They are simply magic. I love it.

It just makes the heart ache in how much Will/Spike needs Elizabeth/Buffy in his life. For I do not think anyone has ever been a close friend to him or really loved him outside of his family and he just absorbs her tender times with him like a man in a desert. Such a powerful story.

Author's Response: What a lovely metaphor. He is like a desert, isn't he? Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad you like the story. :)

Awwwwwwwwwwwww he held her I need some kleenex I'm gonna cry this is so good. He let himself hold her.

Author's Response: What a wonderful, flattering reaction. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story that much. Thank you. :)

Oh wow I feel like I'm in a gothic nove and should have a accent to review this but I'll try to anyway. This is so very pretty it warms the old Spuffy heart to read something as nice as this. This is a right rate story and you should look no futher in wanting a good story to read cause this one has it all.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind review. I'm glad you like the story. :)

It is weird how he is always warm or sneaking off at odd moments makes me wonder if he has a heroin addiction or some other victorian like times addiction to something or sickness that even Buffy could not know about cause he is always hiding away in almost every page he is not a vampire yet and yeah he reads and works a lor but still something is off or maybe it might be just me. Maybe William has a dark side.
I do love that they did have this little time together for it probably won't hapen again given how they have to live it was nice to see their caring of one another



Author's Response: A heroin addict??? lol. No. I can assure all my readers that William is not addicted to heroin or any other type of drug. Although it certainly is an interesting theory. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

You can see he wants to hear Elizabeth say she loves him too. Buffy don't make him wait too many weeks I don't know if my heart can take it much less his!!!
I cant think of a better story I have ever read to compare to this but if Joss was a smart man he'd hire you as a writer for the Spike comics.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! What a nice thing to say. :) I'm so glad you like the story. Thank you for taking the time to review.

I like the way your tell the story of Williams life in this and I think it is good in this chapter you gave him a moment of true happiness and telling a woman he is in love with that he does love her. For at least when he is turned soon he will have at least have been loved by a real woman. I always thought it kind of sad on the tv series that William never really was loved by a girl in his life and was only mocked for his caring or that it made him less of a man. Where in this version you see that William is the better man for his caring and all of his manners and rules and that a real girl would love him and in many ways he has the same passions that Spike does when he gets so filled with emotion and lets you see a bit more of him.

As in all of your chaters I love your work and wish you to write more of this great story and I cannot wair to see when Dru comes in or how you have him rurned or if this is even the same world and time Buffy was in or another dememsion William or how it will all turn about. I might even make popcorn.



Author's Response: I always felt the same way, Kalahara. Poor William had his heart trampled by Cecily and then was immediately killed and turned by Drusilla. Not a very nice end to a good man at all. I am trying to make that up to him in some small way now, although I can't promise there won't be some angst in his future. Thank you for reading and reviewing. :)

It's cool to see that even before William is turned into Spike he has the same reactions for standing up for a lady just with less violent means like Spike does. It seems to me William will always be a part of Spike even in turning at some point in the ruture he still is a good man minus the restrictions holding him back.

Now don't get me wrong Spike does evil things it's just at the core of him he was a good man and that still shines through.

Author's Response: I agree with you completely. At his core Spike is a very loving person, even when he does downright evil things. If he wasn't a loving person he wouldn't have sought his soul in the first place on the show.

Even Charles can't ruin this little secret getaway and I loved the part where William had the music play their song.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing. :)

This is intriguing to say the least I'm waiting to see him turned and see how much of William remains in him and if Elizabeth/Buffy will still see the man he is inside of him. You have a true gift in writing I look forward to seeing more from you.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. :)

Love it!!!! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Soon, I promise. :)