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Reviewer: October Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 02:06 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Poor william probably feels ashamed and dirty. Its hard after having 30 years of 'touching = bad' shoved down your throat he probablt feels shameful, i mean he if thoughtk issing her was bad then he probably wouldn't have even been able to contemplate this. I mean I grew up in a very open household but even my first situation like that and I was on buffy's end it felt dirty on some level and for william in this era and in such an uptight society and I can't even imagine how he slet that night. if he did.

Author's Response: You certainly have that right. After hearing his entire life that sex is for procreation (and that women aren't supposed to innitiate or even desire it), William is feeling very confused and guilty. I always thought that in the context of the series, the reason Spike adored Drusilla was that she pulled him out of an oppressive society and taught him how to enjoy not just violence but also sex, guilt free. Thanks so much for the review. :-)

Reviewer: Lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2007 - 02:29 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Uh oh trouble in paradise. Awesome chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

A lot changed for William but Buffy didn't notice because he didn't tell. Closed doors or loosing money. ~ Things changed? Oh this changed. Buffy underestimated William, he is still Victorian. Oh my I wonder what that will mean. For once that he went away immediately.

Author's Response: Poor William. He tries to protect her from unpleasantness, but I'm afraid this might come back to haunt him in the future. Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 12:34 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I meant to type "started out" not odd, sheesh, you'd think I can't proofread.

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Date: 02/02/2007 - 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

What a terrible misstep. Buffy's wanton behavior was so out of line for this time period, it's going to make William wonder if Charles Archer had a grain of truth in his insults. This chapter started odd on such a happy, settled tone, and now everything's jumbled.

Author's Response: They have been raised with such different ideals. Buffy sees sex as a way to express love, while William was taught that love was shown only by restraint from all the baser urges. Now they are both confused. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 09:48 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Okay, that was probably one of the hottest Spuffy scenes ever-- but sad! Reading on right away, how is this going to work out???

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I hope you like the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 08:39 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I noticed I forgot to review this last time, I love it.


Author's Response: I appreciate you for coming back to say that. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Serenity Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 08:54 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Noooo! You can't...CANNOT...leave it like that! GRR! In all honesty, great couple of chapters. I have been checking on AFF for updates, last one I read was chapter 13, but never saw any. Thankfully, I scrolled down on SR and found it! Please update soon, eagerly awaiting more!!!

Author's Response: I was getting very little feedback on aff.net, so I felt I would just let it lie there for a while and concentrate on updating it on the spuffy-centric sites. I'm glad you found it and are still enjoying it. Thank you for reading and taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 04:04 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

And delicious though that be, it could really create a problem. Perhaps a fortnight will be a good thing for them, though that whole running away without talking always created quite enough fun. They always come back from such things, I can only wonder how long it will take. A great chapter filled with yet another turning point. I await what happens next. Please, update soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad you continue to enjoy it. Thank you, as always, for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Record Breakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Wow I don't think Elizabeth even really knows all he has given up for her if society is completely turning their backs on him and his business. I really hope someone of higher society takes to her and can fix this problem before Anne discovers how bad things are the shock might kill her. And Elizabeth did make a mistake here cause even though William ran off I wonder if he starts to think about it and what she did if his view of her will change. They both really know so little of each others past they need to talk. Love this fic its got a hold on me.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: lifewhoknew Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 01:36 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

this is a great story
very well written
please continue

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Does William now that feel that Buffy might be what Archer and the others are insinuating that she is - a woman with "loose morals"? I love your writing soooooo much. Please update very soon.


Author's Response: As soon as possible, I promise. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: Deltanighthawk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Beautifuly written I hope you continue with this.

Author's Response: I will certainly continue. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad you like the story. :)

Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 07:28 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Loved this update but I wonder what he is hiding maybe it's something to do with the estate or his fear of maybe asking Elizabeth to marry him but he is hiding something and I'm dying to see now what it is he is hiding. Can't be a vampire thing she would have noticed so it's got to be something or someone. Humm.......

Author's Response: Very astute of you to realize he is keeping something from her. He isn't a vampire, but there is certainly a secret between them. Thanks so much for the review. :)

Reviewer: Starlee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 07:24 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

“You’re always so fastened up,” she said playfully. “How’ve you lived so long so fastened up? Don’t you ever let yourself relax?”

