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Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 06:37 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

NOOOOO SHE CANT RUIN IT NOW, THEYRE GOING SO WELLL AND ARE SO HAPPY!!!!!!!! i love this story and am so happy u updated. god i wonder wat shes going to do to ruin her chance of proving her love. i really hope watever she does she can make it up to him and prove how much she loves him. also i really hope that everything works out well between them and that they end up together and happy. please update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more and read wat happens. thanx

Author's Response: Buffy has never been a good one for relationships, even when she tries. And she does try, she does love him. We'll just have to wait and see whether this is enough. ;) Thanks as always for reading and reviewing. It really makes my day. :)

Reviewer: spuffyluv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

i really love your story and i can't wait to read more! please, will you put in a chapter where buffy kicks angelus' ass? i mean, she defeated a hell god, what's a 200 yr old vampire and here he's only 100. please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Physically, I think Buffy is perfectly capable of handling Angelus. It's only her mental blocks that are getting in her way. Whether she will overcome them or not remains to be seen. I'm glad you like the story, and thank you for reviewing it. I promise, the next update won't take as long as this one. :)

Reviewer: Wicked Honey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 04:45 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

I was happy to see Buffy os working on her self to please Wiliam and make things easier for him. and I loved the hug part in the library. Seems like trouble is a head or a fall from the horse. Either way I'm hooked on this fic. Great job

Author's Response: Thank you, Wicked Honey. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: LoVe Neptune Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 04:42 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Oh no! There is a botching? Now I'm biting at the bit here myself to know what that will be.

Author's Response: Buffy's good at botchings, lol. The next update should be soon, so just keep your eyes peeled. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Starlee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 04:40 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

"The idea was that he would teach her to ride and then she could accompany him out on horseback as a way of amusement. It was a decision he would eventually come to regret. Yet that was an agony far ahead of him, unforeseeable as he stood in the sunny stable yard that February morning."

Ackk!!! Now I must know what happwns next!


Author's Response: You will very soon.

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

you have made my day with this update!

Author's Response: I'm so glad. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 01:33 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

oh I wonder what happens.


Author's Response: Wait and see. ;)

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 12:51 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Oh no. What's going to happen? You're evil, leaving us at that. :) Glad to see this had been updated, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Aren't I always evil? lol. But at least this time, I won't leave you two weeks without an update. I assure you of that. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Dee81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Wow, this is a -really- good story, and a well-written one as well. You have a strong grip on Buffy's voice, and I love the growing relationship between her and William. I never thought I would like a Buffy/William story, but this one can't get me to stop reading :)

I can't wait until she meets with Spike again and also to see how she feels about him then.

Wonderful work! Looking forward to your next update.

Author's Response: This story started out as a challenge to myself, to see if I could write a story that focused on Buffy's POV. I used to have a really hard time finding her voice. Once I got started, though, she just came alive. I'm glad you feel I'm being true to the character. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

I LOVE THIS STORY! Please write more soon! Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank *you* for taking the time to review. Chapter Twenty-Four won't be long in coming, I promise. My muse is being much kinder about it than Chapter Twenty-Three. :)

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

lovely chapter. Clamouring for more after that cliffhanger. Please update soon.

Author's Response: It won't be long, don't worry. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and hope you keep reading. :)

Reviewer: CutieSaiyajin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Noooooooo, you can't just leave it there! D: That's so evil! Now I won't be able to stop worrying!

I hope you update again soon! :)

Author's Response: Well, we knew I was evil, didn't we? Never fear, I won't make you worry long...just long enough. ;) Thanks for continuing to read and review. :)

Reviewer: mwfte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

What a wonderful surprise: an update! :-D

I love the way you've described their outings; you have a knack for just the right amount of adjectives.

The tension is building. What a cliffhanger to end this chapter on! Please update soon. :-)

Author's Response: Thank you. :) I've always enjoyed books with a lot of description--not too much, because it slows down the story. But enough so that you feel as if you're there. That is what I strive for in my own writing. I'm so glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

no!!!! I hate hate hate when I get to the end of these chapters cos I love this story so much! I'm really not looking forward to the event referred to in the last sentence....but I still want the next chapter really soon!! Its so nice that she's made an effort to keep Anne off Wililam's back. Ooh another worry - something's gonna happen with the horse right?? ahhh its all just too much. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON this is by far one of my 2 favorite stories right now (plus in the army now) More!!!! please?

Author's Response: Something is going to happen with the horse....in a way. That's all I'm going to say about that. ;) I love "In the Army Now," it's one of my favorite fics as well. I'm flattered that you consider mine as good. As always, thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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