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Date: 08/31/2009 - 09:34 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

A thoroughly creepy & enjoyable chapter!

Reviewer: Lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2007 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Looks like buffy found trouble. I cant believe william could feel that something was wrong. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 09:37 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Oh my.. Buffy hasn't patrolled or trained too long. Angelus is better then her. William noticed in his dream? So what about Buffy's dream of his turning? Only a dream....
Oh bad... the girls are there too. She can't take three vampires (this vampires) alone. She was lucky, daylight was fighting with her. I wonder how things regarding four vampires have changed now from the future (past) Buffy knew.

Author's Response: Yeah, Buffy had a hard enough time with Angelus in season two, when she was in relatively good fighting form. Without the daylight on her side, I doubt she could have escaped him here.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

The scene between Angelus and Buffy was frighteningly brutal and vividly written. It's interesting that William has some sort of psychic connection to Buffy. Another excellent, vivid chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you think so. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 03:30 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

How in tune they are. The way he knows her danger. No need at all to send for him. He will be home soon. Love that we ran into the three of them, how deep this story becomes now. I love it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you feel that way, BuffyRat. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 10:19 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

Can not WAIT for more. Btw, loved Drusilla's comment about Buffy's future-- nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

OH THAT SOB I WISH HE WOULD JUST DIE, ALONG WITH DRU AND DARLA!!!!!!!!!! oh its so cute that william could feel that something was wring and that hes rushing back to buffy, i really hope that they make up. i love this story and am so happy u updated. i cant believe that angelus found her, now hes going to come after her and that might lead to her or william getting hurt. i really hope that when william comes home, he and buffy make up and that everythings ok gbetween them. also i hope that angelus doesnt find buffy, william or anne and that they all stay safe and well. please update as soon as u can, im DYING to reaad wat happens next. thanx

Author's Response: lmao. Well, no one ever said Angelus was the sweet and cuddly type. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter so much, sarah, and I promise to update very soon. Thanks as always for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: nmcil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

I very much enjoyed reading your story - I like how you connected the series theme of Buffy wanting a more normal life and set it in this time travel - Like your William very much as well - such a good contrast with Spike in the future. A contrast that makes logic with William's time and Spike's future persona - such repressions and then such rebellion - and yet both faces still have all the heart that is William/Spike.

I sure hope that you bring us an update very soon -

Author's Response: I am hoping to update this evening, so just keep checking back. :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you like the story. :)

Reviewer: ctj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 12:03 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

This is the run of the mill story and I gotta say I love this new writers talent for that. This really does take you to another time and sets you in the parlor and you become a part of it. First fate fiction here at Sunnydale best.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, ctj. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: blax Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

oh this is officially my new favourite fiction ever, love the story, love the way its written.
can't wait to see what happens.


Author's Response: Thank you so much, blax. I'm glad you feel that way. Thank you for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: tattooedsiren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 08:00 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

William is visably shaken and upset in his need to get back to Elizabeth as fast as he can. Go William!!!
Sorry I am a fan of the guy he is juust so love-able I gotta cheer him on for the next chapter. Go get your woman!

Author's Response: lol. He's trying his best to do as you suggested, tattoedsiredn. I just hope you like the results. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: HazardoftheHeart Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

“I don’t like this play,” whined Drusilla. Her dark eyes bore into Buffy’s with an unsettling kind of understanding. “I see her future, and it’s all mixed up. Can’t we play something else?”


Even Dru notices Elizabeth does not belong and wants to get away from her I thought that was so cool.

