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Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 01:26 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

I understand why she said no, but no.

I wonder how she will fix it.

Author's Response: Knowing Buffy, it will be unconvential to say the least. ;)

Reviewer: mwfte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 01:22 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

I feel so spoiled; you've posted another chapter already!

There was some really beautiful imagery in this: "Then, her brain—her stupid, know-it-all brain that knew nothing—spoke up and dashed her happiness like so much dandelion fluff, leaving it to float away, ghostlike, in the breeze." What a wonderful way of describing something as ephemeral as happiness.

While reading this chapter, I found myself leaning forward in anticipation of what would come next. I am absolutely in love with this storty.

*Begs for another chapter* :-)

Author's Response: Your review has just made my day, thank you! :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 01:21 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

NOOOOOO DAMNIT, WHY DID SHE SAY NO?!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she should have said yes and then they could be together. i LOVE this story soooooo much and am sooooooo happy u updated. i wish she would have said yes or that she would have explained why and he would habve listened, i really hope that she talks to him and that they make up, theyre meant to be together. also i hope everything works out well and that she doesnt get sent back to sunnydale. please update as soon as u can, im DYING, DYING!!!!! to read the next chapter and see wat happens between them. thanx so much

Author's Response: She said no because she is a stupid, stupid girl. lol. Seriously, though, she is just confused as to what she wants and what it best for them both. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and I'll try to be prompt on the next update. As always, thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Dee81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Due to the fact that I just started reading this story yesterday (so you could imagine how late I was up until), seeing a new chapter tonight has made my entire day.

Bless you for this update. I loved it, and I'm -so- sad for William for thinking she's rejecting him, and for Buffy because of her situation. I want her to be with William, but then Spike...and gah, you've got a great plot here. I can't even put into words.

I'll just say this story is very believable in every way possible: conflict, voices, emotions, etc. I really see their relationship clearly and I could understand as to why they're so in love.

Excellent work.





Author's Response: Thank you, Dee81. I'm glad you like it, and thank you so much for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Sara M Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Have I mentioned that I want to have your children? I loooove this story so much and can't express how excited I am that you are updating it regularly and quickly now. I read it at your site a long time ago and watched forever waiting for it to continue, hoping against hope. And here it is! It's so wonderful. Please keep it going and updating -- it's one of my very favorites. Thanks. :-)

Author's Response: I was at the world's worst job for a while, and I never had time to write, which was why I went so long without updating. Luckily, that is all behind me now. I can promise you, I will work on this story until it is finished. Thanks so much for the review! :)

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