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Reviewer: XxxCalistaxxX Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 10:23 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

LOL!!! Yesssssssssssss so much goodness here and defending the girl. How can you resist her William!!!!!!!! Should be fun to watch him try.

Author's Response: In the fight between desire and decorum, desire always wins. It might take a while, but I'm sure William will succumb to her. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: inthralltospike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 09:04 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

NOOOOOOOOOOO never mind real life nothing matters but updates!!!!! i know i'm selfish but you should'nt have written such a good fic and got us all hooked and your updating has been brill we cant be expected to go cold turkey NOW!!!!!!!!
please please please dont abandon us now (grown woman crying noises) this is my favorite fic at the moment

Author's Response: lol. Trust me, if I could ignore real life, I would. And I don't think it will be a terribly long time before an update; maybe just a week or two. But I thought since you guys were all being so wonderful and support you deserved to know ahead of time.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 08:46 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Fantastic update - as usual. I have to say I think this is my favourite story ever so I will be watching for your next update with great anticipation - whenever you are able. Keep up the fab work and thank you.


Author's Response: Thank you, Sam. You don't know how much it means to me to hear you say that. I don't think it will be an excessively long time before an update; I just wanted to give you guys a head's up. Thanks so much for the support. :)

Reviewer: Chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 07:37 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

We can wait , real life can be a pain at times - Just as long as you don't give up on this story :)

Author's Response: Don't worry, Chris. I have no intention for giving up on it. Thanks so much for the support. I really appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: Sara M. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Take your time, I know that I am willing to wait for more. I'm just happy you posted this. Because after the last chapter I was thinking that William got caught by Dru... I'm loving the story buy the way. When you can keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thank you for the support, Sara M. I really appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

How could he resist her indeed. I do hope he does not try too hard. I'd much rather Buffy entertain him at night that Drusilla. Pleasure for him alone. I dool forward to the next update. Whenever that shall be.

Author's Response: He is struggling, but I do think he will eventually succumb. Thank you for the review. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 03:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

OHH HE LIKES HER TOUCHES, HE SHOULD JUST ADMITT IT AND GIVE IN!!!!!!!! i love this story and am so happy u updated. im os sorry to hear that youre having a personal crises and i hope that everything works out well and take your time in updates. i love that hes home and that he had a fight to protect her honor. i really hope that they keep getting closer and that their relationship keeps progressing well. also i hoep taht angelus, dru or darla doesnt find them and hurt anyone. please update as soon as u can, in cant wait to read more. thanx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support, sarah g. It means a lot to me. In regards to William, he is struggling so hard to reconcile what he feels with what he was taught. Given his nature, though, I do think he will eventually lose the battle. :)

Reviewer: 3sublime6 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 03:31 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I fthink these thoughts he is having about Elizabeth will come up in a argument and then she will think he does think lowly* of her as a girl. A guy can never have these kinda thoughts without them surfacing later at the worst possible times and I think when he thinks of what she did with him and then finding her outside the house barely dressed and then hears of her attack he will blow up at her.
PLEASEEEEEEE ADD MORE SOON :D

Author's Response: He hasn't had time yet to really process the fact that she was outside in clothing that was, for the era, was basically indecent. You're right, though. It will be addressed in the future, though in what way I can't say. Thank you for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: Tears of the Moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 03:26 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I'm not sure if I am thankful he was only beat up and not turned or more happy with his need to defend her and fighting and having her care for him after. Really a cute bit there about his glasses and so hot watching Will try to fight off his poet lusting for her cause you know if he gives in he wil blame himself I hope Elizabeth will notice that.

Author's Response: The Victorians were so intent on suppressing natural human urges that, for a passionate man like William, it is pure torture. I think if Buffy takes the time to really talk to him before acting, they will get through it. But whether she will or not remains to be seen. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 03:23 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I am so very addicted to this lovely story! I hope your life gets back to normal soon and wish you every good thing.


Author's Response: Thank you, Toni. I really appreciate your support, and I'm glad you like the story. :)

Reviewer: waS_A-_wEnch Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 03:22 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I really like how you write the longing of the time. How it was possible to want someone to distraction and be completely lost without them while they were away. A lot of work has gone into the fic and it is so worth it as a reader to come across something so unique in style and depth. I look forward to your next chappie.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, waS_A_wEnch. I did research the period to try and make the characters and setting realistic, so I appreciate your noticing that and commenting on it. I'm so happy you are enjoying the story and I thank you for taking the time to review it. :)

Reviewer: magz19 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 03:18 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

He was slumped in his chair, legs spread so that she, on her low stool, sat almost in between them. Six inches from his crotch, five buttons and a lapse of self-control from taking that growing evidence of his arousal into her mouth. The eroticism of the pose seemed to occur to him belatedly, and he pulled himself upright, shaking his head slowly.


Soooooo William is capable of bad boy thoughts lol. I thought this was rather good

Author's Response: William is definitely a naughty boy at heart, he just works very hard at suppressing it. I'm glad you liked the story and thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: GutterGlitter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

See I'm picturing Elizabeth on the other side of the door thinking about William in the same way both lingering not to leave. Beautiful and well done.

Author's Response: You really know the characters well, GutterGlitter, because that was exactly what I was picturing as well, although of course William did not know it. Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Devin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 03:06 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I hope all of your real life issues work out okay, and I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter! Great, great development-- love this story so much!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you feel that way, Devin. I hope the new chapter won't be too long, and I appreciate your willingness to wait for it. Thank you so much for your support. :)

Reviewer: Ula Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 02:59 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Two posts in one day I feel so spoiled with the Sunnyaction. I hope your problems are ok cause I love your work. Take care

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the support, Ula. I really appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: Little Sea_Horse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 02:53 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Hehehehehehehe he wears his glasses cause he reads alot that so made me giggle. I think it was sweet she cleaned him up and he let her and the fect they are talking is a good sign. I think it is good for William to experience his urges for the first time with someone like Buffy for she at least talks things out with him and he does not have to hide from her how he feels.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that line, Little Sea_Horse. It sort of just wrote itself, and I actually laughed myself when I realized what he said. You are completely right about Buffy being good for him. He has been struggling so long against his passionate nature, and she is just the person to help him understand it's nothing to be ashamed of. Thanks so much for the review. :)

Reviewer: Janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

A little fantasy don't hurt a boy William it will be ok.

Author's Response: Well, he did have to grow up in a time where masturbation was thought to induce madness, hairy palms, all sorts of illnesses, and eternal damnation of the immortal soul. So I guess it will be hard for him to realize that fantasies are not wrong. ;) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: tananore Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 02:41 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Oh no he's wondering why she knows things that she does and does not think its right but can't help wanting her still. Excellent as always :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much tanamore. :)

Reviewer: entrenous88 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!! Total fan-girl moment there and now I'm dying for mlore!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Wow, I have a fan girl? That's so nice of you to say! I will be updating as soon as possible, although I'm afraid it might not be so quickly as you are used to, due to some problems in my personal life. But I will do my best, and I thank you for the review.

Reviewer: JuliannaC Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Gracias!.....Por favor no Angelus.....ese personaje es demasiado desagradable.

Much más romance....y dulce....Por favor!.

Author's Response: Gracias yourself for the review. :) I promise I will update as soon as possible. I'm glad you are enjoying the romance of the story. I'm trying to ride that line between sweet and saccharine, and I hope I am doing a good job.

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