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Reviewer: nekokage Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 06:21 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Didnt really know what I was getting nto with reading this tonight but god what a great story I had tears reading this it's so good. Really hope you stick with this its got everything going for it. I give it a 10

Author's Response: Thank you so much, nekokage. I'm glad you like the story and hope you continue to in the future. I know it's a bit angsty, but hey, I've always though the best romances contained angst. ;)

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 06:13 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

I do feel bad for William, but I understand why Buffy turned down the proposal. She technically doesn't belong there and doesn't know when she would suddenly go back to her own time. I'm sure it's bound to happen. I think it's better this way, I just hope she can make him understand. I wonder what would happen if she actually told him the truth about where she's from. He'll probably think she's crazy at first, but I think he'll end up believing her. It would certainly explain the way she acts. Well, I was all thrilled to see another update so soon after the last one. I can't tell you how happy I am to see you posting more of this one, I just can't get enough of this story. Can't wait to see how Buffy deals with a drunken William. Great chapter=)

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

she turned him down? please update soon? you're killling me with the whole waiting thing! please?
is buffy going to meet vamp william while she's still in the past?

Author's Response: I'm about halfway through the rough draft of Chapter Twenty-Five, so hopefully you won't have to wait too long for an update. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 05:45 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Two updates in one week! You have made my month! Every chapter of this story gets better and better.

Author's Response: How nice of you to say. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: tananore Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 04:58 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

my friend and I are both following this and were taking bets lol I don't think she will fix it by going in there because a drunken William might be a whole lot of Spike like and when Spike is hurt watch out. I see a drunk William not pulling her into bed I see him more lashing out at her and saying things he does not mean and Buffy running in Buffy fashion and my friend thinks they will sleep together but I say after the last time with Buffy trying that she learned it was not the way to go so think she would not do that because she knows William would hate himself for ruining her and she would not let him do that to himself.

A dinner is riding on this as to who comes the closest in plot guessing :P

Author's Response: Uh oh, tananore. So you mean that no matter how the next chapter pans out, someone is going to lose that bet, huh? Well, I'm not saying anything either way. I just hope you enjoy it. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: journey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 04:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Makes sense though why future Spike would hate her if he had these memories and Buufy looking so much like his past Elizabeth. I'm just guessing but I really look forward to seeing what you do with them next.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for taking the time to tell me so. :)

Reviewer: I hear the bells Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 04:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Oh wow I am not sure even how to write a review on this but by the time I got to this part I was more then half in love with Will and if Buffy does not want him I'll take him!

I love this really love it
its the best spuffy story I have read

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I hear the bells. You cannot imagine how much it means to me to hear you say that. I hope you continue to enjoy the story and offer me your feedback. :)

Reviewer: SilentOne2k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

This is a cool story I don't think I've ever read a William story before that would tell the story in a way Joss would in giving him a normal everyday guy kind of heart. This story surprised me in how well its written and how in depth all the characters are it really is like watching a good play or a romantic film cause its very visual to the point you feel like your there. Do you have more stories on another board I'd love to read more of your stuff you have a great gift here.



Author's Response: I've always been such a huge fan of William (he is, after all, a part of Spike) and I was disappointed how few Williams fics there really are. If you like the character, I suggest reading Eurydice's "Legions of True Hearts;" it's wonderful. Although not a bit like mine, it did inspire me to give William a voice and a life in fanfic. Thank you for the review. :)

Reviewer: Julumba Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Noooooooooooooooo don't go in there it won't go well whatever happens!!!!

This fic will give me a heart attack I just know it jejejejejejejjejjeje

Author's Response: ::hands Julumba a paper bag to breathe into:: Another update is on its way soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: entrenous88 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Awwww poor William he's so hurt and confused his heart was just ripped out and poor Buffy she knows she screwed up in the biggest way ever. Bringing him the book may be a mistake if he wakes up cause he will probably says things veery Spike like and it will destroy her as well. Must add more I'm dying here which is a great writer talent.



Author's Response: I'm burning up the keyboard, writing, so hopefully the new chapter will be up very soon. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: XxxCalistaxxX Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 04:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

My favorite line

(((But I want it with you. I want it as I have never wanted it with anyone.)))

I think she is just scared given her history and it makes total sense she'd say no given that she's not even sure she will be ther tomorrow or the next day. It was hard to see William so shattered but I have hope for them still :) Best chapter yet.


Author's Response: Why, thank you, XxxCalistaxxX. I'm so glad you feel that way. :)

Reviewer: DeltaNightHawk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 03:53 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

I see why he shut down and shut her out poo guys had his soul ripped out she was his one true love and happiness and of course he wanted more he wanted it all he wanted her. He thinks she did not want him and now drunk he won't realize her being in his room is not a dream or real. Oh gosh can you not sleep for the next few days and just keep writing? The suspense is killing me.