Author's Response: Dru can be oddly perceptive at times, can't she? ;) I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: iiinga Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 07:45 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

She seems to be trying to focus all of her energy on finding Dru and putting a stop to the turning of Spike but is she really does this has she thought of the fact that she might not be with him and he will be alone without her? Really a cool story and more like a saga I love following this and watching for new chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, iinga. I'm glad you are enjoying it. :)

Reviewer: tananore Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Elizabeth is kinda out of slay shape and the clothes are not helping her either so running into the worst of all vampires had to have scared her to death for a lot of reasons. I am not sure how she can train given where she is living now but with William leaving she has not been eating so any weight she had gained is probably gone now. But I loved the verbal combat Buffy gave to Angel I think it's good for her to recognize who she is given that has been confused for her being in another time and all she has lost sight of being the slayer. Just dying for more and what you do next with this.

Author's Response: Another of Buffy's problems is that she allowed Angelus and the gang psych her out. She's afraid of them, and wants to avoid them, so I'm not sure she would train to fight them even if she could. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: candy_girl82 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 07:17 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Really a great story I started this today and it just is beautiful in how you tell it. Hoping for more

Author's Response: How nice of you to say. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: mselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 07:00 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Maybe I watch too much Veronica Mars but this story makes a girl twitterpated just reading it. Please please please please more more more!!

Author's Response: Twitterpated, lol. I like that. ;) I'm hoping to update this evening, so keep checking back. And thank you so much for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: GutterGlitter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 06:46 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

I got behind and had to catch up today and omg was it worth it! This fic needs a award cause it is a must read.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much, GutterGlitter. I'm flattered you feel that way. :)

Reviewer: Starlee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 06:44 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Ugh!!! I'd want a bath too and try to wash the yuck of Angelous off me too. Please William come home soon Buffy needs you!!! Excellent story it has me hooked completely please update when you have more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Starlee. I'm glad you like the story. I'll update soon, so keep your eyes peeled. :)

Reviewer: Snaghabor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 06:40 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Oh my goodness Buffy runs right into the worst kinda trouble. Given the times if something like this would happen to a girl I'm pretty sure Anne will not let Buffy out of bed and will send for a doctor to sedate her or I dunno smelling salts or something. Quick someone grab a fainting couch for Buffy or foe me while I read this its too good. Bravo on doing such a good and exciting fic!

Author's Response: lol. Smelling salts and a fainting couch--Buffy might be in need of them before this is all over with. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

So she meets up with Angelus and the girls. more please.

Author's Response: More soon, I promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Mephisto Waltz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Humm I wonder if the servents buy the (out for a walk) story or if they will come to the opinion that Elizabeth is in love with the master of the house and that is why she is so upset. Poor Elizabeth she so needs a friend and there really isn't anyone she can talk to. I wonder if now coming face to face with Angel/Dru/Darla if she will try to find the council for some help. LOl I have so many burning questions I can hardly wait till you write more. :D

Author's Response: lol. Burning questions will get you everywhere. I'm going to try for an update this evening, so hopefully some of your questions will be answered then. Thanks as always for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: XxxCalistaxxX Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 06:29 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Evil of all scary evils Angel is back on the scene! And now they know there is a Slayer in town they will come looking for her. And it's cool William is having dreams as well. I'm excited about this story it just keeps getting better and better with every new post on this.

Author's Response: I cannot think of a better compliment than that, thank you. :)

Reviewer: Janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 06:23 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Oh I am lovin this it's starting to heat up with the gang showing up I just hope William gets back before something else happens!!!!!! Fantastic story

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

HOLY MOLY!! I didn't see that coming!! More soon please!

Author's Response: If you didn't see it coming, then I guess I'm doing my job as a writer; I never want to be predictable. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: MadBrillianT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 04:06 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

wow. there really isn't all that much i can say here. i'm just so surprised. i get that she's out of shape from a while of no slayage, but i just wanted to see her kick angelus' ass. (i never liked him!)

Author's Response: lol. Then we're different, MadBrillianT. While I never was a fan of Angel (he bored me), I like Angelus, especially in the flashback episodes. I had such fun writing him for this scene; he is just so evil there was no need for restraint. Be warned, he will eventually reappear...and be just as brutal as before. ;) Thanks as always for reading and reviewing. :)

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