“Am I fastened up?” His voice was thick, as if the words had stuck in his throat.

“Very fastened up,

((((((So very cute))))))

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: aneternalflame Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 07:14 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Yes!~
Ok now more more more more!

Author's Response: Soon. I promise. :)

Reviewer: tattooedsiren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

This is really good and the love scene was well done I thought keeping in mind they are both new to each other and wanting to please the other it was just enough and the akwardness after. Great job

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: Mephisto Waltz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 06:40 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Oh yes! A late lunch and a update! Juicy! Gosh he wants her so badly and how he struggles to hold back his own feelings and to try to do what is proper when everything inside of him is saying another and him really not knowing what to do and just for once allowing himself to feel. I think I get why he left I mean with nothing said between them after and neither of then knowing what to say he probably snuck away cause he didn't know how to face given they sort of broke all the codes. So much to like in this new chapter and you know with this there will be fallout and a little heartbreak with him going away.

Author's Response: For a passionate person like William, living in such rigid social constraints would be torture. Even harder to do would be turn his back on those same constraints; after all he's lived with them 30 years. You hit the nail on the head when you said he doesn't know how to face her now. Thanks so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you are still enjoying the story. :)

Reviewer: Starlightskies Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I am not big on doing reviews cause I never know what to say and mostly I lurk the site but this story I really like and really want more so I came out of hiding to try to feed the muse.

Author's Response: The muse greatly appreciates that, thank you. :)

Reviewer: Hour of the Serpent Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 06:27 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I think in many ways it was sweet he put off and feared leaving her like if he left and returned the whole thing would have been a dream. And he was opening himself up to her like no one else, maybe she did leap ahead in their relationship but in Buffy time it would have been different and trying to hold yourself back cause your in a different place had to be driving her crazy. Just please don't Vamp while your out of town and this whole other thing is going on. Ok now I'm reviewing like I'm talking to actual people lol such is the telling of the talents of the writer :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the nice review! :) Poor Buffy just wanted to show him she loved him. She thought if she persisted she could make him relax and enjoy himself. Unfortunately, 30 years of training can't be abolished in a single night...

Reviewer: Little Sea_Horse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
It's cute to see Buffy getting frustrated in her feelings for William and having to maintain this Elizabeth proper persona and how she try's to move in for a little more intimacy between then and William is the one pulling back where as if they were in her time it be so opposite if it were her and Spike in the same scenario. I just think though she went to far an now they both won't know what to do. Again you have me eating out of the palm of your writers hand on this and I wanting to know what happens next.

Author's Response: In present day, the most common way for people to express love is by sex, so poor Buffy is a little confused by William's reluctance to do so. She fails to take into account the beliefs of Victorian times. To William love and respect are shown in the restraint of his baser urges, not the indulgence in them. You are entirely right in saying things have gone too far. If Buffy had been paying attention to what William was trying to tell her, she would have realized this. ;) I'm glad you like the story. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Dj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 03:14 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I'm confused?
(even Matthew, who was usually so outspoken on all subjects whether they were his business or not. They were careful not to speak of Elizabeth Summers at all for he was so pathologically jealous of her even the barest hint of a relationship of any kind between her and another man would send him into a terrible temper. Even her on-again off-again friendship with Matthew was a carefully guarded secret between them, though she did not know it."

Matthew has a crush on Elizabeth?


Author's Response: You are confused. ;) Buffy and Matthew are friends, but because William is not secure in his retionship with Buffy, he is jealous of other men talking/interacting with her. So Matthew, not wanting to upset his boss, does not speak to Buffy within his hearing. Matthew doesn't have a crush on Buffy; he is married. Does that make sense? :P

Reviewer: XxxCalistaxxX Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 02:52 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

They have a way of reading each other from either across a room and even in a way time can't deny in how them seem to have a destiny for one another. I think he probably is shocked and that is why he left most likely shocked that a woman would even choose to be close to him or of his own reactions to it but I do hope he at least said something to someone for her. Poor Elizabeth!

Author's Response: Shocked is definitely a good way to describe what he is feeling right now. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

please update again soon

Author's Response: Hopefully, I can this evening. Keep checking back and thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 11:31 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Love it, so wonder how much damage she did it he left before day break.

Author's Response: You'll find out soon enough. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing!

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