Author's Response: lol. I've actually cut my sleep-time down to about 3 hours a night because this story is just haunting me, and I'm writing almost non stop. I'm so glad you enjoyed the new chapter and I hope you like the next one when it is posted. Thank you for the review. :)

Reviewer: Tears of the Moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 03:48 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Oh you can see her giving him the book is the same as her giving him his heart I was gonna cry with him at that part. My heart bleeds for both of these two tonight and yet I know the best is yet to come I have faith!

Best fan-fic on the net!

Author's Response: What a nice thing to say, Tears of the Moon--especially given all the wonderful fics out there. Thank you for taking the time to review. You've really made my day with this one. :)

Reviewer: Aurorah Borealis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 03:45 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Oh poor Elizabeth and poor William I see both sides in this and it's so hard on them both. You just know something epic and earth shattering will happen next for the both of them.

Author's Response: You certainly are right about that, Aurorah. I just hope you like where it leads. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Still_A_Thrill Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 03:43 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Buffy Buffy Buffy you said you would not seduce him and yet I think that in a drunken state William won't know the difference in his dreams and reality only I hope for his sake he doesn't attack her or wait maybe thats when she runs off on the horse ok now I must know!!! Argh! The torments of following a great writer your always grabbing their coat tails for more heehee.

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hang onto my coat tails all you want, Still_A_Thrill. I don't mind and a new chapter is afoot. Thanks for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: SpikesDeb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 03:40 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Oh God I need a tissue or maybe a whole box. And Buffy going into his room will lead you to a place you both might not want to be the morning after. Outstanding job on this I was getting caught on ont the two chapters and I'm just so blown away and that never happens. Love your stroy telling skills.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the new chapter, SpikesDeb. Thank you for taking the time to tell me so. :)

Reviewer: Mephisto Waltz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 03:37 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

He closed his eyes, a man steeling himself against the blow. “She said no,” he whispered to himself. Very softly, but she heard. She reached out to touch his arm


Oh God even I cried for William here.

Excellent writing



Author's Response: Thank you, Mephisto. I'm flattered you think so. :)

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 03:29 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Please write more soon I love this story so much!

Author's Response: I'm working on Chapter Twenty-Five now and will get it posted ASAP. Thank you for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: GDO Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Oh, my heart breaks for Buffy and William. Hope Buffy does't do something stupid.

Author's Response: Buffy is known for stupid--er, brash--decisions. But her heart really is in the right place here. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 02:29 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Such wonderful heartache. I hope Buffy can fix it.

Author's Response: Well, she will certainly do her best. :)

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 02:15 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Poor William. *sighs* And poor Buffy, the girl just thinks too much I think and then she doesn't think enough, if that makes any sense at all.
What a wonderful tale you're weaving. Wonderfully written, captivating, simply perfect. And God you have quite a knack to leave me wanting for more. *lol* Can't wait to read what else you have in store for us. Thanks for the mazing chapter!

Author's Response: That makes perfect sense, Dusty273, and that is how I see her, as well. Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story and I hope you continue to do so. :)

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Oh nooooo! Buffy fixing things can't be good!! I am still loving this fic!!!!! Although, I gotta tell you ... I am on pins and needles waiting for Angelus to pop up again. You just know he is out there waiting...and Buffy not in shape to take him on! It gives me the wiggins knowing he could show up anytime. I feel like I need to hide my eyes but then I couldn't read the story!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like the story. :)

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Great to see an update for this. :) Such a sad chapter, and so depressing! Those poor two, from different times-- and in love! The only way I can see this working is for William to be turned, and find his way back to Buffy in the future-- IT HAS TO BE!

Author's Response: Hmmm....I'm not saying one word. ;)

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Oh my god that was absolutely heartbreaking!!! I really do hope she can fix it!! Fabulous update as usual and I can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Thank you, squawks. I'm glad you liked it, and as always, I appreciate your taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: CutieSaiyajin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

I have to admit that I squealed happily to myself when I noticed you'd updated again. That being said....

OMG! I just want Buffy and William to be happy so badly. Buffy better make things right between them. However, given the way things have been going, I have a feeling we've a while to go yet before things are hunky dory. I feel like chewing my fingernails from nervousness, lol.

Here's hoping for another speedy update! ;)

Author's Response: All signs are pointing to a prompt update. Then again, you never can tell. But I'll certainly do my best. :) Thanks as always for taking the time to review!

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